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THE KING OF THEIVES updated pg.23..8/20 (Page 20)

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PART 6

Kripas room was special because of her carpet and angads room was special because of the painting but how did they know about each others room? Well itz very simple….

In the beginning  when angads  great great grandfather made it big in the thief industry he decided to keep all his fortune in one room. The room would hold everything he and his forefafthers had everstolen with all the money they had earned.The door of this room would be secured by the strongest metal.. the door would have two keys and to open the door you had to insert both the keys at the same time……when kripas great grandfather heard about it.. his mischievous nature couldn't hold back and he went on a mission to steal this pair of keys to the whole khanna empire…Mr. Sharma was able to steal one key but the other one stll remained with the khannas..since then to get the other key has been the goal of the sharmas and khannas …the khannas knew that the sharmas kept the key in a special carpet and the sharmas knew that the khannas kept their kkey in a special painting but uptil know none of them could get a hold on either the painting or the carpet……….but todays generation of thieves was one step ahead of the game………..

"kripa….wait for me"

yelled  sam as she ran down the school hallway to cach up wid kripa

" hey sam…. Waz up"

" u kno I feel really bad doing this.. I mean I know ive been doing this for like 16 years now but still"

" well you gota give a little to gain alittle..plus I know he and you are like best friends now..its not fake"

" yeah I know but  it still strted with bad intentions right?"

" oh common sam..anyway tell me anything new?"

" yeah well u know how you told me to be on the lookout for a special painting…well I was helping aunty redecorate angads room and she put this really different kinda painting on his wall"

" hmmm really…what waz it like?"

" well it waz of dis old village…blahblahblah"

" ong r u serious!!! We did it sam!!! The thing weve been waiting for for 16 years iz here!!!!! Hurray!!!!!!"

" um ok..may I ask what you want with the painting.."
".i want you to look inside the painting and there will be a key..i need that key understand!"

"okey..cya gotta go"

" bye sam..lub ya"

sam walks off to her class only to be met 5 seconds later by a humougous thump on heara back

"ouch"

"hiya best freind"

""omg angad why do kill me everytime you say hi" rubbing her back where it hurt
" aww sam im sorry for hurting u..btw why r u frndz wid kripa.. shez such  a *****…what did u tell her she looks happy now..Uhhhhh!!!"

" why do u care?"
"just wonderin"

" r u sure.. no special feelings or anything"

"SAM!!!!!!!!!! I AM GONNAAA KILLL UUUUUUUU"

but then what sam said hitz his brain  and he stops in the middle of hitting her again

" wait..sam u r a ******* genius"

" huh?..what??" sam turns around and looks at angad funny

"ur a genious.. thatz how I get the carpet…by going out wid her…"

" wait ur goin tooo fast.. what carpet. What genius and why do u need to go out wid her to get a carpet"

"ok listen kripa has dis carpet in her house somewhere and I need something from that carpet.. I am never gonna be able to get into her house so im going to go out wid her and that way ill get my thing"

" hey bhagwan!!!!!! U tooo!!!!!!!"
and sam shakes her head and walks off  disgused with her two best friends

" DON'T tell kripa anything or else……."

Angad yelled back to sam and then went his own way

Ummm I hope dis part didn't confuse u cuz I kinda wrote it in a hurry…..plz reply

ENJOY

himani

 

Moderator's Note:
Edited to completely remove inappropriate language.



Edited by shahidlover24 - 25 April 2006 at 4:43pm
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