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PTHHT (FANFIC)Hurry Pg. 35 NOTE!!!!!! (Page 9)

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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
great story! Big smile

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plzzzz continue...... i just can't wait! Tongue
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Recap
Everyone runs upstairs to check all the rooms and Dhruv asks Vedika why she didn't go upstairs.

Part 10 (YAY!! 10 parts)

Ved: tumne kaha tha na ke neeche do (2) rooms hain?? To

hum dono neeche rahnege!!


Dhruv: Par….(ved interrupts)

Ved: Par kya Dhruv? Issi bahane se main neeche kitchen ke

aur T.V. ke paas rahongi na ??

Dhruv : Oh to tum tumhara hi faida dekh rahi ho ? (ved

nods) to phir meain Suraj ke saath hi bunk karonga…..

Ved: Nahin Nahin, agar tum chale jaoge to phir mean akeli

ho jaongi na??

Dhruv: to phir tum yeh kyun nahi kethi ke tumhe meri

zarooraat (need) hain?? Aur tumhe akele mein daar lagta

hain??

Ved: DHRUV!!! Maine yeh to nahin kaha, aur main yeh

hargiz nahin kahongi

Dhurv: to phir theek hain, main upar jaa raha hoon

Ved: fine ruko, Dhurv, mujhe tumhari bahot zarooraat hain

aur mujhe akele main bahot daar lagta hain to tum pls

maat jana. (she almost gets tears at the thought of being

alone)

Dhruv: Hey (softly) tum ro (cry) maat u know I can't

stand it when you have tears. Don't worry main tumhe

choor kar kahin nahin jaonga. (they are only talking

about rooms but this is what Dhruv really feel, If only

Ved realized that) Dhruv is hugging her to make her stop

crying and then Rudra comes downstairs.

Rudra: tum dono gale kyun lag rahe ho?

So they unhug but Ved sill holds onto Dhruv's arm just to

make Rudra jealous (she doesn't like him anymore but she

is hurt at his behavior)

Ved: Kyun tumhe koi problem hain? Main jise chaho use

gale lag sakhti hoon tumhe kya hain??

Dhruv feels a little uncomfortable in the verbal fight

between Ved and Rudra.

Dhruv: mujhe kitchen mein jana hain…(trys to walk away

but Ved grabs his hand)

Ved: tum kahaan jaa rahe ho? Main bhi saath chalti hoon

So they both leave from there leaving poor rudra so

confused about his feelings between Vedika and Niharika.

While the DhruVedika moments were going on downstair,

upstairs was chaos because they were all choosing rooms

and everyone was FIGHTING!! In the end ….Rudra's room was

in the corner next to Niks, and her room was next to

Suraj's and his was next to Tara's room which was in the

corner. Downstairs Ved picks the room with the bigger

bathroom. So this leaves humare bechara Dhruv who has no

choice in bedrooms. Then after everyone unpacks they all

come down to the family room.

Tara: aab kya karen bhaiyya??

Dhruv: Kya karen? Hum aab sone jayenge chalo sab log

Ved: dhruv?? Chill out aabhi to sirf…..dus baje hain!!

Hum saab kuch masti karenge!!!

Dhruv: (suspicious) Kaisi masti??

Suraj: chalo na hum sab antakshri khelte hain??

Niks: Antakshri??

Rudra: Haan iss mein mazaa ayega


So they start the game of antakshri in the next part!! Will anyone confess their love through song?? We will have to wait and watch!!!
That's all from me
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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
oh my god Embarrassed ........... your story is best! its way way better than ekta!!! Dead Clap i can't wait for the 11th part!!!
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Originally posted by bisma_4eva!

oh my god Embarrassed ........... your story is best! its way way better than ekta!!! Dead Clap i can't wait for the 11th part!!!


Thanx soo much for all the encouragement!!!
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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
WOW, that was a great update....ure a really good writer..cont soon!! keep up the good work Clap Clap Clap
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Posted: 29 April 2006 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
congrats on making it to the tenth part!!!!!
great parts and i can't wait for more!!! Tongue
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Posted: 29 April 2006 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
PLZZZZZZZZZZZ   PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE!!!!!!>...... JUST CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!

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