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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 25)

pari786 Groupbie

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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
omg!! no more comments again???????!!!! this is rilly sad!!!

sgokli IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
indiandoll89 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
THAT WAS REALLY REALISTIC!!!! I hope Kripa pays more attention in class instead of with Angad!! Jus kiddin!! Loved the Part!!!
Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 6:23pm | IP Logged
great part....cotninue soon
angadlover<3 Goldie

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Posted: 20 June 2006 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
hey!!..tht was a really nice part!!..and i hope u enjoy ur trip to arizona!!!..cont soon!!
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Posted: 21 June 2006 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
it was a great part! continue soon
pari786 Groupbie

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Posted: 25 June 2006 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
hey guys!! i came back frm arizona yday! it was amazing!! esp. the grand canyon! wow! well here's the nxt part. i rilly hope u like it!
Part 15:
so it was after college and angad was in his room practicing his guitar and then aaliya came in
Aa: hey bhai
A: get out
Aa: calm down, im not here to hang out with u or annoy u
A: thank God
Aa: shut up! mom wants u to get ready we have to go 2 the airport and pick up daddy
A: why do we hav to pick him up? cant he jus come home hinself?
Aa: yea...but we wanna go greet him at the airport...dont you?
A: sure
Aa: why dun u like dad?
A: its no like i dun like him...i just dont love him like crazy he's not around tht much 2 get attached to him
Aa: yea tht is true. he's always on some business trip. i dont understand why mom agreed to marry him. who wud want a husband thts not even there
A: exactly
N: well if i didn t marry yur dad u wudnt be here
N was listening to their convo outside the room and then she came in
A&Aa: Mom?!?
A: mom we're really -
N: ok whatever...are u 2 reaady...we have to leave
they got ready and they sat in the car
Angad saw N's upset face
A: mom we're rilly sorry
Aa: yea we are plz dun be sad
N: aww u 2...i love you so much....its ok...sumtime i think the same also. thts wht makes me upset. but at the end of the day im very happy cuz i have my 2 beautiful children always by my side.
Aa: awww...mama i love you 2!
A: uhh...yeaa...i love u 3
N: (laughs) oh angad
A: wht?
Angads cell rang
A: hey josh!
Aa: omg! josh! tell him i said hi!!
N: huh...wht?
Aa: oh dunno wht im saying
N: aaliyah!!
A: um..josh..i think i hav to go now...mother-daughter drama..this looks like sumthing i wana watch..bye (hangs up)
N: aaliyah?? are u crushing on josh!!
Aa: no
N: o plz...i wasnt born yesterday!
Aa: then why did u ask if u knew?
N: not gona be tht strict on u...but plz dun crush on a guy like josh...tht flirt playboy jerk...crush on a guy like prithvi!!
A&Aa: Ewwwww!!!!!
N: relax...i said a guy like nvr accept the actual pritvhi going out with my daughter
A: and id nvr accept tht guy going out with my sister
Aa: and id nvr accept tht guy as my bf!! eww!....but mom...whts wrong with josh?
N: eww..everytime i see tht guy he's always romancing with a different girl
A: its not his fault..all the girls are after him
N: so? all the girl are after u...but are u always with one girl after another?
Aa: well thts cuz he's busy with kripa!!
A: aaliyah!!
N: kripa? avi's niece?
A: yea...
N: u like her?
A: mom
N: does she like u back?
Aa: yep! theyve bin on 2 dates together!!
N: wht??? wow!!! angad...why didnt u tell me this b4??
A: mom...stop...a guy nvr tells his mom abt this stuf
N: awww...angad dont be shy sweeti....u can always talk to me
A: umm...ok mom...
N: so do u rilly love her?
A: mom!!...i not like totally in love love with her. its just tht there's sumthing abt her...i dunno wht...but there is...
N: wonder yu've bin so happy so happy for u!!
A: but mom...plz dun tell avi aunty abt this
N: o yea..i understand...dun worry
A: thanks mom...thank u so much
the 3 reached the airport and went to tht waiting area place
Aa: look its dad!
Dilip: hi aaliya! (hug) hows my lil angel doing?
Aa: im good
D: angad my son (hug)
A: hey dad...
D: hi naina darling how r u (hug)
N: im good was yur trip?
D: it was ok...u now the regular business stuff and all...and i got u all some gifts
Aa: ohh! wht did u get me??
D: lets go home and well see
the 4 all went home...

K: omg. mishti. angad nvr asked me out date after tht whole issue thingy
M: aww..dun wry he will...he's prolly jus busy this weekend or sumthing
Angad came up behind kripa
A: hey ..whts going on
M: kripa is sad cuz u didnt plan a date this wknd
A: wht?
K: mishti!!
A: ok then- lets plan now...wht do u wana do
K:um..i dunn...wht do u wana do
A: whtever u wana do
K: (giggles) i wana do whtever u wana do
M: (getting sick of all this) o going
A: good...its not like we wanted u here
M: mean (goes away)
K: (laughs) angad! so wht do u wana do...see another movie?
A: sure...u can decide the movie and look up the timings and then tell me
K: huh
A: well u no im not up to date with all the desi movies
K: u wana see a hindi movie? we can see a english movie is u want
A: no its ok
K: ok fine then
A: wait...cna we see a english movie?
K: (laughs) yeah
A: sure?
K: yes angad! i decided last time you decide this time
A: ok
one of angad's friends called him over
A: hey i gtg cya
they both hugged and angad went
k sighed and just stared at him
M came
M: soooo...
K: mishti??! you heard everything?
M: wht nothing extremlety romantic happend
K: yea...unfortunatly
M: dun worry it will happen...somtime...soon
K: hopefully
M: i jus have one question
K: yea
M: wht abt yuur aunt?
K: ill lie to her...ill jus make up some excuse..
M: yea but remember wht happend last time..and arnt u sorta grounded...u think she'll let u go out anywhere?
K: shoot...yur rite....i totally wht?
M: i dunno...lemme think
the bell rang
Kand M went to the first class
T: so i graded the tests...most of the scores were pretty good...and the rest were just...u no..
T started passing the tests out she came to kripa
T: kripa..i was rilly dissapointed
she gave the test to kripa...she basically
T: kripa...this isnt you...i really didnt expect this frm you
K: ok...sry..ill do better nxt time
T walked away
M: u ok?
K: yeah...whtever..its just a dumb grade...

to be cont..
will kripa be able to lie to avi again and go out with angad with out being caught???
plz comment soon!!!!!

Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3175

Posted: 26 June 2006 at 5:21am | IP Logged
great part....loved it....i dont think kripa will lie this time.....continue soon

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