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THE KING OF THEIVES updated pg.23..8/20 (Page 24)

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Posted: 08 June 2006 at 12:42pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by amneetkaur_24

awesome part!!! They both crack me up! Can't wait to read more! So continue soon!

lol thx amneetkaur

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Posted: 08 June 2006 at 12:45pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by muqualp

finally himani! great part! like how they dont like each other at all! cont soon when u can!

thx muqu

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great plz cont soon. Clap
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hey it was a wonderful part Big smile
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Originally posted by Mehandikhan

great plz cont soon. Clap


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Originally posted by **lover**

hey it was a wonderful part Big smile

thx im glad u like itBig smile

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hello pplzzzz

sorry haven't cont for a long timeeee…iI wasn't sure how to cont this fan-fic..and I don't think to many ppl read it going to end it in 12 parts part 20 willl be the last part…my other fan-fic,THE MISSION will also be ending in 1-2 parts...i hope this part is long enough….. keep commeting..




for the next couple of days that's how things went angad and kripa would do cute things for each other but curse them while doing it..angad would buy kripa a bouquet of roses but he would put many splinters in it and when she hurt her finger he would suck the blood but purposely bite her finger……kripa did everything in her power to get time alone in angads rooma nd angad was trying to be alone in kripas room but neither of them could do anthing about itt………..desprately kripa tried her last string

" angad tumhara room kitna ganda hai"

" sooooo ur point is.."

" well I was thinking id clean it for u..while ur at football practice"

"umm ok..thx mom will b soo happy"

" anythingfor u hun"

they both turned around and cursd the other person

a-"idiot,stupid she loves me hahahahahah shez even clean my room"

k- angad hun ur soooooooo dead"

they turn around give each other a weird smile and run for their lives…..


in bed angad was thinking about his life whens Suddnly kripa came in his mind

 he rembered the kiss the moments she and him and spent together in the last couple of days

" we do have sum chemistry but who cares all that matters is that I get my money..but what im doin is wrong …I mean she really loves me and shes even cleaning my room for me……………he smirks at that thought….and then suddenly a tubrlight goes off in his brain …..affcource was ttoooooooo goooooood..totall fool proooooff..


ring ring ring

" kOn haiiiiii im sleepin"

" kripa itz me angad"

"ANGAD!!, u realize wht time it is!"

" yea wo actually I wanted to thank u for clenain ur roon"

" ok angad ur can I go to sleep plzzz"

" no..wait..i wanna repay u."

" really angad itz ok..i like cleanin"
"no kripa et me just clean ur room for u…plzzz"

" angad my room is reallllly clean u cant clean anything!.."

" no itz not kripa look at ur celin fan how much dsust there is on it"

kripa saw no dust on the ceiling infact she ddint even have a fan

" u kn ow wht point in arguing with u..if u wanna clean my room so bad u can doo that ok…"

" thxxxxxx kripaaaaa ur the best!!"

" jeez I didn't know u liked to clean that much..but w/e ok goodd night"

" good night kripa"muah""

><><><><><><><> <><><

next day

kripa and angad go to each others house to clean each others room(lol..imagine ur gf or bf doin that)

*angads house*

kripa enters angads house secretly( dosent want angads parents to recognize her)….she goes up to his room and she is totallya amazed it looks like heaven with everything tv, music system, gym….everyrthing…but wheres the painting??

k- damn it yeh painting kahan hain!!! And she keeps looking everyhere in his cupbard under his bed..when she hears a knock on the door

" angad beta..ur still here u thought u already left"

kripa thinking-o ****!! Now wht do I say!!

" um aunty angad left..itz priya..angads friend from school"

" oh hello priya…..angad never told me about ypou….can u open the door plz beta"

" umm aunty wo kya haina ki angad a nd I um….had ..a bet..and I lost soi hav to clean his room"

" o god yeh angad bhi naa..but open the door"

" I cant!!"

" what "

" wo kya hai na aunty I promised angad that no one could see the room until its spik and span"

" itz ok beta im his mom..i can see the room"

" no aunty just wait a while plzz"

" ok fine..biii."

" bye aunty.."

kripa gives a sigh of relief" thank god!"

kripa kept looking and finally she found it after sumtime…..

*kripas house*

Angad had the same luck as her room was soo clean.. it had been really easy.. it only took him ten minutes and he decided to look around a bit to kill time…He wasjust lloking around when he spotted a small black book on kripas bedside…he picked up the book and started reading it… it was kripas diary and it had everuything in it….

He laid on her bed and ruffled through the pages

She had a crush on him since the 3rd grade until she learnt that he was her family enemy..angad found out everything about her life..her disliked, her crushes,..her friends..her school problems everything..he was going to put the book away when one entry caught his eye…it was the day he had asked her out..

" omg angad asked me out today!!!AS IF!!Duhhhh I know hes only doing this for the treasure key..soryy huin but im smarter than that…ee but angad dosent know what I want.. soo I can get the key from right under his nose and he wont even notice…and angad will get some random key that he can go treasure hunting for..hahahhahahahhaa….i am a genius……."

Angad was shocked!! Kripa knew what he was doing and the key he held in his hand right now was not real..


Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.


Edited by shahidlover24 - 27 June 2006 at 9:56pm
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nice part

plz cont soon

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