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PTHHT (FANFIC)Hurry Pg. 35 NOTE!!!!!! (Page 33)

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Hope a romantic scene is coming up
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I'll continue this ff tom!!!! So look out for it!!!
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Hey everyone....I know I promised to update this ff today....but I'm kind of busy so I'm gonna have Kritika aka. Moderngirl update for me..... so look out for it sometime tonight!!!



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Part 26

Ved worried

She runs over to Dhruv

Dhruv (sees she's worried) Ved Kya hua????

Ved (looks sad) Dhruv, humhe abhi hospital jaana parega??

Dhruv (confused) hospital, lekin kyon???

Ved (hurried voice) Dhruv, Nih ka accident hogaya, voh log abhi hospital mein hain!!

Dhruv (worries) hospital!! Chalo!!

Dhruv and Ved both get into dhruvs car and leave.

Dhruvs driving slow but Ved getting impatient!!

She sits up on her seat

Ved (annoyed) Dhruv tum gadi (car) Jaldi nahi chala sakthe!!!

Dhruv (trying his best) I cant Ved!! The speed limits 30!!

Ved (mumbles) It not like you follow the rules anyways!!(sits back down and looks along the streets as Dhruv drives)

Dhruv concentrates on his driving

The car ahead of them is going very slowly!!!Hes trying to pass it but theres not enough room

Ved just looking out the window

She smiles as she sees a couple hugging intimately

But a few seconds later her smile fades as she sees the couple closely

Ved (shocked) Rudra aur Nih!!!! (looks at Dhruv) Dhruv gadi roko!!!

Dhruv (thinking she's going mental) kya??

Ved (angry) maine kaha gadi roko!!!

Dhruv stops the car

Ved hurriedly get out without saying a word and starts walking across the street

Dhruvs shocked

He quickly gets out and follows her

Dhruv (talks to Ved as he runs after her)Ved kya kar rahi ho!! Humhe hospital jaana hai!!

Ved doesn't respond

She finally gets to the couple

Ved (loudly) Tum dono yahan??? (just then Dhruv gets there and is shocked to see Rdura-nih there)

Nih (has a "busted" look on her face) tum dono yahan??

Dhruv (confused) haan lekin aap log yahan kya kar rahe ho!! You had an accident na!!

Ved gives him a look!!

Ved (angry) ok, ab sach sach batao!! Yeh sab kya chal raha hai..nih tumne mujhse jhoot kyon bola!!

Nih (lets out a sigh) ok Ved, we just wanted you and Dhruv to get out of the house and spend some time alone, so we lied!! Iam sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you!!

Ved face changes as she hears nih talk about Dhruv and her

She looks at Dhruv whose looking at the ground!!

Rudra (trying to change the subject) jab tum dono yahan thak agaye tho kyon na hum sab dinner saath mein karle??

Ved nods

Dhruv (smiles) haan bhaiya!! Mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai!!

Rudra and nih laugh

All go in the restaurant and order food

Dhruv starts talking about Rudra's habits when he was younger

Nih laughs as she hears them

Ved keeps looking at Dhruv with an odd expression

A bit later

The food arrives

They all eat and talk

Dhruv looks at Ved as she eats as he remembers the sweet moments they've had but just as Ved looks up at him he looks back down

After a bit Ved looks at Dhruv

Nih notices, she feels sad and helpless

After dinner

Rudra orders desserts!!

Rudra (tells the waiter) I want a chocolate sundae, with strawberries, fudge and gummy bears and also get me a milkshake, uhh make it large!!

Ved, Dhruv and nih are just staring at Rudra

Rudra (looks at them) kya?? Tum sab dessert nahi khaoge??

Ved smiles and gives her order as well as Dhruv and nih

Their order comes and everyone eats!!

Rudra gouges down the food withing a few mins..nih stunned

Nih(whispers) Rudra tum kitna khaoge??

Rudra (gives nih a look) Jaan, roz thori na itna khata hoon! (smiles)

Just then the music in the back starts playing

The other couples get on the floor and start dancing

Nih looks cutely at them

Rudra (notices nih looking at the other couples as he puts his hands foreward) nih, will you dance with me??

Nih smiles as both go up

They go on the stage and dance closely

Both share some cute moments

While back at the table

Ved and Dhruv are left alone

Both are feeling awkward

Dhruv (tries to make convo) tho Ved (she looks up) Tumhe yahan ka khana pasand aaya??

Ved (smiles) haan, bahut acha tha!!

Dhruv smiles as he looks at the couples dancing on the stage!!

Ved looks at them too

Dhruv (looks at Ved) uhh, Ved..mere saath dance karogi??

Ved looks at him awkwardly

Dhruv (more reassuring)umm you know, as friends!!

Ved smiles and agrees

Both go on the dance floor

The songs not too slow so both dance separately

its "kitna pagal dil hai" from andaaz

Ved loves the song so she has a good time

Dhruv keeps staring at her as he dances

Rudra-nih look at them and smile as they dance

The music turns slow

its "madhosh dil ki dhadkan"

Dhruv moves close and holds Ved waist

Ved startled but She doesn't say anything and just goes along with him

Dhruv holds her as they sway back and forth

He keeps looking at Ved

Ved looks up

She sees him staring at her

They're eyes are locked

Both keep staring at each other sweetly

Scene freezes on their face!

Sorry guys..I hope it wasnt to boring Ouch
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Great Job Kritika!!! I absolutely loved it and thanx soooo much for continuing it for me!!! I'll continue maybe on thursday!!!

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