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THE KING OF THEIVES updated pg.23..8/20 (Page 15)

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Posted: 07 April 2006 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sour Skittles

Originally posted by muqualp

plz hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

somethin cam up dis weekend..so ill cont over spring breakBig smile

no probs!Big smile hope everything is ok!

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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 8:37pm | IP Logged

PART 3

 

 

Mr.Sharma is very gullible as far as his daughters are concerned…he can never deny them anything.. So when priya asks for 1 million dollars to start her own company, Sharma readily gives to his daughter without even asking what the business is about.

                             ><

Priya and angad had decided to open a consulting company. Afcource angad didn't know anything about consulting he didn't plan to either… he just wanted to get his money and run.

                                ><

Priya and angad decided to open their company in a small downtown building . The building was old but it was well decorated and ready to rent with all the furnishings. They sign a 1 month lease and get ready to move in.

                                     ><

Kripa was with some of her friends just walking and talking when she sees priya and angad talking inside a building

" what the hell Is that ******* doin with my sister"

Kripa walks inside the building and totally ignorin angad gives priya a very friendly greetin

" hi my dear sister.. How are you. I was jus hangin out with my friends when I saw you.. So what are you doin here"

Priya was wonderin why kripa was being so nice to her but decided to play along

" hey kripa. I was just setting up a new company with Mr. Angad khanna here"pointing at angad

Kripa is totally shocked

" you are working with him!"

                                      ><

Angad was so confused by the two sisters converstion. He could not believe that he had made such a big mistake. His first job turned out to be none other than prithvi sharmas sister….what a disaster! Angad knew the game was over so he just decided to run.

                                ><

" what happened to him"

" ill tell u what happened to him dear sister"

" ur partener, mr angad khanna is not a business man he is the son of one of the biggest con man…"

" what! Why should I believe you and how do you know this"

" he goes to my college and don't believe me …. Cuz I dun care"

With that kripa walks off and rejoins her friends

                               ><

Priya is really confused.. Should she or should she not believe kripa?? Finally she decides that kripa is right,, angad jyust running out like that just proved it.

Priya tries to find kripa and finally finds wachin MTV( my fav channel!!!) in her room

" hi kripa can I speak to you"

Kripa swiches off her tv

"yeah"

" well im sorry for not believing you earlier but ur right "

" say that again"

" yes I said im soory and I believe you… that's all I want to say"

" wow amazing!!!!!!!!"

" shut up kripa dont make me regret what I said"

" k darlin sister"

disgusted, priya jus walks out

" my siste is crazy!"

And kripa goes back to wachin MTV..and slowly falls asleep

                                 ><

Kripa wakes up to the sound of her cell phone ringing

" hello"

" hi kripa itz amber"

" dude I waz sleepin"

" well wak up u r gonna miss ur swim meet"( I did tat once.. EMBARASSING!!!)
" omg I totally forgot.. Im comin right now .. Thx soo much I luv ya"

Kripa quickly grabs her stuff and runs out

Kripa quickly meets up with her coach an listens to the usuall lecture about being late

" coach im sorry can I go now"

"kripa when will u be more responsible! Oh ya I forgot to tell you….. One of our team members isn't here and u have to substitute in the co-ed relay( no such event in real life pplz..I jus made tat up) and tats the first event so get warmed up!"

" but coach .. Ive nev practiced this, im not ready!"

" ull b fine now go!"

So kripa walks over to the coed relay team

" hey guyz im kripa..im d sub for ur team mate"

"hi kripa" yell all four team members: Amber, Soniya, josh and ANGAD

hi pplz incase ur confused...amna is kripas sister but when i wrote the part i kept writin priya and now im too lazy to change it soo hop ur not too confused...ENJOY

Himani

Moderator's Note:
Edited to completely remove inappropriate language.



Edited by shahidlover24 - 13 April 2006 at 9:05pm
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by muqualp

Originally posted by Sour Skittles

Originally posted by muqualp

plz hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

somethin cam up dis weekend..so ill cont over spring breakBig smile

no probs!Big smile hope everything is ok!

thx muqu..no problems!!Big smile

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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
plz cont soon! that part rocked! just as usaul!
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Awesome part!!! I loved it! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 9:26pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by muqualp

plz cont soon! that part rocked! just as usaul!

thx as usualLOL

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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 9:27pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by amneetkaur_24

Awesome part!!! I loved it! Cont. soon!

thankuuBig smile

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