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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 26)

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Posted: 26 June 2006 at 11:56am | IP Logged
hey this is cool............plz continue soon
i'll be waiting!!!!!!!

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great part!
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i love it!! finally got to catch up!!
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Part 16:
K's house
M came home with K
Av: hi kripa...hey r u?
M: im good abt u?
Av: im doing fine...thank u guys want somthing to eat?
M: no ok
K: yea same
Av: ok... hey u can yur fone back
K: wht? omg! thanks! thank u so much!! im really sru abt the whole going out and lieing thing...i promise i wont do tht again
M: (rolls eyes...yeah rite!)
Av: (smiles) thanks
K: umm..i was wondering tomorrow my friends r going out for a movie...i was wondering..
Av: if u cud go with them?
K: yea..
K: mishti will be there
M: yea aunty..its jus me and a few other girls
Av: ok...
K: can i plz go tho plz plz plz!!
Av: .....
K: plz!!!
Av: ok
K: plz plz plz
Av: i said ok..
K: o..omg!!thank u so muhc!!
K was jumping and huggged avi
K: i love you!!
Av: i love u 2 kripa

Nxt day...well evening:
AKJMP all met at the movie theater at 6.45 then kripa and angad went to see the omen and josh mishti and pritvi went to
K: angad is this rilly scary?
A: duh its a horror movie
K: angad..horror movies scare me!
A: well thts wht there supposed to do!
K: angad!
A: i asked u if u wanted to see this movie and u said yes
K: ugh
A: well we can always go see anoter dumb hindi movie
K: hey! when i asked u if u were cool with seeing a hindi movie u said yes. and i-
A: hey joking jus chill!
the movie started and kripa was screaming the whole time and hiding here face in angad's arm...anngad was enjoying both kripa and the
the movie was then over...they both were leaving the theater
K: wht? wht kinda ending was tht? the boy didnt die!
A: yea...i guess there making a sequel..tht wht happend with the old version
K: oic..but tht was so scary. im gonna get nightmares for the rest of my life
A: (laughs)
AK were waitng for JMP
K: where are they?
A: well theyre movie did start half an hr after ours
K: yea..omg i still cant get tht movie outta my was so extremly scary..uh
A: yea tht was one mad movie
K: u liked it?
A: it was ok
K: i hated it!
A: (laughs)
K: tht lil boy was so beautiful and the he turned out to be a devil!!
A: (laughs) hey you know when i was a lil kid all the aunties used to say i was so beautiful and i thought tht was rilly wierd of them
K: (scared) angad..dont mind me asking...but...are u adopted?
A: i parents nvr said nething..but u nvr no they mite be keeping it a secret..
K: rite..
A: omg!
K: wht???!!
A: look...there's 666 on my arm!!
K: AHHH!! stay away frm me!! go away!! dun kill me plz!!
A: (bursts out laughing) im jus joking around...u shud have seen u scream!! it was so funny
K: huh? angad!! (crying) you scared me so much!! omg!! tht is so not funny!! i hate u i hate u i hate u!!
A: (laughing) ok ok ok im rilly sry
K: no yur not - yur laughing
A: (still laughing) no im not
K: shut up! i h8 u! (mad)
A: (serious) hey listen im rilly rilly sry (looks into K's eyes)
They were all quiet and leaned closer to eachother
J: Angad!!
JMP came out of the theater
J: tht was sucha funy movie!!
how was yur movie?
A: great
M: (to kripa) how was it?
K: it was ok...rilly scary tho...i was screaming like crazy!
A: was funny tho!
K: shut up!
P: hey guys lets go for icecream..
They all started walking to the icecream shop tht was nearby
K: hey was so awesome...i was always clutching on to him...sumtimes i did on purpose
M: omg...u crazy girl!
K: (laughs) so how was yur movie?
M: it was pretty funny
K: no i meant like u and josh
M: kripa!
K: wht? just minus prithvi and everything wud be perfect!
M: correction..jus minus prithvi and add likeness for me frm josh then everything wud be perfect
K: o come on...u no maube after college josh will change.. like his flirting habits and all..then u 2 can get married, have cute kids, and live happily ever after!
M: kripa stop it!
K: wht? u no u love him
M: i know..but he doesnt love me
P: hey wht are u to whispering abt??
K: oh nothing
K went up to A and started walking beside him...
A: so u ok...are u still scared?
K: angad!
A: wht? im serious...u'll be ok rite?
K: (smiles) yes..i will..thanks.. (thinking to herself: he is so sweet!)
angad held kripa's hand...and k jus smiled again
the 5 all got icecream and they sat outside eating it and were jus goofing around...being there regular selves
then after a while they walked back to theater parking lot to get their cars and go home
A: here ill walk u to mishti's car
K: ohh..thanks angad
they both turned around and saw tht josh,mishti and pritvi were talking with eachother way behind
A: so..
K: so...
K: umm...i had a nice time tonite..
A: same here...well i always have a nice time when im with u
K: (blushing) really?
A: really
K: o wow...thts so i guess i will see you soon..
A: yea..ok see ya
they both looked eachtother in eye..they slowly came closer and closer...and then they kissed for a few seconds
K: angad...(blushing)...uuhhh...Mishti! come on i have to go home...
M: coming!!
K: sry i have to aunt is prolly waiting for me..i promised her i wudnt stay out too late
A: o yea rite...dont want her to get um ill ttyl
K: yea u
A: luv u 2
M came
M: u ready kripa
K: yea..
K and M sat in the car and angad went to his

In the car:
K: (thinking) omg..tht was so amazing! omg! i cant believe it! omg
M: hey kripa u ok??
K: huh?? yea..
M: ok
K: mishti..angad and i...we..we kissed
M: wht?! omg! when??!
K: jus rite before we was so great
M: aww..kripa! u 2 are so cute!
K: thanks!
tht nite angad and kripa went to bed thinking abt eachother
A: (thinking) there's rilly sumthing abt her..she's always on my mind....

to be cont..
i hope u guys liked it!!!
i tried to make it cute/romantic...sry if i didnt to good...cuz i dunno how to rite romantic stuff!! lol
well i hope u like it newayz!!
omg i was taking to my aunt in india today!!! she said tht she was at this cafe in bandra the other day and she saw iqbal khan and sneha there!!! omg!! i wish i was there!!!!!
newayz...plz comment!!!
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Posted: 03 July 2006 at 10:08am | IP Logged
ok guys...kripa's older girl cuzin is gonna be coming in the story....
who do u want the older cuzin to be played by?? plz post yur suggestions!!! and the older cuzin is a married she cant be so extremly young. lol. plz post yur suggestions!! thanks!!!

Edited by pari786 - 03 July 2006 at 10:13am
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Posted: 03 July 2006 at 10:13am | IP Logged
omg ur aunt is so lucky haha...n brilliant part it was soo cute..cont soon pari
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Posted: 03 July 2006 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pooja922

omg ur aunt is so lucky haha...n brilliant part it was soo cute..cont soon pari

lol...thanks!!! do u have any suggestion abt who shud play kripa's cuz??

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