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Dk & Disha: KUCH NA KAHO (Page 9)

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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 11:47am | IP Logged
is priya ki toh mai Angry
jaanu that was really good hats off Big smile

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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
agree with you Pachu jaanu...this Priya is so uffff!!! Angry
Great part Guli!!! Tongue
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jaslove

jaanu that was really good hats off Big smile


Jaanu....u wear hats? dang...i didn't know that!!

Kewllll...i love hats too!! i have nikeEmbarrassed....what kind u have??Confused



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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 10:14pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~

Originally posted by Jaslove

jaanu that was really good hats off Big smile


Jaanu....u wear hats? dang...i didn't know that!!

Kewllll...i love hats too!! i have nikeEmbarrassed....what kind u have??Confused



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jaanu wear hats only in the summer time, have champion, nikeBig smile

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Part 16

Disha does her work and what not!

Dk keeps looking at her!

Disha notices

Disha: What??

Dk: Nothing! Just looking at you!!!

Disha: well do ur work!!!!

Dk: but if u are here… how can I?

Disha: Okay then I will leave!

Dk: No don't leave…..

Disha laughs!

She had to go out anyways!

Dk keeps staring!!!!

Disha clocks out

And she goes and picks up Adi!!!

Adi hugs her!

Aryan sees her and says hi!!!!

He hugs her!!!

he hugged her!!!!!!!!!!

Priya comes there

And sees

And she gets soo annoyed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She cant stand to see that!

Aryan hugs

And says bye!!!

Disha takes Adi

Priya comes and takes Aryan!

When they come home…..

Priya gets a call

And she starts yapping and what not!

Aryan keeps nagging her

Cuz he wants food

She ignores him

Disha feeds Adi!!!

Adi is like yummy!!!!!

Cuz Disha's food is tasty!!!

Aryan thinks about Disha

She was soo nice to him

And she fed him and everything

She looks at his mom

And she's just talking!!

Aryan is like please mommy!

Priya tells him to keep quiet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And she yells!!!

Aryan walks away

And tells her that Disha aunty was much nicer!!!

And blah blah blah

And now she fed him and what not

He was saying that while walking off

P heard that

And she gets sooo mad!

She puts the phone down!!!!

She tells him to stop

And says u went there? And ate?

He's like yes!!!

Priya is like u went into that house

That small house!!!

In a middle class home!

She's like what does she think of herself?

She's like I will show her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That you don't mess w/ people like me!!!!!!!!!!

Only cuz she's sick of hearing her name

Over and over again!!!

And middle class…..

What do they have? Nothing!!!!

Meanwhile….

Dk is thinking about Disha!

Ved comes and sits next to him!

Ved looks at him

He's like when will u find out the truth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Part 17

He just thinks that to himself!

Next Morning

Priya calls people

And makes up all this crap about Disha

And how she cant take care of her son

And what not!!

And she's not a good mother and what not!!!!…..

And she laughs!!!!

Cuz she enjoys this!

Someone knocks on Disha's door

She goes and opens it

There are some people there

Disha is like yes?!

Who are you?

They tell her

They are from special services and what not

Disha; Special services??

Guy: Yes!!!

Disha is like wat are they doing here!!!!

Adi comes out

He cries….

And says he spilled some milk on his shirt

Disha is like that's okay.. I will come and change it!!!

They tell Disha

That what kind of home do you live in?

Disha is like what??

They start going on and on

How she cant take care of her son

Disha is like who are you to tell me that?

Everything is okay!!!

They make their way

And look at the house

And see everything!

They talk to amongst themselves

And say that Adi cant live in a house like this!!!

And that you as his mother….

Don't know how to take care of him!!!

Disha is shocked!

She's like what!!!!!!!!!!

The gal goes

And takes Adi

Adi is like mommy where are they taking me?

Disha yells

And fights

Saying that they cant do this

She's saying no!!!!!!!!!!

They don't listen

Adi is crying for Disha!!!!

Disha trying to go to him

They don't let her

And they take him

Disha is like no!!!

She is yelling

She's like where are you taking my son??

She's crying!!!!!!!!!!

