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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 19)

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Posted: 12 June 2006 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Desi Pride

OMG this is sooo real!!!!!!! omg..i love it!! cont soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz

hey karishma thank you so much!!!

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Posted: 12 June 2006 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
hey guys!! thank u for yur comments!!
so is out! im rily excited...but i sorta miss my friends...cuz alota them arent cuming back 2 my school nxt yr. newayz..on tuesday we went to hershey park! it was so much fun!! me and my friend jasmine were sitting the the skyview ride was the first time jasmine had sat in the skyview and she's like "omg. im so scared..wht if my shoe falls of" and them im like "o dun wont fall off!" so then we were on the ride and these 2 guys tht were sitting the skyvview ride tht passed us in the opposite direction were like hitting on us. so then jasmine got all overexcited and she kicked and then MY SHOE FELL OFF!! and it fell into the river pond thinger!!! and then i was like "NO!" and one of the guys was like "uh-oh thts not good" and i swear...if i wasnt locked in the chair thinger and we were so many feet above ground i wud've gone up2 him and punch him in the face. so shoe fell off...i got so scared..and im like to my friend " why didnt yur shoe fall off? u were the one who scared! but no my shoe fell off! it jus had to be mine!" but then there was this security guard person by the pond and she saw my shoe...and she said she'd get it for me...and she did thank God. so i was rilly upset then and now i look back it as somthing rilly funny! nxt week im going to Arizona..for a week...and then at the end of July my grandmother and grandpa are coming frm india!!! im so excited!!'s the next part...

Part 12 -

K called up her friend simran (kumud frm kkusum).
K: hey this is kripa
S: o hey kripa...whts up?
K: omg...u cant believe wht jus happend....
K told S the whole story
K: i know! i cant believe she called me tht...wht did i do tht made her think i was conceited and a b
S: i cant believe tht either...i dun see how she could see tht...but whtever she says....yur not tht
K: thanks....its jus tht i considered her as one of my rilly close friends...we clicked instantly..and then this happend...
S: rilly sry for u 2...hey hold up...sum1 is on the other line...omg...its mishti
K: o
S: shud i answer it?
K: yea...see wht she has to say
S: ok..hold on...
S went on mishti's line
S: hey mishti
M: hey
S: whts up
M: omg....u cant believe wht jus happend...
M told S the whole story also
S: wow
M: yea...
S: hold up..sum1 is clicking in...
M: ok
S went to K's call
S: kripa
K: wht she say
S: well she told me the whole wasnt too different frm yurs.
K: ok..whos side r u on?
S: kripa! i dun want to take sides! both of u are my very good friends.
K: fine..ask mishti if she feels bad abt wht she said
S: ok...hold on
S went to M's line
S: so mishti...dun u think u were a lil harsh... u sorta overreacted...
M: yea...i guess...i thinking abt it....i do kinda feel bad...i shudnt have called her a b...and i didnt mean it..
S: i dun think u did either
M: its jus tht kripa is like ''its all abt me girl...
S: um...hold on a sec...
S went to K's line
S: she said she felt bad for wht she said
K: o good...but i dun get why she said tht in the first place...
S: hold up
S went to M's call
S: so where were we...rite...u were feeling bad
M: mean i really love her...she's a real cool girl and all...but i want her to have some concern for others..i mean wht if one day i get in a problem...and i need her help...but she's be too busy with her own self
S: oic
M: yea...but the b part i absoluetly did not mean...i was jus a lil mad...well very mad
S: i understand...hold on a min
M: why do u keep on telling me to hold on??
S: um...u see cleaning my room...and im sorta moving things i sorta have to keep the fone down sumtimes....
M: o ok...i can call u back some other time...
S: um..ok..sry...i jus hope things work out btw u and kripa
M: ok..thanks...and its ok...bye
S: bye
S went to K's line
S: mishti is rily rilly sry....she didnt mean the b part...and she jus didnt want u not having concern abt her when she's in problems
K: always be there for her! well i hav to go my aunt is here...
S: o ok...but u and mishti better make up soon...u 2 shudnt fite over sumthing rilly silly
K: yea...i guess
S: u shud talk to her tomorrow at college.
K: yea i guess i shud..u think she'll talk to me
S: im sure she will....she rilly regrets the whole fite thing...seriously...if u 2 dun make up gonna h8 both of u more than i h8 ekta kapoor....dun fite over sumthing rilly stupid...ok???
K: (laughs) yea i guess it is rilly stupid...thank u so much...ill talk to u tomorrow...bye
S: bye

2 be cont...
well i hope u guys liked it!! sorta short i guess...but still hoped u like it!! i can add part 13 l8r today...or tomoroww....whenever u want me to so tell me when u want me to and comment also!!! and im sry..angad isnt cuming alot rite now...but he will soon!!!

Edited by pari786 - 13 June 2006 at 6:11pm
Simiran Senior Member

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Posted: 12 June 2006 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
That was really good, can you plz contiune today plz.
*dels* IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 June 2006 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
wonderful part pari! i like ' i hate ekta' line LOL . continue soon
Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 June 2006 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
hey great part yaar...continue soon...
indiandoll89 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 12 June 2006 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
GREAT PART!!! Big smile Con't soon!!!!!
angadlover<3 Goldie

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Posted: 12 June 2006 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
heyyy!!....i read ur part where u went to hersey's park!!...tht was funni!!..and ur part was funni too!!....fantastic job!!..continue soon!!!
pari786 Groupbie

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Posted: 13 June 2006 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Simiran

That was really good, can you plz contiune today plz.

hey thanks so much!! i am really really sorry that i cudnt update the nxt part yesterday tho!! im rilly am!!

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