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THE KING OF THEIVES updated pg.23..8/20 (Page 28)

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Posted: 09 August 2006 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
Himani sis that was SO WONDERFUL SO UNEXPECTED! and hey hey hey cant wait to read more of the letter and hte secret YAY Clap Clap great job!
luv ya
ur sis Tongue
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Originally posted by ruby89

Himani sis that was SO WONDERFUL SO UNEXPECTED! and hey hey hey cant wait to read more of the letter and hte secret YAY Clap Clap great job!
luv ya
ur sis Tongue
Ruby

thx ruby sisTongue i think ill finish the letter by fridayTongue

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wow!!! nice twist. continue soon. can't wait.

shaheera
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great plz cont soon. Clap
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thx shaharamba Hug
thx mehandikhanHug
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hey i just read the whole story and it was relay good you have to continue soon it is a realy good story and relay diffrent i realy like it (continue soon) Clap
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part 11

" uncle you brought us up to turn us into thieves? That's ridiculous!"

raj sat on the couch with a sigh and motion for both of them to sit beside him

" long ago when I was a little youngr than you about 11-12 we had just about enough food to feed me and my 2 brothers..my parents often went to sleep on an empty stomach. Well anyways so all the children in our little colony had big dreams.someone wanted to go abroad.someone wanted to become a pilot.some a doctor.but I..i wanted to become rich. I wanted to create a new world in which I was ruler. I held all the powers of the world. MONEY. So when I turned 18 I ran away from home and came to MUMBAI.there I met your aunty.she was very rich and got this house a lot of cash,clothes etc. when she came. Then I started my plan. I would need two young people to do my work. I would need a big underground secret place to hide the goods. I would need power. So for the last 10 years while youb two have been growing up I have been setting up a full fledged company for you. Now you will do this for this uncle of yourz wont you?"

jay and rahul looked at each other as if their uncle had suddenlygone mad but they knew they owed him their everythin so without thinking they agreed to do whatever raj wanted them to do

coming up- rubyLOL who is she? is she a gem? or a person?keep guessing

luv

himaniTongue



Edited by Sour Skittles - 20 August 2006 at 11:22pm
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Posted: 21 August 2006 at 9:08am | IP Logged
aawww wonderful part sis Clap Clap Clap as i recall "ruby" was suppose to be told about in this part Embarrassed LOL but i guess we'll have to wait for good stuff for later Wink
and heyyy sis wednesday coming up too soon Tongue LOL ur gna loose jst admit it! LOL
lotsa luv
cant wait for "ruby"
-Ruby LOL

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