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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 18)

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Posted: 22 May 2006 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
omg...i am soo sry..i havnt continued in 2 weeks!!! thts so crazy!! but im rilly rily jus busy studiing for all my tests...and my mom sorta gets annoyed when im on the KYPH forum..cuz she nows my "dhyan" (sp?) is going else yea.. but i finnally continued!! and i hope u like it!!
Part 9:
K: omg.....whts gonna happen now? where is he???
M: dun prolly jus went to get u sum roses!!
K: roses?
M: yea
K: whatever....he prolly got mad tht i was taking so he left!!
M: no kripa...he wudnt do hold on
Mishti called angad...this time he picked up
M: angad! where r u?
K grabbed the fone...and mishti stood close to listen
K: angad!
A: hey hey sry..
K: why did u leave??
A: ok...i was waiting outside...near yur house....and then yur unlce was i drove away before he could see me...
K: omg! thank you so much...
M: why did it take him so loong
K: mishti!
A: wht?
K: o nuthing
A: rite outside yur house now...
K: ok ok
K hung up the phone
K: he's rite outside...ok do i look ok?
M: yessss!! now go!!
K: ok ok! im so excited!!
M: me too...well im excited for you!
K: lol ok thanks.
Kripa went outside and sat in angad's car.
Angad was wearing a black kurta with all this tan/biege color work and with the V neck sorta thing-but it wasnt too low and a beige pants.
K: (thinking to herself: aahhh! he's so hot)
A: u look nice
K: thanks u do to
A: were do u wana go eat
K: um....i dun care...where do u wana go
A: where do u wana go
K: where do u wana go?
A: anywhere u wana go
K: o come on..last time i decided which movie to see...this time u can decide where to eat
A: ok...lets go to a chinese resturant
K: no
A: wht?
K: nuthing...sure...lets go
A: do u rilly wana go there
K: yea
A: sure
K: yes!
A: ok then
A: table for to plz
(the waiter will be W)
W: ok come this way
W seated the 2 and gave them the menus
W: wht wud u like to drink
K: pepsi
A: coke
W left
A: so...are u cool with the place? or do u wana go else where?
K: huh? im fine....why wud i wana else where
A: well u didnt look too interested
K: no fine.
A: sure
K: yesss angad!!
A: wht else is going on??
K: not much...i went shopping with mishti and prithvi today
A: prithvi...wht was he doing there?
K: i know...strange rite
A: very stand...but wht was he doing with u?
K: ummm...
Kripa didnt want to tel angad tht she was trying on new clothes and trying to get a guys point of view..cuz then she thought the angad would think she's trying to hard (does this make sense)
K: mishti wanted to spend some quality time with prithvi
A: quality time? sure..
K: ok...mishti, wanted to change here wardrobe a little bit - u no to impress josh- so she called prithvi along to help her pick out some outfits (thinking to herslef: sorry mishti)
A: ohhhh...but prithvi is sucha loser..he has no sense of style...why didnt she call me?
K: would u even come?
A: if it was jus with mishti -defintly not...but if it was with u..i'd consider it
K: (giggles) angad!
A: kripa!
K: ok newayz...yea...but prithvi was so sweet..he didnt wanna be there..but he actually stayed..he's sucha sweetheart..he'd make sucha devoted bf...btw does he hav a gf?
A: nope..he's nvr had one...and i dun think he'll have one anytime soon...he doesnt want to get into relationships..and all..he jus wants to concertrate in school rite now
K: welll thts good...i guess
A: yea... i guess...
Then kripa's phone rang - it was avantika
K: hello
Av: Kripa...i forgot to ask u...wht time are u cuming back??/
K: ummmmm.... (whispers to angad)...its my aunt...she's asking wht time ill be back...wht time shud i say??
A: umm....i dunno!
K: ok...i dunno when ill be with my friends....we're not sure when well be back..
Av: well dun stay out too long...u shudnt be out so late...i dunt even no which friends yu're with
K: friends are very responsible, and decent girls....why are u worriying...mishti is with me 2....why dun u jus trust me?
Av: fine ok...i trust you...go and have fun...but dun be out too late
K: thank you so much..i gtg...bye..luv u
Av: luv u 2 bye
K hung up
A: (mocks kripa) im with my friends...mishti is with me 2...plz trust me!
K: o jus shut up!
A: what? i jus feel very bad for your aunt....she trusts you...and she believes every word u say...but every word u say is jus lies!
K: angad! come on...stop making me feel bad!! its not like im doing somthing extremly bad...
A: exactly...yur not doing nething why do u have to hide everything frm her?
K: a girl...and when a girl meets a guy like this...the girl's family gets very p-oed and they try to split the guy and girl apart forever and ever....dont u watch the movies??
A: not the movies tht u watch
K: o point is if u wanna continue seeing aunt cant know abt it...cuz if she finds out, she will tell my mom and then my mom will tell my dad and when my dad finds out....o god...i dun even wana imagine!
A: ok ok..i get it
K: sorry angad...i rilly am...its jus know
A: it ok...u dont need 2 say sorry....i understand!
K: ok thanks...angad yur so sweet!
A: (laughs...he held kripa's hand) and so are you
so kripa and angad jus talked and ate dinner and yea
meanwhile avantika is talking to damini (mishti's mom) on the phone.. this is in the middle of the convo
Av: so hows mishti doing?
D: she's doing abt kripa?
Av: shes also good...she rilly likes it here and she's rilly happy...she already has so many friends...she's always hanging out with rite now...their gone out for dinner...i wasnt so willing to let her go...but misti was i said ok..i know mishti is very good and responsible girl.
D: (laughs) well thank you...but wht dinner are u talking abt....mishti is rite here at home
Av: wht? r u sure?
D: yea...she's rite here sitting nxt to me reading a book
Av: wht r u talking abt? kripa said she was going out with mishti and their friends
D: well i dunno..mishti was here the whole entire nite
Av: omg...well ill call u back..ok
D: ok..i hope kripa is alrite...
Av: ok..thanks...bye
D: bye
Av: kripa..u are in big trouble!

