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FanFic!page 9 *NEW*part 4 updated! ENJOY!

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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 9:00pm | IP Logged

Sorry I m doin it for 1st time tell me if it is not good! And its confusin! Bear with me!

The story begins with Prem coming to US and his dad's friend (aaki's dad) come to pick him up.

Dad: hey Prem.

Prem: namaste Uncle. How are you?

Dad: I am fine beta.

Prem: Aur aunty nahin aai?

Dad: nahin! Woh tumhare liye gajar ka haluwa bana rahi hein!

Prem: wow chal te hain mujhe plane ka khana pasand nahin aaya!

Dad: Let's go.

(They sit in the car and then drive, so now they are in the way talking)

Prem: Ghar mein sab kaise hain?

Dad: sab thik hain! Aaki tumhe bahut miss karte hain!

Prem: (feelin shy) aww! Meine usse 15 years tak nahin dekha! Abhi to bahut badi ho gayi hogi!

Dad: haan! Tumlog 9 barsh ke the jab hum log yaha aaye the!

(they don't speak to each other for a long time and listen to music. They reach the home. They take off their luggage and then head towards the house. Aaki is impaciently waiting for them. They knock the door and then mukti (aaki's step sister) opens the door.)

Mukti: (Feeling shy) hello!

Prem: hi! Can I know who this is?

Mukti: I Am Mukti Aaki's step sister

Prem: Oh! I see! (He stares @ Dad)

Dad: (feels uncomfortable ) where is Aaki

Mukti: (evil look) I don't know! Anyways I never know where she is! Probably she is in her room.

Dad: prem beta jao aur usse mil lo! Usse achha lagega!

(Aaki is in her own way! She is listenin to Grillz and then putting her make up…..)

Aaki: (Rob the jewelery story tell them to make a grill..)

(prem is staring at her and he thinks that he is weird! Hez in the door staring at her and aaki doesn't know that prem is in the door)

Prem: hmm…..(smiles and coughs)

Aaki: yes

Prem: hey!

Aaki: (yells) chorrr

Prem: stops her by putting his hand in her mouth! I m not a chor I am Prem.

Aaki: Ohh….I! I ! I ! am so sorryyy!

(prem and aaki stares at each other)

To be continued!

do reply!



Edited by aakriti262 - 10 April 2006 at 3:39pm

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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
LOL ohh my my my
what have you done LOL
Clap keep it up Clap \
i hope that mukti doesn't come on way
but your stroy said taht pream and muki fan fin
changed it and make aki and pream
so that good
Tongue

Edited by Poonampatel16 - 18 March 2006 at 10:27pm
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aint it cute??? Embarrassed
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hmmm......i should!
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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 12:57am | IP Logged
LOL You got me laughing so hard...I thought it was a Mukti-Prem fan-fic but its a Aaki-Prem fan -fic....very nice and interesting, I hope ur evil stepsister doesn't end up marrying ur prem Wink LOL
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akki really its funny wow i cannot controll my laughing oh GOD. LOL

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