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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 8)

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hey just read the entire fanfic...and its just tooo awesome .....ur a fantastic writer....great job!!!
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omggg!!..i just finished the entire fanfic!!!....its sooo cute and fabulous yaar!!..i love it!!...plzzz continue...
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Part 5

Friday Nite
Kripa is getting ready. She is wearing jeans, a red cami, w/ a denim jacket on top. Her hair is tied up in a ponytail. (But its her natural hair-she's wearing no extensions like she usually would in the show)
Kripa comes down and sees her aunt preparing dinner.
Um...her aunt can be avantika I
Av: Kripa...where are u going?
K: o sry I 4got to tell u im going to the movies
Av: with who?
K: friends
Av: oic...u know its rilly nice to see u happy. Ur adjusting here rilly well and im glad u made sum new friends
K: (giggles and thinks to herself: and a bf too) yea..I rily like it here
Av: so have sum dinner b4 u go. I dun want u to have all tht junk food at the theater
K: friends will be here any minute now...ill cum back home and eat
Av: tht'll be too late
K: plz (Thinks to herself: weres angad ?)         &nbs p;
just then she gets a call on her cell - its angad
K: hey where are u?
A: im outside...u told me not to ring the doorbell, so I beeped the horn like a billion times
K: o so sry...ill be rite out
kripa hangs up the phone
K: mausi (sp?) My friends are here. I gtg bye luv u
K goes and sits in angads car
A: hey
K: hey
A: u look cute
K: thanks
so they frove to the movie theater. They stood in line to get the tickets when kripa saw a poster of shaadi se pehle
K: omg Shaadi se pehle Angad I wana see tht movie now
A: wht? But we already decided on the other movie
K: so cant we change the plans a little?
A: but tht movie starts in half an hour
K: so we'll wait
A: I hate waiting
K: so do I
A: hey we share at least on thing in common
K: angad Ok...well buy the tickets now...and then well go to eat at mcdonalds..its rite across the street..
A: ok thts cool
They got the tickets 4 the movie. Angad was abt to pay for both the tickets..
K: no angad its ok...ill pay for mine
A: no its ok...I can pay for both
K: no-
A: kripa seriously ill pay
K: sure?
A: yep
K: (smiles) angad yur so sweet (Thinks to herself: thanks God he paid for my ticket...I barely have no money...hopefully he'll pay for my mcdonalds meal too )
So they got the tickets and they jus went to mcdonalds to eat. Angad paid for kripa's meal. They stayed there for a lil while and went back to the theater and were buying snacks. Lol
A: (thinks to himself: crap...I dun have enough money left to get kripa sumthing...ill jus let her pay for her own) yea...ill hav a small popcorn and small coke
angad paid the person
A: arent u getting anything?
K: its ok.. (thinks to herself: why isnt he getting me anything ?)
A: (thinks to himself: I hope she didnt mind...)
K: ok come on...lets go
when they were walking to the shaadi se pehle theater angad saw a poster. He pointed to mallika sherawat. Lol
A: yo isnt she in all the movies where shes making out and sleeping w/ ppl
K: (rolls eyes) ugh..yess...shes mallika sherawat...I h8 her soo much
A: u h8 her? Dude shes so hot
K: hot? Angad...jus bcuz a girls sheds her clothes and makes out in all her movies does not mean shes hot
A: yea it does
K: no it doesnt
A: wud u know...yur not even a guy
K: angad Shes not even pretty looking
A: I no shes not pretty...shes hot...u no wht kripa...u picked a rilly good movie for us to watch
K: ugh...lets go..

Angad and Kripa took there seat and all the promos were on.
A: here u know wht u can have my popcorn and soda. Im going to sleep wake me up when tht mallika girl cums
K: angad
A: wht?
K: then wht was the whole point of this date? U can jus go home and I cudd jus stay here and watch the movie by myself.
A: ok- works for me (gets up)
K: angad
A: u seem to like my name a lot since u say it like every 30 seconds.
K: angad
A: see
K: (crosses arms and makes a mad face)
A: ok ok...kripa jus relax I was jus joking. Im not going gonna sit rite by yur side...I wont ever leave u...
They both smiled at eachother and linked arms
A: and ill try not sleep...but if I do im rily sry
K: aww...yur so sweet..its ok
the movie began and kripa was rilly enjoying it. Angad was getting bored and was trying so hard not to sleep. Then this one mallika song came on and angad got all excited
A: kripa thank u so much for choosing this movie
K: ugh...whtever...angad u do now tht shes all plastic...shes gotten plastic surgery like everywhere on her body
A: so? Shes looks hot - thts wht counts
K: angad yur so dumb (She threw some popcorn at him)
A: hey (He throws popcorn back at kripa
K: (throws sum back at angad)
A: (throws sum back at kripa)
then the ppl sitting behind them got mad.
Ppl: can u 2 quit acting like 5 yr olds and jus watch the movie
K: oh...sorry
A: kripa? Wht do u mean by sorry? (he turns around to the ppl behind) who are u to tell me wht to do and wht not to do? Yur the ones who need to stop acting like 50 yr olds. Im jus trying to have fun. And being 5 yrs old is fun. If u dun like us throwing popcorn at eachtother...u can move to another seat, grandma and grandpa
Ppl: (they actually move to another seat lol)
K: Angad tht was so mean
A: so?
K: yea yur
They continued to watch the movie and towards the end angad fell asleep on kripas shoulder. Kripa didnt mind
K: angad...wake up
A: huh? Wht happend?
K: angad...the movie is over
A: o sry I fell asleep
K: (laughs) its least u were there beside me
A: told u I wudnt go newhere...hey did grandma and grandpa leave yet? I was wondering if they cud get us a choo-choo train
K: (laughs) angad yur too much Lets go now
Angad drove kripa home.
They reached her house
K: thanks angad. I rilly enjoyed the whole nite
A: yea.. Me too
K: um...we this more...often...
A: yea we shud
K: yea..well i better go me tomorow..bye angad..
She hugged him and kissed him on the cheek
A: bye
he hugged her and kissed her on her cheek 2
kripa got out off the car and waved bye to angad and angad waved back.
they both were very happy.

to be continued..
ok tht was my nxt part...sry i took a while to update!!
i hope u guys liked it
thanks for yur comments!
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hey that was an awesome part...continue soon

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