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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 3)

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hey guys! thanks so much for yur comments!! sry i cudnt update earlier i had my tests n all....but i finished all my tests! and now we have spring break!! yay!!

Part 2           ; ;         &n bsp; ;          ;  ;

So it's the nxt day of college..and classes happen...and then college is over...every1 was going hope....

Angad is about to go home in his car, when a girl comes up to him..(shes jus a random girl)
G- Hi Angad
A- o hey...whoever you are...
G- how rude My name is priya...
A- ok...
P- well my bday is the Saturday and im holding a party at my place. Heres the invitation and the directions are there too.
A- im not sure if ill be able to cum (as u can see, angad isnt all crazy and into girls)
P- Angad Plz
A- why do u want me cum so bad?
P- cuz ur jus too cute...I rilly want u to cum
A- ok...if ur rilly want me to cum...ill cum..who else will be there?
P- every1 will be there...josh, mishti, pritvi...the whole entire college is cuming...
A- or did u jus invite the whole entire college but only 1/100 of them are cuming?
P- Angad
A- ok ok yea...ill be there...
P- promise?
A- am I yur bf to promise you?
P- not yet, but u will soon (she blows a kiss at him and walks away)
A- wht a weird chic
J- (comes upto Angad) whoa angad....wht was going on there...r u 2 going out?
A- hell no
J- sweet...I shud ask her out sum the way whts her name?
A- her names priya...wait didnt she invite u to her party on sat?
J- uh...o yea...I I get so many party invitations frm the girls....I 4get abt sum
A- sure, Josh.
J- im serious!
A- r u going or not?
J- ya im going..u?
A- sure. Well I gotta go...see ya l8r
J- bye

Priya's party
Angad, Josh, Prithvi enter the party and all these girls cum rushing up to angad and josh and ask them to come and Angad and josh go with the girls and prithvi waits for mishti and kripa. And then mishti and kripa enter!
P- hey mishti. Hey kripa
M - hey
K- hi
M - where's josh and angad?
P- dancing with the girls
M - (gets jealous) what? Why is josh dancing with all those girls? Ugh he is sucha flirt and this irritates me so much! Lemme go find him...prithvi, u cum with me
K- (jus sits on a chair near by)
A- (sees kripa siting by herself and goes upto her) hey kripa
K- o
A- angad
K- (laughs) sorry...angad...
A- its wheres mishti..isnt she hanging out with you..
K- well we came together and when prithvi said josh was dancing with all those girls, she got all mad and went looking for him..
A- ya...she likes him...more than a friend..
K- (laughs) yea....thts wht I was thinking...
A & K - (laugh)
K- so u like theses parties?
A- ya I guess...its sorta fun...hanging out with friends and u like em?
K- ya...same with me...I like hanging with friends...
A- so do u dance at parties
K- yea actually I do...I love dancing
A- really?
K- yea..
A- so y rnt u dancing now?
K- angad! I dun no ne1'll be akward...I only dance and party with my friends....
A- rnt we friends now?
K- um....(sorta happy)...yea...
Aashiq banaya aapne remix plays in background.
A- hey this is my fave song! Kripa come on, lets go dance
K- angad!
A- plz kripa!!
K- fine!
Angad and Kripa go on the dance floor and dance n party...they danced to a few songs and then they went to get sumthing to drink
A- tht wasnt so bad now was it?
K-(laughs) no its wasnt...thanks...
A- thanks? Wht for?
K- well u sorta helped get open up and all
A- (laughs) no prob...
Mishti and Prithvi and josh come...
J- hey kripa!
K- hi josh
J- so do u like the party?
K- yea im rilly enjoying it....thanks to someone very special...
M, J, P - huh?
K- o nothing! Omg...
J- well the girls are waiting for me at the dance floor...ttyl...
M - (mumbles to herself) tht idiot
K- wht happened?
M - nothing...
A- (whispers to K) see wht im talking abt...
K-shut up!
Angad and prithvi go and hang out sumwhere else.
K- mishti whts the matter?
M - nothing....I dunno...I think I rily rily like josh...I dunno...I mean I always wanna be with him and I get all mad when I see him flirting with all those girl...but when I ask myself If I like him I think no...I dunno....its jus so confusing!
K- dun worry....jus dun concentrate on him too'll be okay....
M - u were partying with angad, huh?
K- yes.....
M - I saw u two together....u know...u both do make a cute couple....
K- Mishti!!
M - (laughs)
K- well....he is sorta cute...but its rilly weird ....the other day at lunch it was like he didnt want to be near me...and today he asked me to dance with him...
M - I guess he was jus rilly shy the first time.....he doesnt like hanging out with girls too much....hes not too crazy abt them...unlike josh!
K- (laughs) I has angad ever had any girlfriend?
M - um...wht?
K- did angad ever hav any girlfriend...??
M - ......

To be continued...
ok i hope u guys like it!
sry if its sorta
btw i may not be able to come on for a week...cuz tomorrow im going to aruba!! so ill be back in less than a week..
comment plz!

Edited by pari786 - 24 March 2006 at 3:30pm
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hurry up!!!! LOL
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