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THE KING OF THEIVES updated pg.23..8/20 (Page 8)

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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 11:28pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by seeragurl07

its great. i'm luvin' it. Clap

thankuuuBig smile

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part 1

Great she comes back today…. Big whoop… she acts like my mom.. is she my sister or my mom…uuuh now I hav to live with her again.. I hate my life!!!

With that a disgusted kripa starts her long journey to the airport…

                                           *******

I finally get to go on my first mission…. Dad finally trusts me now…I am finally going to beable to prov myself.. I luv myself. Angads get himself ready for his first con job and starts out to prove his worth

                                           *******

The drive to the airport was long and tiring… you had to go  through the whole city… and mumbai was a big city so it took about an hour to get there.. kripa hated long drives.. she always fell asleep on them and they wer really boring too especially if you didn't have anyone to talk to… so kripa just sighed and turned on the music.

Beautiful soul-jesse mcartney

 don't want another pretty face

I don't want just anyone to hold

I don't want my love to go to waste

I want you and your beautiful soul

You're the one I wanna chase

You're the one I wanna hold

I wont let another minute go to waste

I want you and your beautiful soul

 

I know that you are something special

To you I'd be always faithful

I want to be what you always needed

Then I hope you'll see the heart in me

 I don't want another pretty faceI don't want just anyone to holdI don't want my love to go to waste I want you and your beautiful soulYou're the one I wanna chase You're the one I wanna holdI wont let another minute go to waste I want you and your beautiful soul Your beautiful soul, yeahYou might need time to think it overBut im just fine moving forwardI'll ease your mind If you give me the chanceI will never make you cry c'mon lets try I don't want another pretty faceI don't want just anyone to holdI don't want my love to go to waste I want you and your beautiful soulYou're the one I wanna chase You're the one I wanna holdI wont let another minute go to waste I want you and your beautiful soul Am I crazy for wanting youBaby do you think you could want me too I don't wanna waste your timeDo you see things the way I do I just wanna know if you feel it tooThere is nothing left to hide I don't want another pretty faceI don't want just anyone to holdI don't want my love to go to waste I want you and your beautiful soulYou're the one I wanna chase You're the one I wanna holdI wont let another minute go to waste I want you and your beautiful soulKripa was touched by the song and wished there was some1 who would sing that for her… she currently had a boyfriend.. He was special but not exactly soul mate material…. Again kripa sighed and concentratd on the road again….                                             *******Angad decided to go somewhere far for his first job… somewhere where not a lot of people knew him …. Afterall his father was a prettyt big businessman,  his name came out in page 3 like everyday…Angad loved long drives… especially ones by the beach.. he loved the cool sea breeze on his face…. Angad looked up and enjoyed the beauty all around him leading him straight ot the biggest most mpresive airport of mumbai… coming up-two people who hate each other find even more ways to hate each other... what happens when two people who hate each other start hating each other even more??? keep reading to find out.. hey pplzi am soooo sorrry 4 the short part but i promise ill write a long part if u guyz comment so plz commentand hope u like t'lu yallz himani  

 



Edited by Sour Skittles - 20 March 2006 at 9:41pm
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
great part! Cant ait for the next part so cont. soon!
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
Clap WOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW THIS STORY IS AMAZING I LOVED IT CONTINUE SOOOOOOOONNNN

LUV ALEENA
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 10:36pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by amneetkaur_24

great part! Cant ait for the next part so cont. soon!

thankxxxxBig smile

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 10:38pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Night Maiden

Clap WOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW THIS STORY IS AMAZING I LOVED IT CONTINUE SOOOOOOOONNNN

LUV ALEENA

thankuuuu aleena!!! glad u liok it!!

luv himaniBig smile

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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
can't wait 4 the next part.ur fic is very diff.i liked the casting
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 11:45pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by jasminerahul

can't wait 4 the next part.ur fic is very diff.i liked the casting

thanx... it took me time to make the cast because i kept putting young people as the parentz..lolzLOL

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