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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 (Page 13)

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i am very very happy that u continued, thanks a lot for that. it really wonderful. i want to read more of it, so continue soon

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hey taht was brilliant..continue soon Smile
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Excellent part!!
Continue SOON!! Tongue
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that was really good please write more
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so cute.. continue soon Big smile
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Originally posted by nabz8888

that was sooooooooo cute !!! amazing job n cont. soon!!! hope mr. clueless ( that's josh's nick from now on,hope u don't mind!!) realizes that misthi is way better than all those other gals he flirts with.


thanks so much...lol- yep u can call him mr.clueless...but he'll find out soon......
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its great
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hey guys! thanks for yur comments! and since i didnt update in loooong time...i decided to update today also!!
hope u like it!!

Part 7:

K came home and sat down to do her homework. Avantika just got off the phone.
Av: oh, hi kripa. How was your day
K: my day was as sweet as a chocolate bar
K is writing 'Angad' in bubble letters with hearts around them in her notebook
Av: a chocolate bar???
K: yes, a chocolate bar
Av: ooookkk then....are u busy Friday nite?
K: No, i don't think so why?
Av: ok. My friend naina invited us for dinner and a whole bunch of family friends are coming. You know just a small getting together sorta thing.
K: oic....will ne1 my age be there
Av: yea...naina has a son...he's yur age...
K: ooohhh....is he hot?
Av: Kripa!
K: jk jk jk
Av: naina also has a dauhter whos a couple yrs yunger than u.
K: o ne1 else?
Av: yea theres 2 other guys yur age and there is another girl yur age also
K: cool...whts her name
Av: Mishti
K: Mishti? Mishti Bose?
Av: yea.....
K: omg! She's in my college..and she's like my best friend
Av: oh thts nice!
K: are the guys angad, prithvi and josh
Av: yea
K: there my friends too! The 5 of us are like a whole group
Av: well thts nice...so yur coming with me Friday nite, rite?
K: yep!
Friday Nite - Khanna House
N: angad! Come down here! NOW!
Angad comes out of his room and is standing by the balcony thinger. Angad hated all these get together things. He jus didnt like getting dressed up and greeted all the aunties and uncles. Lol
A: yes,mom
N: angad! I need u here now! The guest will be coming any minute now. You need to greet them!
(Aaliya is angad's sis-the old one played by Mansi verma...I think thts her name- )
Aa: Mom. Why r u troubling him? Im here...ill greet the guests
N: but i want both of my kids here...it looks bad when angad is upstair locked up in his room!
A: yes and it also looks bad when yur husband isnt here
N: angad!
A: sry
A came downstairs
Aa: wht r u wearing?
A: clothes, wht else
Aa: but thts jus toooo casual
he was wearing jeans tht were all torn up at the bottom and a tee
N: angad! Why are u doing this to me?
A: wht am I doing?
N: come up with me! Come rite now
A: first u told me to come down, now yur saying go up
N: ugh...just do as I say!
They went upstairs to angads room and naina opened his closet
N: here look at this white kurta I got u...its so nice...why don't u ever wear it?
Angad made a face
N: ugh...just wear it
A: ugh...fine
N: and plz wear some other pair of jeans tht arnt torn up like tht
A: ok, mom
N: God angad u irritate me so much
she said tht as she left the room
A: I love you mommy!
Angad quickly got dressed and came downstairs.
Aa: you look nice
A: shut up. This is so weird
Aa: (laughs)
doorbell rings
N: ok sum1's here...is my hair ok...wht abt my make-up?
A&Aa: you're fine!
A&Aa went to get the door. It was josh and his family. They greeted eachtother...and naina went with josh's parents to the living room.
Aa: hi josh...how are u?
J: im good....
A:......yur supposed to ask how I am!
J: o...i am?
Aa: ugh! Yur sucha loser! (Thinking to herself: but u totally won my heart)
Aaliya secretly liked josh...but no1 know...not even angad
A: aaliya, go away,no1 likes u
Aa: YOU just don't like ne1
J: he likes kripa
A: josh!
Aa: Kripa? Who's she?
J: angads gf- don't u know?
Aa: bhai, u hav a gf? I mean I knew girls were crazy abt u...but I nvr knew u wud fall for one of those idiots
