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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 23)

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Posted: 03 July 2006 at 11:05am | IP Logged
great part Smile Smile Smile

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Originally posted by pari786

Originally posted by Pooja922

omg ur aunt is so lucky haha...n brilliant part it was soo cute..cont soon pari


lol...thanks!!! do u have any suggestion abt who shud play kripa's cuz??


ummm you can have shama sikhander play...lol
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Omg ur aunt is soooooo luckyyy!!
but they are coming to Uk in two weeks too! yay!!!! ( well Iq n Neha are anyways!!)

I love ur fan fic - but I wonder what was it bout A that everyone didnt like?

hmmmmmmmmmm.....

continue soon - grt part!!
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Originally posted by Chandini

Omg ur aunt is soooooo luckyyy!!
but they are coming to Uk in two weeks too! yay!!!! ( well Iq n Neha are anyways!!)

I love ur fan fic - but I wonder what was it bout A that everyone didnt like?

hmmmmmmmmmm.....

continue soon - grt part!!


hey! ya i no my aunt is lucky! lol. yea i live in the US and i wont be able to go to UK duting the lifestyle show!!! Cry
thanks for reading my ff!!! and abt A....u will soon find out!! lol
thanks again!!!
~*Pari*~
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HEY GUYS!!! I still need some suggestions for the person to play kripas cuzin!! otherwise im gonna put sum1 u may not like. lol.
this person has to be sum1 intellegent and sensible!! and she is like a wifey/bahu typish...u no wearing saris and stuff.i was thinking aamna shariff..but she was paired opposite of iq b4...so i wasnt to sure if ppl wud like it, and then i was thinking shilpa saklani...but i dunno if ppl like her tht much, then i was thinking gauri but she is almost paired opposite angad in kyph!! so i dunno who!!!
plz reply....and post more comments plz!!!
~*Pari*~
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Posted: 03 July 2006 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
How about gurdeep kohli (Vedika of Sindoor) could play Kripa's cousin. Just a suggestion Smile . I like your fanfic a lot!!!!
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Originally posted by lakers28

How about gurdeep kohli (Vedika of Sindoor) could play Kripa's cousin. Just a suggestion Smile . I like your fanfic a lot!!!!


hayy!! thanks! im rilly glad u like my ff!! and thanks for the idea!!
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Part 17:
some time went by and kripa would still secretly meet angad. they started liking eachtother more. avi was still a little concerned abt kripa...she knew tht by jus telling kripa to stop meeting angad wasnt going to help...but she had no other idea how to get her to avoid him. avi and kripa used to be very close with eachtother...kripa wud tell her everything tht she cudnt tell her mom...and avi didnt want to lose tht bond.
one day kripa was jus hanging at home baking cookies and the home phone rang
K: hello?
it was k's older cuzin/avi's daughter played by gurdeep kohli...but her name will be vedika..she lived in america with her husband..they got married a couple yrs ago
V: hey kripa!
K: omg! vedika didi! how are u??
V: im doing great..how abt you? hows college?
K: same..college's ok...u no its college
V: haha..well i have some good news for u
K: wht?
V: im gonna be coming to india to visit you guys!!
K: wht? omg!! ahhh! tht's great news!! omg im so excited! when ru cuming?
V: nxt week!!
K: omg!! i cant wait!!
V: neither can i!!
K: here ill give the phone to yur mom
V went over to avi and gave the phone
Av: hello
V: hey mama its me!
Av: hi beta how are u?
V: great..guess wht im cuming to india
Av: omg..wow!! this is such great news! when?
V: nxt week
Av: wow! thts so soon im so happy tht yur cuming!
Avi and vedika talked for sumtime and then said bye
Av: im so excited
K: yea me too!!
Av: we better start cleaning up the house...itsa mess!
K: yeah...i no..we shud decorate the place for vedika di!!
Av: yea...thts a gr8 idea
K took her cookies out of the oven and let them cool
Av: hey..we shud invite yur parents too
K: wht?
Av: yur parents shud come here too...vedika will be here...so we shud call yur parents also..they havnt visited for a while
K: yea..thts nice...but wont it be a lil crowded...u no..
Av: well we'll jus call yur parents for the weekend or sumthing
K: yea..but daddy mite be busy with work..
Av: well im sure he get some vacation..hey wait...are u trying to avoid yur parents?
K: no..
she took a bite of one of the cookies
Av: kripa!
K: wht? u wanna cookie?
Av: kripa!!
K: sry
Av: why dont u want yur parents to come??
K: i dunno..its jus tht...
Av: listen, i no u dun get along with them tht much, but their yur parents
K: i no i no i no...they nvr let me forget tht...its jus tht i dunno wht their gonna do when they come. mom's def. gonna try to snoop into my business and stuff
Av: she doesnt snoop into yur business...she cares abt u very much
K: she does too snoop into my business and if she cared abt me she wudnt do tht
Av: kripa why r u so concerened abt wht yur mother does?
K: cuz its annoying
Av: u wud only be concerned if u were actually doing somthing bad....
K: so...wht..now u think im upto no good?
Av: i didnt say tht
K: but u meant it..i cant believe yur going against me
Av: kripa im not going against you!
K: whatever..
K went up to her room and rote in her dairy on the comp.


hey! short part...but hoped u guys liked it!!!!
plz comment!!!!
xoxo
~*Pari*~



Edited by pari786 - 10 July 2006 at 2:05pm

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