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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 5)

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Part 4

K: yea...sure..i will
A: o...ok..cool (all happy now)
K: so i'll call u tonite...and we can talk abt wht movie to see
A: yea sure
K: ok then...bye..ttyl
A: ttyl
Kripa gives Angad a hug and angad is so happy Lol
Kripa goes home and Angad gets in his car and drives home....on the way he calls josh
J: hey bro
A: she said yes
J: ha ha...i told you she would
A: yea I cant believe you were actually rite
J: angad when its come to the ladies I am always rite
A: o god josh
J: it true
A: yea whtevr...listen I gtg go now...ttyl
J: cya
Angad reachers home to his huge mansion. There he lives with his mom, dad,.So angad's parents are big business ppl.
A: mom..im home
N: hi beta...how was yur day?
A: good - yours?
N: it was good
A: cool..where's dad? Shudn't he back frm london now?
N: o no..he jus called this morning-after you left for college. He'll have to stay there for a few more weeks.
A: wht? But why?
N: angad...you know some business problems came up...so they arranged some more meetings..and it was important for yur dad to be there
A: god damn it
N: angad
A: sry mom..well Im going to my room...call me when dinner is ready
Angad went up to his room and then kripa called
K: hey angad
A: hi
K: so wht r u upto?
A: not much..you
K: same...so wht movie do u wana see? I havnt seen any movies in a loong time..so I hav a big list....hey do u wana see tht one movie Being Cyrus? It seems interesting?
A: being cryus? Wht kinda crap movie is tht?
K: angad Its seems like a rily good movie...saif ali khan is in it
A: whoa...saif ali khan? It's a hindi movie?
K: well...yea
A: u like them??
K: i love them Why...dun u
A: not rilly...the last one I saw was with Shahrukh khan and he dies at the end and everyone in the theater was crying like mad
K: o kal ho naa ho? I luv tht movie It was so sad tho
A: ok..whtever...
K: well..at priyas party, when they ABA song played, you got all excited
A: yea...thts cuz I heard my sis play tht song on her comp. One time...and I sorta liked it...
K: o ic...so then wht movie do u wana see
A: any movie except and hindi one
K: angad yur so mean
A: im mean?
K: yes
A: ok...if it makes you happy we'll see it..
K: wht? Are u serious?
A: well..yea
K: angad..i wasnt serious when I said u were mean...I mean we can go see an english movie if u want...
A: no...its ok...we'll go see tht one movie u were talking abt
K: r u sure?
A: yea
K: o angad! Yur so sweet!
A: ya ya...whatever
K: r u mad?
A: no...no not at all
K: sure?
A: yes!
Naina comes in Angad's room...
N: Angad...come on dinner is ready
A: ok mom....listen krips, I gtg ok...ttyl
K: ok bye angad....
A: bye..
K: bye..
A: bye..
K: bye already!
A: I cant hang up until u do
K: i cant hang up until u do...
A: no u hang up first
K: no u
A: ok..on a count of 3 we both hang up...
K: ok...1
A: 2
K: 3
Angad and Kripa say this both at the same time: Bye! Love you!
And they both hang up
And they both are so happy! Lol

ok...thts part 4...i no its sorta wierd now...but i no how i want it to turn out...
btw thank u guys so much for yur sweet comments! Smile
and dun worry...i wont make any ekta twists in the story LOL LOL LOL
well plz comment
~*Pari*~

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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 7:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LIL sweetz

this is pretty good ekta should learn from u


LOLLOL
haha..thanks....ekta is rily bad..i bet anyone can teach her!
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Posted: 06 April 2006 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
its gr8! u r so creative. plzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 06 April 2006 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Clap Clap Clap its gr8
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Posted: 06 April 2006 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!gr888888 8888888888888888!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....story awesum.....mindblowin.....omGGGGGGGGGGGG.....i fall lov wid ur story n dreamin of it......awesum...darlin...keep it up...n continue plzzzzzzzzz......hurry...my stoamch is painnin... Wink LOL LOL 2 read more Embarrassed LOL yap lil sweetz i agree wid u.....ekta shuld learn from her Wink
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plz plz plz continue today..plz......
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Posted: 06 April 2006 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by farahrabbi

gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!gr8888 88 8888888888888888!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....story awesum.....min dblowin.....omGGGGGGGGGGGG.....i fall lov wid ur story n dreamin of it......awesum...darlin...keep it up...n continue plzzzzzzzzz......hurry...my stoamch is painnin... Wink LOL LOL 2 read more Embarrassed LOL yap lil sweetz i agree wid u.....ekta shuld learn from her Wink


omg! thank you so much! tht was sucha sweet comment...while i was in enlish class today...i wrote the nxt part in my notebook....english class is so boring lol...but then i forgot to take my notebook home! ugh...im so dumb! but ill bring it tomorrow...and ill update tomorrow too! thank you for yur commment
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Posted: 07 April 2006 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Embarrassed cute part!! continue soon plz!!

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