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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 4)

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Part 3
K- Mishti? Answer Me
Josh then comes
J- Hey Kripa Hey Mishti
M - shut up josh. Go away
J- Oooo...I see sum1 is in a bad mood rite now
M - I wasnt until I saw yur face...Kripa, im going to the u can either hang out with this moron or cum with me
K- ok....u go...ill be there in just a minute
Mishti leaves
J- so kripa...u enjoying the pary?
K- yep...I see u are too
J- o yea Well I better go...the girls are waiting for me
K- (laughs) ok bye
Kripa goes to the washroom to meet Mishti. Mishti is jus fixing her hair and makeup
M - thank god u finally came...
K- (laughs) mishti If u rilly like josh so much, why don't u jus tell him
M - wht? Kripa don't talk nonsense I don't like josh
K- come on mishti. Im sure he'll understand yur feeling and all
M - whatever. Hes jus all into girls....o god...can we jus drop the subject plz.
K- ok ok sry....come on lets go
K and M leave the some more...and K completely forgot abt asking M is Angad had a gf..

Next Day in College:
A- hey kripa
K- hey angad...whts up?
A- not to
K- same
A- u wana have lunch together today?
K- um...don't I always?
A- yea...but thts with every1 else...lets have lunch...jus u and me...
K- ok...then ill see ya l8r.

Lunch Time
K- so...where do u wana have lunch?
A- where do u?
K- I dun care...
A- um...lets jus sit...underneath tht tree (lol)
A and K sit under the tree
K- btw sceduele had some changes...I now have hindi class w/ u
A- o cool..I guess....
K- (laughs) now I can see mrs. Kakkad flirt with u
A- kripa
K- (laughs) ok sry
A- (laughs
K- o aunt packed me biryani for lunch (lol)
A- mom packed me pasta for lunch
K-yur the lucky one...I love pasta...I dun like biryani too much
A- wht? I love biryani....I dun like pasta tht much.
K- (laughs) thts u can have my biryani
A- and u can have my pasta
Both exchange their lunches and eat
A- so kripa..u were saying tht yur aunt packed u lunch....
K- o yea...I live with my aunt and parents live in nainithal..I came here to mumbai for I stay with my uncle and aunt who live here
A- u miss yur parents?
K- yea...I mean who adjusting pretty well with out them tho
A- well thts good
K and A eat the rest of their lunch and talk abt their likes, dislikes, etc.

Chemistry Class
Josh and Angad are working together on an assignment and Josh is not talking to Angad and sorta ignoring him.
A- josh? Why arnt u talking to me? Whts wrong with you?
J- (doesnt say nething)
A- o god josh. Quit acting like a girl. This is how a girl wud act when her boyfriend forgot to call her last night
A- hey it worked You said atleast sumthing
J- angad whts going on? We're best friends rite
A- yea...
J- and best friends tell eachother everything rite...
A- well important things...
J- yea..rite....and best friends tell eachother which girl they like rite....
A- yea...unless one best friend likes the other friend's gf
J- o yea Then it wud be best to keep quiet
A- (laughs) ok...josh wht are u trying to say
J- u like sum1 and yur not telling me
A- no thts not true
J- o yea sure...whts going btw u and kripa....u 2 ditched me, prithvi, and mishti and went ate lunch under a tree like love birds.
A- shut up
J- u like kripa don't u?
A- ...sorta..yea...sorta
J- then wht are u waiting for? Ask her out
A- josh...
J- come on, angad, u have to ask her today when u leave college
A- no....wht if she says no...
J- she wont...girls luv u like crazy...she'll def say yes
A- but shes not guy crazy...
J- so yur not girl crazy either...she'll prolly consider going out w/ u cuz she nos yur not going out with her for the hec of it.         &nb sp;         &nb sp;         &nb sp;     
A-hey yea...maybe yur rite...I nvr knew u were tht smart
J- hey were talking abt girls
A- (laughs) yea
J- so before u leave for home...ask kripa out
A- alrite...I will
College classes are over for the day and everyone is going home
Kripa is walking down the steps and trips
But then Angad comes and catches her
K-o angad...thanks
A- yea...u ok
K- wht else is going on?
A- uh..not much...kripa...I wanted to ask you sumthing...
K- yea...go ahead...
A- you...
K-do I...wht?
A- would u...
K- would I...
A- um...(mumbles to himself) shit
K- huh?
A- nuthin
K- angad wht do u wana ask me?!
A- kripa, would you like to go out for a movie wit me Friday nite? (Says it rilly fast)
K- are u asking me out on a date?
A- um...sorta...yea
K- (laughs) ok
A- so whts yur answer?

to be continued soon...
ok tht was part 3...i hoped you like it!
plz comment!
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i've waited soo long!!!! gr8 part cont soon plzzz..oh welcum bac from..i forgot where it was..but welcum bac!Smile

Edited by Desi Pride - 03 April 2006 at 5:44pm
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coool!! nice part!! contnue sooon Smile
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plz continue        &nbs p; I love A-K parts thank god they fellin love inur story they were late in Ekta's LOL
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this is pretty good ekta should learn from u
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