A: shut up..shes not an idiot...and plz dun tell mom abt this
Aa: why not? She wont get mad or nething
A: I know tht - but she'll get all into my business and stuff
Aa: tht'll be fun. Im telling mom
A: ok then go ahead. Then ill tell her abt u and rahul (random guy)
Aa: wht? Nuthing is going on btw me and him
A: yea..well ill make sumthing up...and mom believes everything I say abt u
Aa: ok fine I wont tell!
A: good
Aa: o I h8 u
A: I've bin h8ing u
Aa: newayz I need to meet this kripa girl
J: dude she's rilly hot
A: shut up. She's mine..u can have all the other girls
J: ok. Cool with me
Aa: ugh..morons...when will I meet kripa
J: ok...u busy tomorrow afternoon?
Aa: nope
J: k...then ill met u at the mall..and ill call kripa there too
Aa: cool!
A: Josh! Aaliya! Stop! U guys are getting way too overexcited!
Aa: sry but I cant help it...u finally got a gf after u and-
A: - aaliya shut up!
Aa: sry
A: its ok
more guests started coming. Prithvi's and mishti's family came and many other families.
So prithvi,mishti, josh, angad, and aaliya were hanging out in the basement...it was like A,J,P,and M's hang out spot...but aaliya was with them just for now.
So everyone was getting rilly bored cuz theres was little kids there frm the other families and they were running around screaming, etc.
J: this is so boring           
P: i know
M: i wish kripa were here
A: me 2           ;
Aa: me 3
M: huh?
Aa: yea..I rilly wana meet this girls...shes bhai's gf!!
P: u told her everything
A: I didnt...josh did....
A little kid accidently threw a ball at angad's face
A: You little!
M: angad calm down
P: why dont we go upstairs to yur room...
A: good idea...come on guys
as they were going up the doorbell rang
A: more ppl? Wasnt tht everyone?
Aa: thts wht I was thinking.... its bin like 30 min. since tht last person came
they both went to get the door. Naina came too
N: Avantika! U finnally came! Wht took u so long?
Av: My nieve takes sucha long time to get ready. She's still doing her makeup in the car!
N: girls nowadays
Av: yea...oh hi angad, hi aaliya
A&Aa: hi aunty
Av: God! Wht is taking this girl so long? KRIPA!
A&Aa: (surprised)
K: (comes outta the car) comming. (She came running to the door) sorry
Av: Naina, this is my niece, Kripa
N: hi kripa, wow yur so beautiful and I love yur dress
Kripa was wearing a pink and white salwar kameez. The top part was pink with white designs and the bottom part was white with pink designs...and the dupatta was pink and white
K: hi, thank you
N: I'm Naina and this is my son, Angad and daughter, Aaliya
K: yea..i know angad...he's in my college..and we're great friends
N: really?
K: yea
Av: she even knows prithvi, josh and mishti
N: thts good...ok....kripa, u can hang out with angad and the gang..dinner will be served in 30 more min.
Naina and avatika went
A: Kripa?
Aa:Kripa?
K: Kripa!
A&Aa: huh?
K: wht? Every1 else was saying my name so I decided too...
A: uh yea whtver- wht r u doing here?
K: well remember I said im here with my aunt? Well avantika is my aunt and she is close friends with yur mom
A:oooooo
Aa: omg! Yur kripa???
K: umm...yea..havnt u figuired tht out by now?
Aa: omg! Your so sweet and gorgeous
K: thank you..yur also rilly pretty
Aa: thanks
A: ok now...do u wana go now...prithvi,josh, and mishti are waiting upstairs
Aa: o yea come on
aaliya went up. Angad was abt to go up to and but kripa held his arm
K: so
A: so
K: say sumthing!
A: say wht?
K: angad! Do u even now why I came this late?
A: yea..cuz u were taking time getting ready.
K: ugh...yes...but why?
A: cuz yur a girl
K: angad! ugh!(thinking to herself: I took all this time to look nice for angad!)
A: ok ok...im jus playing with u...u look rilly hot
K: (giggles) shut up!
A: wht? U jus told me too say sumthing...and now yur telling me shut up! Yur jus like my mom! God....women!
K: angad!
A: wht
K: by the way...u look very cute in tht outfit. U shud wear those kinda clothes more often
A: oh...thanks....so yur still up for tomorrow nite
K: of course
Aaliya came down
Aa: u 2! Come on upstairs we're waiting for you!!!
A: o crap....come on
so they went up and had fun. Lol

to be continued...
i no the chocolate thing was kinda wierd...but my friend was actually saying tht whole chocolate thing...and she' sorta ditzy..but i luv her! lol...newayz...hope u liked it! plz comment!! and if u have any ideas or suggestions plz tell me!! i dun wanna be like ekta and do the opposite of wht u want!! lol
~*Pari*~

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