to be cont......

ok tht was my part....and once again im rilly sorry tht i cudnt continue soon....but ill try to...schools almost over..and then i have summer break!! so it'll be easier to continue faster!! so i hope u like the part..
omg Karishma/Desi Pride 's Kuch Kuch Hota Hai fanfic is almost over 2!!! i jus think thts an awesome awesome fanfic!! end part will be rilly rilly exciting!!!
and another omg...marissa died in the OC!! even tho i h8 was rilly rilly sad!!
ok...u guys are prolly getting bored of my yea...
comment plz!!!

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Posted: 22 May 2006 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
nkdidi Senior Member

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Posted: 22 May 2006 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
omg! poor kripa LOL
Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3175

Posted: 22 May 2006 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
omg yaar plzzz plzzz continue ......i loved this part..but im dying to know what will kripa say when shes questioned!
.:Angel:. Groupbie

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Posts: 78

Posted: 22 May 2006 at 6:30pm | IP Logged
wow great part Clap continue soon

P.S i kno i cant believe marissa died but my friend
told me she mite just b in a coma but i styl think shez
dead cuz every1's been sayin how mischa barton (the girl that plays marissa)
wanted to leave the show for a while now
RandomSquared IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 May 2006 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
aww hun, I LOVE YOU!1 dun worri..i'll make the ending rly good jus for you! and OMG!!!!! I LOVE THIS this like a biography of my life or friends n i did that like a month ago LOL but we never got caught..OMG, i can jus imagine wut Avi is gonna do...ohh Kripaaaa.....u in trouble!!! lolzz...u make the writng so real, and natural..i love it!! cont soon plzzzzz

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
kripa, u r in big trouble. LOL LOL wonderful part yaar!continue soon.
Ahlaam5 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
amazing part
bechara kripa is in trouble LOL LOL
trouble time LOL

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