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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 15)

Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
awwwwwww that was soo cute!! nice surprise lol!! continue soon cant wait Wink

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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
aaaaaawwwww...swt!!! u better continue sooner now!!!

Edited by SADIYAH - 28 April 2006 at 12:05pm
Ahlaam5 IF-Rockerz

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amazing parts
cont soon
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hurry up! Cry Cry
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amazing part.. Clap Clap Clap
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Part 8:

so it was the nxt day and kripa was at home eating breakfast with avantika
Av: so did u enjoy last nite?
K: yea i friends are totally awesome
Av: thts good
K: hey i rilly need a part time job... i was thinking...maybe babysitting...
Av: o i have a friend whos looking for a babysitter for her 8 yr old daughter...she's a rilly sweet girl
Kripas phone rang
K: o hold on a sec...sry....hey mishti
M: hey im going to the mall this afternoon...u wana come
K: defentily!
M: u there 12.30?
K: sure..k talk 2 ya then
M: cya
K hangs up the phone.
K: tht was mishti...were going to the mall
Av: yur always at the mall..spending money on more clothes than u actualy need
K: yep...thts why i want a proud of me....atleast i found my weakspot and i wana fix it
Av: yu pagal ladki
K: (laughs) well i better go get ready now

The Mall:
Kripa meets Mishti and Prithvi
K: hey mishti...hey prithvi......didnt no u were cuming...
M: sry i 4got to tell u he's coming 2
K: ok thts cool..
P: i didnt want to come here....but mishti was begging me so much
M: wht? i thought we cud spend time with eachother
P: havnt we spent our whole entire lives together??
K: omg! guys i need to find a rilly nice outfit....angad is taking me out for dinner tonite!!!!
P: ok ok! plz....can u 2 plz stop screaming
K: o sry...but its so exciting
M: prithvi, ull nvr understand, ur a guy
P: thank god
K: uh...whatever....newayz...i need to find the perfect outfit....
P: do i rilly have to be here?
K: yes! i need a guys point of view too
M: ok...come on
mishti and kripa were shopping like crazy and prithvi was all bored. K and M made P hold all their
K and M were in the fitting room trying sum clothes on. they came out of the stall and looking in mirror
K: prithvi is so sweet...even tho he has no interest in shopping with us..he's still,well,shopping with us!
M: i no, rite! i bet angad and josh wudve nvr done this
K: well angad wud've, if I asked him
M: uh...brat
K: i know! newayz...prithvi is rilly sweet....i think he'd make a perfect bf..
M: yea...which ever girl gets to have him as their bf wud be rilly lucky
K: yea....and you can be tht girl
K: well, yea
M: kripa tht is so sick! prithvi and me? no way!!!
K: uh...fine....i was jus sayin....u can go ahead and crush on not stopping u
M: whatever...anyways how do u like these jeans?
K: way cute...hows this top
M: its adorable!
they bought the clothes and gave the bags to prithvi
P: rilly tired...havnt u 2 done enough shopping
K: NO! i havnt bought the outfit tht im gonna were tonite
P: did u make big deal when u went out with angad before?
K: no
P: so why now?
M: thts cuz last time they went for this movies...this time there going to a resturant
P: ok..whatever...can i leave now?
K: NO! prithvi plz dun leave...i need yur help on finding the outfit!! plz plz plz plz plz!!!
P: ok ok ok! ill stay jus for half an hour
K: ok! come on...lets go to tht shop
K tried out an outfit....she tried tht pink dress tht she wore at Aap Jaisa Koi Awards
K: how do u like it?
M: its looks so beautiful on you!
P: yea it does...but isnt too shimmery?
K: omg! yur rite....if angad see's me like this...he'll think im a freak!
P: relax....dun worry....he wont think tht abt u...he rilly likes u....why r u so self-consious
K: ok ok
M: jus try on another outfit
K: ok....but i rilly like this outfit
M: so then buy it anyways!
K: okay!
ok so soon kripa finally decided on an outfit that she'd wear tonite. it was a creme sundress with maroon flowers
K: so this outfit is good rite?
M: beautiful
P: do u like it?
K: yea
P: so then its good
K: but angad will like it too....rite? like...he'll like it on me rite?
P: yea....again-why are u so self-consious? looks arent everything
K: i no looks arnt everything...but still...and i am not self-consious
P: sure...
K: shut up
M: ok wht time is it?
P: its almost 6
K: its almost 6!
P: yea....thts wht i jus said...
K: i no tht...but angad is gonna come at the time we get home it'll be 6.15....its gonna take me atleast 1 hr and a half to get ready!
M: ok dun wry...u'll make it....ill come to yur house and help u get ready
K: huh?
M: like the make-up and everything!
K: o ok...come on
Kripa and Mishti went home and Prithvi went to his house
Kripa took a shower, and put on her dress and make up and everything..Mishti was curling her was 6.50 already
M: oh u look so pretty?
K: what? dun i always look pretty?
M: yessss....but tonite u look even prettier!
K: aww...thank you!
Kripa's cell rang
K: angad?
A: waiting outside...
K: wht...but its only 6.50....u said yur coming at 7
A: well i came 10 minutes earlier...big deal
K: not ready yet! jus give me 5 minutes...and ill be there! plz
A: ok...ill wait....but if yur aunt or uncle sees me and question u..its not my fault
K: ok ok ok ill be there soon bye
M: wht happend?
K: he's here....wht am i gonna do now?//
M: yur ok....u look gorgeous! now jus go and have a good time!
K: so excited!!
M: im so excited 4 u 2!!
K: wht shud i do wht shud i say?
M: calm down....this isnt the first time yur going out w/ him
K: i no...but last time was the movies...we were busy watching the movies....this time were actually gona talk...
M: rite...but dun wry...everything will be great
K: ok thanks!
Kripa hugged Mishti
Kripa opened the door....but she saw no car angad...
K: aaahhh!!
M: what happened?
K: angad is not here!
M: omg
K: mishti...did he jus dump me?
M: no...
K: then why did he leave?
M: i dunno...jus call him
K called angad...but it jus kept on cuming to his voicemail
K: where is angad?????!!!!

to be cont...

ok...sry i took a lil while to update..and sry...this part is too gr8...but i tried...i sorta dragged it a lil....i know where i want this to go....but im jus having a lil trouble starting plz...bear with me! and dun wry....angad isnt rilly missing comment and if u have any suggestions do tell me!


Edited by pari786 - 08 May 2006 at 5:48pm
Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 May 2006 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
hey that was great!!! continue soon....where is he?
pari786 Groupbie

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Posted: 08 May 2006 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pooja922

hey that was great!!! continue soon....where is he?

thanks! angad is there...dun wry!! lol

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