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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 20)

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Posted: 13 June 2006 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by del_geo

wonderful part pari! i like ' i hate ekta' line LOL . continue soon


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Posted: 13 June 2006 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by angadlover<3

heyyy!!....i read ur part where u went to hersey's park!!...tht was funni!!..and ur part was funni too!!....fantastic job!!..continue soon!!!

hey!! thank you soo much!! lol, yea hershey park was very funny too
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Posted: 13 June 2006 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
hey guys!! here's part 13!!! hope u like it!!
Part 13:
K: hey simran
S: hey kripa
K: have u seen angad?
S raised her eyebrow at kripa
K: ...or mishti?
S no i didnt see mishti here yet.
K: o ok..
S: so did u get yur cell back?
K: no..if i did id be with angad rite now
S: kripa!
K: wht?
S: seriously dont get too involved with angad..
K: why not...he's so cute!!
S: yea yea i know he is..every single girl here wants to be his gf!but jus cuz he comes frm a rich, famous,beautiful family...doesnt mean he's everything...
K: wht do u mean? he comes frm a very nice family...and he's rilly nice too
S: kripa..i dunno...jus dont u even no abt his past?
K: past? wht do u mean by tht?
S: i dunno...but u jus have to know him very well b4 u say...u love him
K: whtever
S: o - here comes mishti
K: going...
S: wht? where?'
K: hello, me and mishti are in a fite remember?
S: umm...hello, you and mishti wanna get this fite over with remember?
K: hey!
S: come on
K: wht...i jus think mishti shud talk first
S: omg...and she thinks u shud talk first...jus come on..
S pulled K and walked towards mishti
S: hey mishti!
M: hey simran! ..hey...kripa...
K: hi
S: o come on u 2...jus say sorry and hug already!
K: mmmmm....
M: ok...kripa...listen im rily rilly sry abt wht i said...i guess i jus got a lil carried away...i didnt mean wht i rily sry
K: o...well im sry too...if i ever did anything to hurt yur feelings....friends again?
M: definitly
K and M both hugged
K: and i promise tht ill always be there for you...yur one of my very best friends and one of the most important ppl in my life! nvr think tht im not there...cuz u can always talk 2 me
M: (smiles) thanks...yur also very important to me...and im gonna support everything u do...everything..
K: (smiled) thanks mishti
S: yay now we're all friends again!
K: (laughs) lets go to class...
M: o wait..i have to go to the assignment is on the comp and i need to print it out...u 2 go ahead.
S: ok
M went to the library...S and K were heading to their class
S: so...u happy?
K: glad it was jus sumthing little...hav u seen angad?
S: o god
K: wht...i didnt see him at all today...and i need to tell him abt wht happend sat nite.
S: u are so crazy!
K: i no crazy abt him!
S: why are u paying so much attention to him?
K: whts rong? y is everyone saying tht he's not good? like mishti, at first she was so excited abt me and him..and now she thinks i shud back off...and u think so too!!! theres sumthing abt angad tht i dont know...and i need to know.
S: well i dunno angad tht yea....but u know yur aunt is telling u for yur own good....but if u rilly rilly like angad then i guess u cud still go out with him...but jus dont get all obsessed with him...u no wht i mean
K: yea...i guess..
S and K entered class and they saw prithvi
K: omg its pritvhi!
S: (whispers) omg its prithvi!
K: uh..i no thts wht i jus said...
K was walking towards prithvi
K: hey prithvi
P: hey kripa
K: can me and simran sit next to you?
P: sure why not
S: (whispers) kripa..can we sit sumwhere else...plz
K: why?
S: cuz
K: its ok...dun wry...prithvi doesnt have cooties r nething
S: shut up!
K: well im sitting here
K sat down
S: uh...fine
S sat down 2
P: hey simran
S: (nervous) uhhh..hey...prithvi
K: omg
P&S: wht?
K: nothing
P: how was yur weekend simran?
S: it was good..i was jus at home studying for my exam thts cuming up wednesday
P: yea..same here...the exam is gona be rilly rily hard
K: ok can we talk abt sumthing tht i can talk abt too
P: well u jus wanna talk abt boys and shopping
K: o shut up...omg..did u see angad
P: see yur talking abt angad a boy
K: then wht to talk abt? girls? idiot! did u see angad?
P: well i heard wht happend saturday nite..when yur aunt found did it go
K: she doesnt want me to go out with him...but whtever i am!
P: ok then
K: yea...but i didnt get to talk to him at all after sat nite...o i hope he's not mad at me!!
P: dun wry...why wud he be mad at u..everything will be ok...rite, simran?
S: huh..yea..every..thing..will be..fine, kripa
P: (whispers to kripa) why does she stammer alot
K: well she only does it when yur now u no why
P: no....i dont
K: o prithvi..jus-
M came in the room and sat infront of PKS
M: hey i saw angad and josh in the library
K: o did he say nething?
M: angad was asking me abt u...he told u to meet him after 1st period class at his locker
K: ok
the late bell rang and then the whole class stared.

to be cont...
angad will be in the nxt part!!!
comment plz!!!
Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 June 2006 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
hey continue soon that was a great part....gosh kripa is so obssessed lol....hey why is everyone staring in the preview?
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Posted: 13 June 2006 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pooja922

hey continue soon that was a great part....gosh kripa is so obssessed lol....hey why is everyone staring in the preview?

hey thank you so much!! lol yea kripa is i dun get yur question....
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Posted: 13 June 2006 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
no more comments????? Cry Cry
amneetkaur_24 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 June 2006 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
nice part. do continue soon!
music_rules IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 June 2006 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
it's nice i like it
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