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Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey guys...im starting this fanfic...cuz sum1 suggested i shud...if u are a ff reader....plz read and comment!


Background Info: Angad, Josh, Prithvi, and Mishti are like a 4sum...eveyr since they were lil babies and yea..
Part 1
Its the first day of college and its lunch time..
A- (sits down at a lunch table outside w/ lunch)
J- (comes and sits by angad)Hey angad  Whts up?
A- not too much....you?
J- same
P- (prithvi comes and sits w/ A and J) hey guys
J- hey prithvi
A- hey...whts up?
P- o jus the usual...where's mishti?
A- I have no idea...but I sorta like it without her
J- hey there she is...whos tht girl standing nxt to her?
Angad turns around and sees mishti standing to this sweet, cute girl. And tht girl is kripa, ofcourse  
Angad keeps on staring at her...shes the most "beautifulist" girl he's ever seen.
P- Angad? Angad? Angad?
J- (slaps Angad - LOL) ANGAD
A- What? What happened?
P- What the hell happend to you? You jus went blank
A- whatever...whos tht girl standing nxt to mishti?
J- well we'll jus find out. MISHTI

Mishti looks up and sees Josh.
M - o lemme introduce u to my friends, come.
Mishti and Kripa walk up to Josh, Prithvi and Angad
M - hey guys...this is Kripa she's in my Chemistry class....Kripa this is Josh, Angad, and Prithvi
Guys- hey nice to meet you
K- hi...nice to meet you too.
M - I have known these guys since forever...our parents and grandparents and other ancestors have been best friends...so I guess Im sort of forced to be best friends w/ them...there cool and all...but sumtimes it can get a lil weird since im the only girl and im stuck w/ these 3 idiotic and clueless guys.
K- (laughs)
J- o jus shut up mishti
P- (laughs) so....Kripa, you wanna have lunch w/ us?
K- um...
J- yea have a seat and eat with us
K - uh..
M - o come on Kripa...
K- alrite  
Kripa and Mishti sat with the guys and they all ate lunch together. They all talked and got to Kripa a lil bit more...and Kripa got to know they guys and Mishti More....but Angad remained quiet the whole time...
Then they all finished there lunch.
K- well im finished...and I have to go to my nxt class soon...thank you guys so much for talking to me and all...and making me feel welcome...I rilly enjoyed it.
P- no problem
J- yea...u shud come eat lunch with us everyday know...(josh tapped angad)
A- huh...yea...u shud...
Kripa had a feeling tht angad didnt like her.
M - well, come on Kripa, we have to go to our nxt class...we dun wanna be late...arn't u guys going to yur nxt class?
J- wht?  Are u crazy? We have our hindi class nxt....and our teacher is tht old hag Mrs.Kakkad...she has sum serious issues dude
P- yea...shes always hitting on us guy students, especially Angad
J- (laughs) yea  She calls him angu  Haha angu
A- jus shut up josh
J- its jus a joke angad. Anywayz....we're jus skipping hindi class
M - (laughs) ok...come on kripa lets go.
Kripa and Mishti leave.
J- dude, angad wht the hell
P- I think angad likes sum1...
J- who? who?
P- (rolls eyes) kripa  Who else?
A- wht the hell, prithvi....thts jus crap....I dun like kripa
P- then why were u staring @ her?
A- ok...honestly I have no idea why I was staring at her...I dunno....shes pretty and sweet and all....but I dun like like her
J- and why didnt u say nething the whole time? And why the hell did u tell me 2 shut up?  
A- I didnt say nething cuz there was nuthing to say....and I told u to shut up cuz yur an idiot
J- oh. Ok. (Josh didnt rilly care)            
A- (rolls eyes and walks away)
P- whts with him?
J- I have no idea....he prolly has like 2 personalities...or sumthing is prolly taking over his mind
P- (jus stares at josh like hes a maniac)
J- What?
P- josh....jus shut up  (He walks away)
J- (talking to himslef) Why is every1 telling me to shut up? Am I rilly tht idiotic ?

That nite, when Angad was going to bed...he was thinking abt wht pritvi and josh were telling him....abt how they thought he like kripa and all...Angad rilly didnt like like kripa...he didnt even no why he was staring at kripa...he had no clue wht was going on....lol

Preview: There's a party going on and Angad and Kripa start to talk 2 eachother for the first time

Okay guys  Tht was the first part to my fanfic  I hope u guys liked it  I got tht whole hindi class-mrs.kakkad thing frm the movie main hoon naa....which most of u mite have realized...well I hoped u liked it  Plz post yur comments!

~*Pari*~

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Posted: 18 years ago
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its so nice plz continue !!!!!!!!!   ðŸ˜‰ 😉 😉
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im sooo proud of uuu 😆 cont soon!!!
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hey i really like it so far. plzzz continue soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys! thanks for reading and liking my ff.... 😃 😊 i'll continue either tontite or tomorrow...i have 5 tests coming up nxt week and i rilly need to studdy for them   ðŸ˜” 😔 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
He Succes for ur exams sweety
then later cont ur fan fic okie
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good luck on your exams and continue when you can 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
i rly enjoyed that part! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Good luck
and continue when u have time plz!!




