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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 24)

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no more comments????? Cry Cry

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nice part. do continue soon!
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it's nice i like it
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wonderful part. continue soon
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i just read ur whole ff anf it was g8 i loved it continue soon and kkep up te god work Big smile
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Awesome job!!!
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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 10:08am | IP Logged
hey guys thanks for yur going to go to Arizona today!!! we have to leave for the airport at abt 5.00 and rite now its yea!! im rilly excited!! we're gonna be there for a i wont be able to update!! sorry!!! and im also gona miss KYPH!! but i can always come back to the forum and look at the updates!!!!! i hope angad and kripa meet soon!! i cant wait till angad finds out prateek is his son!! its gonna be sooo cute!! angad is so sweet..even tho he flirts with every girl he meets...he still cares for sur and is a good daddy!!'s part 14

Part 14:
class was over and kripa went to angad's locker and waited for him
K: angad!
A: hey!
the both hugged
A: i tried calling u like a million times
K: yea....i got my phone taken away
A: rily sry...
K: no no no dont be...its not yur gonna get it back soon anywayz
A: how did it go...wht did u tell yur aunt and all
K: well i rilly didnnt have any other option but to tell her the truth...i told her abt u and me
A: and she was cool with it?
K: umm...not rilly...she doesnt rilly want me going out with any guy..u know..
A: ohhh..soo...
K: but i still wanna be with where still together and stuff...rite?
A: yea yea...if u want 2
K: yea i want 2
A: me 2
K: (giggles) angad..yur so sweet
J: ok guys remember yur in public
K: huh....o..hey josh...
J: hey kripa...whts up?
K: not abt u
J: just the usual
A: um..josh..
J: wht?
A: can u -
P then came
P: hey guys...whts up?
the bell rang for the nxt class
K: o shoot...i gtg guys...bye cya...bye angad!
K went to her class
AJ had freetime/break time
A- yo wht the hell is yur trying to talk to kripa alone..and then all u guys always but in
J- well sry man....i was jus saying hi
P: yea
A: ok whatever
J: so is kripa's aunt ok w/ u and her going out
A: uuuhhh...not rilly
J: but-
P: kripa is going bad...she's gonna disobey her aunt's words and still go out w/ angad
A: hey! she's not bad....and how do u no wht she's doing?
P: she told me
A: hows yur love life goin, pritvi?
J: (laughs) who wants to love him
P: hey shut up....well do u no this girl simran
A: sim who?
P: simran..simran...i dont no her last name -she's one of mishti and kripa's friends
J: well wht abt her
P: well i think she's kinda cute....but i think she's scared of me
J: well who wudn't...have u even looked in the mirror?
P: josh stop it!!! angad tell him!
A: wht?
P: god u 2!!!
meanwhile kripa is in class
teacher = T
T: ok everyone...hope u had a good weekend and i hope u all studyed for yur test
M: (whispers to K) how can she expect us to hav a good weekend when we had to study for her crap test?
K: haha...but wht test is she talking abt???
M: on thursday she said we're having test today...dont u remember?
K: oh yea...oh no i forgot to study all weekend
M: well it shudnt be tht bad...i mean u pay attention in class
K: i dont
M: ohhh....well dont worry....its jus one test it wont tht bad...
K: yea..hopefully...(nervous)
the teacher handed out the tests
K: (whispers) mishti...i dunno any of these
M: just try yur best
K: (whines) o someday help me
T: we have a problem?
T: ok be quiet
K: ok sorry
kripa knew just a few answers...most of them she jus guessed or left incomplete
after some time, the bell rang
T: ok...hand in yur tests to me as u leave
all the students did so, even kripa and then left class
M: so how did it go 4 u?
K: bad! very very bad! i only knew the answers to like 5 questions! thts it!
M: oohhh...well im sure you'll do better nxt time
K: yea...but this is prolly gonna bring my average way down
M: so then study rilly hard for the other tests to come, youll get a very good grade, and then yur average will go way up
K: yea...i hope so...
M: o jus cheer sure everything will work out for you..yur a rilly smart girl...u wont have tht much trouble
K: i hope not
K and M got ready for their nxt class...

to be cont..
hope you liked it!!
plz comment!!


Edited by pari786 - 16 June 2006 at 2:18pm

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