Priya's in her car

And sees all this

She smiles

And she drives off!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is totally shattered!!!!!!!!!!!!

She falls on her knees!!!!!!!!!

Adi is crying

And says he wants his mom!

The gal says

He will get a new mommy

And that she will love you soo much

And she will take good care of u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Adi is like no!

He wont calm down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Part 18

Meanwhile

Disha keeps saying my child!!

My child!!!!!

That's all she says!

She goes to people

And says give me my kid

They think she has gone nuts!!!

Dk looks at his clock

And is thinking why hasn't Disha come yet!

He calls the house

No answer!!!

He's worried now!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved's in his office

He comes to know about Disha

He is totally shocked!!!!

He's like oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved goes to Dk's cabin….

Ved; Brother!!!!!…………

Dk looks at him

Dk senses something isnt right!!!

Ved: Disha…..

Once he says that

Dk stands up

And is like what happened to her!!

Ved is like come w/ me!!!

Dk and Ved leave the office!!!!…….

Disha's by her house…

She's out

And is like my kid!!!

She's crying

And if you see her

Oh man..

Its bad!

Dk and Ved arrive

DK sees Disha!!!

Dk goes to her

Disha is crying!!!!

Dk: Disha???

Disha cries!!!

Dk: Disha whats wrong??

Disha doesn't care at this point

Disha; My child!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY CHILD IS GONE!!!!

Dk is like WHAT????????

Ved is like oh man!!

Ved is like please god!!!!

Don't let anything bad happen!!!!!!

Disha: My child!!!! Do u have my child!!!!!!??????

Dk is looking at her!!!

Dk: Child????

Disha breaks down by his legs

She's saying my child!!

Dk is looking at her condition!!!!

Ved: Brother!! U have to know something….

DK is looking at Ved!

Ved tells her

About that Disha has a kid!!!!!

Whatever Disha had told him

Ved tells Dk!!!!

Dk is completely shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: U knew this??

Ved: Yes!!! She didn't want me to tell u…..

Dk looks at her!!!!

He comes down to her

Dk: Disha!

Holds her face!!

Disha: My child!! They took my child from me!!!

Dk looks at her home

He's like I have come here before!!!!

And then it clicks!!
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Part 19

DK: Adi is ur son??????

Disha looks at him

Disha; Where's my Adi?????????

Disha grabs his collar

And asks him….

Disha goes crazy

And asks him

Where is he??

Do you have him???

Dk: Disha.. calm down please!!!

Disha doesn't!!!

Dk takes her in the car

They take her to Saigal House…..

Disha isnt paying attention to anything!!!!!

Dk calms her down!!

Dk is like nothing will happen!!!!

Dk gets up…….

He goes to the people!!!!!

He sees other kids………

Now those kids they have problems!!

They either have no parents

Or they are treated badly!!!!

Dk goes to the people

And say he is looking for kid named Adi…

The gal looks at him

Dk: Where is he??

Gal: In here!!!!!

She takes him…..

Dk goes inside

Adi is crying in the corner

He's talking to himself…

And saying he wants his mommy!!!!

Dk sees him…….

He's thinking of Disha

And him!!!

Dk is asking her…

Why is he here????

Gal: Becuz… his mom wasn't taking care of him!!

Dk: How do you know that??

the people… who had brought him

They come

Dk is like who are you?

They say

They took him!!!!

Dk: Why did you do this?????????????

Guy: Becuz we got a complaint…… from someone… saying that his mother wasn't taking care of him properly!!!!

Dk: from who????

Guy: We cant give names

Dk is getting irritated!!!

Dk: U better tell me who did this.. I am capable of doing anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guy: I am sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!……

Dk: U see that boy………….. He's my son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They are shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When he says that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: So u better tell me…. Who did this!!

Guy: Her name was Priya Saigal!!!

Dk is like shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is furious now!!!!!

Dk gives them a mean look!!!!

He's like no way!!!!!!

Dk sees Adi!!!

Dk: Adi!!!!

Adi slowly looks up……….

Sees Dk!!!

Dk comes closer………

Adi gets up

And he runs to him!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He's crying

And is asking for his mom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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