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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys! thanks so much for yur comments!! sry i cudnt update earlier i had my tests n all....but i finished all my tests! and now we have spring break!! yay!!

Part 2           ; ;         &n bsp; ;          ;  ;

So it's the nxt day of college..and classes happen...and then college is over...every1 was going hope....

Angad is about to go home in his car, when a girl comes up to him..(shes jus a random girl)
G- Hi Angad
A- o hey...whoever you are...
G- how rude My name is priya...
A- ok...
P- well my bday is the Saturday and im holding a party at my place. Heres the invitation and the directions are there too.
A- im not sure if ill be able to cum (as u can see, angad isnt all crazy and into girls)
P- Angad Plz
A- why do u want me cum so bad?
P- cuz ur jus too cute...I rilly want u to cum
A- ok...if ur rilly want me to cum...ill cum..who else will be there?
P- every1 will be there...josh, mishti, pritvi...the whole entire college is cuming...
A- or did u jus invite the whole entire college but only 1/100 of them are cuming?
P- Angad
A- ok ok sry...so yea...ill be there...
P- promise?
A- am I yur bf to promise you?
P- not yet, but u will soon (she blows a kiss at him and walks away)
A- wht a weird chic
J- (comes upto Angad) whoa angad....wht was going on there...r u 2 going out?
A- hell no
J- sweet...I shud ask her out sum time...by the way whts her name?
A- her names priya...wait didnt she invite u to her party on sat?
J- uh...o yea...I 4got....lol....yea I get so many party invitations frm the girls....I 4get abt sum
A- sure, Josh.
J- im serious!
A- whatever...so r u going or not?
J- ya im going..u?
A- sure. Well I gotta go...see ya l8r
J- bye

Priya's party
Angad, Josh, Prithvi enter the party and all these girls cum rushing up to angad and josh and ask them to come and dance.lol. Angad and josh go with the girls and prithvi waits for mishti and kripa. And then mishti and kripa enter!
P- hey mishti. Hey kripa
M - hey
K- hi
M - where's josh and angad?
P- dancing with the girls
M - (gets jealous) what? Why is josh dancing with all those girls? Ugh he is sucha flirt and this irritates me so much! Lemme go find him...prithvi, u cum with me
K- (jus sits on a chair near by)
A- (sees kripa siting by herself and goes upto her) hey kripa
K- o hi...um...
A- angad
K- (laughs) sorry...angad...
A- its ok....so wheres mishti..isnt she hanging out with you..
K- well we came together and when prithvi said josh was dancing with all those girls, she got all mad and went looking for him..
A- ya...she likes him...more than a friend..
K- (laughs) yea....thts wht I was thinking...
A & K - (laugh)
K- so u like theses parties?
A- ya I guess...its sorta fun...hanging out with friends and all...do u like em?
K- ya...same with me...I like hanging with friends...
A- so do u dance at parties
K- yea actually I do...I love dancing
A- really?
K- yea..
A- so y rnt u dancing now?
K- angad! I dun no ne1 here...it'll be akward...I only dance and party with my friends....
A- rnt we friends now?
K- um....(sorta happy)...yea...
Aashiq banaya aapne remix plays in background.
A- hey this is my fave song! Kripa come on, lets go dance
K- angad!
A- plz kripa!!
K- fine!
Angad and Kripa go on the dance floor and dance n party...they danced to a few songs and then they went to get sumthing to drink
A- tht wasnt so bad now was it?
K-(laughs) no its wasnt...thanks...
A- thanks? Wht for?
K- well u sorta helped get open up and all
A- (laughs) no prob...
Mishti and Prithvi and josh come...
J- hey kripa!
K- hi josh
J- so do u like the party?
K- yea im rilly enjoying it....thanks to someone very special...
M, J, P - huh?
K- o nothing! Omg...
J- well the girls are waiting for me at the dance floor...ttyl...
M - (mumbles to herself) tht idiot
K- wht happened?
M - nothing...
A- (whispers to K) see wht im talking abt...
K-shut up!
Angad and prithvi go and hang out sumwhere else.
K- mishti whts the matter?
M - nothing....I dunno...I think I rily rily like josh...I dunno...I mean I always wanna be with him and I get all mad when I see him flirting with all those girl...but when I ask myself If I like him I think no...I dunno....its jus so confusing!
K- dun worry....jus dun concentrate on him too much...you'll be okay....
M - thanks...so u were partying with angad, huh?
K- yes.....
M - I saw u two together....u know...u both do make a cute couple....
K- Mishti!!
M - (laughs)
K- well....he is sorta cute...but its rilly weird ....the other day at lunch it was like he didnt want to be near me...and today he asked me to dance with him...
M - I guess he was jus rilly shy the first time.....he doesnt like hanging out with girls too much....hes not too crazy abt them...unlike josh!
K- (laughs) I see....so has angad ever had any girlfriend?
M - um...wht?
K- did angad ever hav any girlfriend...??
M - ......

To be continued...
ok i hope u guys like it!
sry if its sorta dumb...lol
btw i may not be able to come on for a week...cuz tomorrow im going to aruba!! so ill be back in less than a week..
comment plz!
~*PARI*~Edited by pari786 - 18 years ago