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PTHHT (FANFIC)Hurry Pg. 35 NOTE!!!!!! (Page 16)

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Posted: 15 May 2006 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Sorry.....but this one will also have to be pretty short....I have a mountain of homework to go through...so it's gonna be a little short.

Part 13
Suraj wakes up and goes to Tara's room and since her door

is unlocked he goes inside. Tara is still in a light

sleep.

Suraj: Tara, Tara, my jaan pls wake up...mujhe bahot

bhook lage hain..aur aab yeh renvoated farmhouse mein to

yeh bhi nahin pata ke kitchen kahan hain...Tara!!!

Tara slowly moves around and gently opens her eyes.

Tara: hmmm...Suraj....tum mere sapne main kab aaye???

Suraj touches her face with his hand

Suraj: Arre meri ma...main tumhare sapne mein nahin

hoon....tum neend se jag gayi ho...

Tara: KYA????? Tp hir tum mere kamre mein kyun aaye??

She takes her bed sheets and covers herself up bcuz she

is wearing a tank top with capri pj pants.

Suraj: main yahaan isliye aaya kyun ki mujhe bahot bhook

lage hain aur mujhe yahaan kuch banana (make) nahin aata

Tara: to phir tum Rudra bhaiyya ya Dhruv Bhaiyya ko bhi

jaga sakhthe the na??

Suraj: Oh haan.....main usse utha deta hoon...tab taak

tum tayarr ho jao..

Tara: mujhe tumne khamakha utha diya na??

Suraj: Sorry jaan....

He goes closer to her face and kisses her on the cheek

which makes all her anger evaporate.

Next Scene (Downstairs)

Suraj is humming as he goes down the stairs.... Vedika

and Dhruv are still asleep. When he reaches Vedika's room

he knocks three times before getting a response..when he

doesn't hear anything he walks in..

Suraj: Arre??? Vedika to yahaan nahin hain...to phir woh

kahan gayi hogi....hmm shayad woh hum sab ke liya

breakfast bana rahi hogi...

So he walks off to Dhruv's room...he knocks three times

on his door... and gets no response....

Meanwhile in the room Vedika has her arms around Dhruv's

chest upper body and he has his right hand around her

shoulders...........they hear the knocking.....

Ved: (thinks) yeh kaun hain jo subah subah mujhe

pareshaan kar raha hain?? Aur ......

She opens her eyes and finds Dhruv sleeping next to

her...

Veds: OMG....main yahaan kaise aayi...

She remembers the thunderstorm...and when she hears the

knocking she is frightened by who's at the door....

What will happen next?? Will Ved successfully hide...and what will be Dhruv's reaction to his position??Watch out for that in the next part!!!!!
Lotsa Luv,
Meera

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Posted: 15 May 2006 at 6:50pm | IP Logged
AWWWWWWW. Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

GOOD LUCK ON UR WORK!!! PLZ CONT AS SOON AS YOU CAN MEERA>>IAM DYING TO READ THE NEXT PART!! Tongue Tongue
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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 7:25am | IP Logged
Great Update!!! Thanks!!!
Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you get through your homework OK!!!...Good Luck. And Thanks again for the update.


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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Please continue it is getting more interesting.
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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
aww...Great part!! Tongue
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Awesome job! Plz cont. as soon as u can, but still do ur hw, school's first
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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Hey everyone!!! once again....A small update specially for all of you!!!! I'll con't again soon!!!!

Recap

Suraj is knocking on Dhruv's door, while Dhruv is still

asleep and Vedika is wondering where to hide…

Part 14

Veds: OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG aab mein kahan jao…aur kaise

jao? Dhruv ne to mujhe bilkul kaas ke pakra hain… Embarrassed

She tries to lightly take his arm off and while she's

doing that she realizes that he's not wearing a shirt…

Ved (thinks): yeh ladka kitna pagaal hain?? Isne shirt

kyun nahi pahni hian?? Oh haan kal raat ko woh par (read)

raha tha jab main iske kamre mein aayi thi dari huvi..

(knocking continues)

Ved: OH god…Dhruv uttho…(she shakes him)

Dhruv (half asleep): hmm..Ma…sone do na.. (so he grabs Ved

tighter)

Ved(shouting) : Dhruv Raizada…tum aabhi ke aabhi uth jao…

Angry

Dhruv wakes up completely shocked!!!( but he's still

holding her)

Dhurv: tum ….tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho….Actually nvm…I

remember (knocking) lekin room ke baar (outside) kaun

hain??

Suraj hears Ved shouting

Suraj: Ved tum Dhruv ke room mein kya kaar rahi ho?? Ruko

main aata hoon….

Suraj burst open Dhruv's locked door by kicking it open….

Now what will be his reaction to seeing them in such a compromising position????
Wait and Watch for the next part!!!!!

Meera

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 May 2006 at 6:37pm
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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
OMG, GREAT SUSPENSE Clap ...
But Meera hun..Do you by any chance imagine you in place of Ved cuz in one of the sentances where its supposed to say her you said ME LOL LOL LOL

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