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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 19)

angadlover<3 Goldie

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 6:58pm | IP Logged
haha!!!...amazing part!!!..omgg kripa is in big trouble!!..need to noe wht happenes to her!!..plzz cont!!

CrazyChatterbox IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 May 2006 at 12:28am | IP Logged
gr8 part...
and oh no...
kripa is in trouble...
wonder what avantika will do to her???
badgurl4u Senior Member

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Posted: 24 May 2006 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
poor kripa!!!! it was a very good part... please continue soon... Wink
sweet_jaanu27 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 May 2006 at 4:19pm | IP Logged it alls today...hehe...i looove it...gr8 job n continue soon! Big smile
Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 May 2006 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
hey that part was jsut too good....i wanna know what avi does!! plzz continue soon
pari786 Groupbie

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Posted: 25 May 2006 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
hey!! thank you for all yur comments!! ...i continued again...sorta a short part..but hope u like it!!

Part 10 -

Damini told Mishti abt the whole kripa problem thinger.
D: do u no where kripa is?
M: me? (thinking to herself: o god kripa...wht hav u gotten yurslef into) no i dont know...i really dont
D: are u sure
M: yes! im gonna call her rite now
Mishti went up to her room and called Kripa
K's cell rang. Angad jus payed the bill and they both were abt to leave. K jus ingored M's call
M called K 2 more times....but K ingored them both...and then K kept her phone on silent
M texted K: ur aunt nos tht yur lieing 2 her - u r in big trouble!!!!
But K didnt notice the text message since her phone was on the silent so she cudnt hear the bell
So A and K were jus going for drive and they were talking
Avantika tried calling K, but K didnt answer..since it was on silent
Avantika got really really mad lol
Mishti was still very nervous for Kripa cuz she new that she would get in lotsa trouble
Mishti decided to call Angad.
Angad's phone rang.
A: mishti? wht does she want now?
K: (thinking: mishti called angad too!...somthing must be up)
A: hello
M: hey angad! whts up?
A: um...nothing..wht do u want?
M: yea can i talk to kripa
A: huh?
M: jus give the phone to her!
A: kripa
K: hey mishti
M: omg why didnt u answer the phone when i called...did u even read my text message
K: happened
M: everything tht u were hoping wudnt happen happened!
K: huh?
M: yur aunt noes tht yur lieing to her!!! she knows tht yur not with me!!
K: what?!
Mishti told everything to kripa
K: omg omg
K looked at her phone...she saw all the missed calls and messages...
K: o gonna be in so much trouble!!
M: no really!
K: o shut up...wht do i do now?
M: well the sooner u go home the better - so jus tell angad to drop u home now!
K: ok ok...but wht do i tell her when she questions me??
M: i dunno! why are u asking me?? im not expert in all this!!
K: wht...but yur my best friend...yur so supposed to give me advice and help me when i hav problems!!
M: i know...i advised u not to hide stuff frm yur aunt...did u take my advice? no!
K: mishti!
M: sry...i rilly do wana help u...but i dunno wht u shud say
K: ok...well thanks for telling me abt all this...bye
M: good luck
K hung up
K: angad...i need 2 go home?
A: wht? but why?
K: my aunt nos tht i lied and in rilly big trouble..plz jus drop me home
A: ok ok
they reached home.
kripa saw tht the downstairs lights were still on
K: o me.....well bye rilly sry...but the dinner was gr8 and everything..
A: yea....its ok...i hope things work out for you....ill call u tomorrow
K: ok...bye
A: bye
K was too tensed to say love u or give angad a hug
K went inside..and angad left
Av: (sarcastically) comes our princess
K: hi....
Av: come in...why are so quiet? didnt u have fun
K jus looked down
Av: awww...why didnt u have fun?? all yur friends were there...including yur best friend mishti
K: o come on! i know! i know tht u found out! mishti called me and told me everything!
Av: did u go for so long
K: it wasnt so was jus 3 hrs.
Av: ok, if u went with yur friends, i agree, 3 hrs. wudnt be too long, after all yur a modern girl....but u didnt go with yur friends now did u?
K: well... i did go with my friends....jus mishti wasnt there
Av: o come on not dumb! seriously, where were you?
Av: ok...u wont tell me...u want me to call yur parents?
K: no! no stop plz
Av: then tell me where u were!
K: ...

to be cont.
i know a lot didnt happen...and im still keepin u in sry abt tht! but still hope u like the part!!
badgurl4u Senior Member

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Posted: 25 May 2006 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
awesome...continue....Kripa is BUSTED!!!!!!!!!! LOL
angadlover<3 Goldie

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Posted: 25 May 2006 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
WOW!!!..the was amazing!!!... i wonder wht kripa is going to say to avi!! she going to tell her abt angad??...omgg i cant wait to read the next part!!..cont soon!!!

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