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Dk & Disha: KUCH NA KAHO (Page 2)

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nice intro can't wait Big smile

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waiting to read first part.
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Part 1

Scene opens with a big house!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Go inside the house!!

Sum is praying!!!!

Suraj is awake!!!

His wife… Priya….is awake

And their son …. Aryan…..

All are having breakfast!!!!!

Sum comes out

And joins them

No one really talks!!!

Priya don't cook nothing!!

She cant!!

Whatever goes on in that house the servant does everything!!

From cooking, to cleaning, everything!!!!

Aryan gets ready!!

Priya's phone rings

And she starts talking away!

Suraj leaves for work!

Aryan goes to Priya and tells her to take him to school

Priya yells at him

Saying cant you see I am on the phone!

Aryan is sad!!!

Priya: You don't know your manners!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aryan cries

Sum: Bahu you shouldn't yell like that!!!! Aryan beta.. I will take you!!!!!

Priya rolls her eyes

And she leaves!!

Sum takes him to school!!!!

Meanwhile

Saigal House

Dk wakes up

Gets ready for work!!!!

He's living the good life!!!

He doesn't have to worry about anything!

Everything is done for him as well!!!!!

But he's more sensible!!!!!

Ved wakes up!

DK: ur up!! Finally!!

Ved Brother I hate waking up early!!! Its so eww!!!

Dk: too bad!! Lets go!!!!

They both leave for work!!!!

There's a line of gals….

For the new job!!!!

Dk goes in

Interviews each one!!!

Ved is there

He keeps giving Dk signals….

Saying she's the one

Or she's not the one

The ones which Ved likes Dk don't!!!

The one he likes

Dk thinks they are applicable!!!

He gets all of them!

Ved: Brother I like #15… she was hot!!

Dk: Ved!!!!

Ved: Sorry!!!!

The sec walks in

Sec: Sir there is one more!!!!!!…… She apologizes for being late!!!

Dk: send her in!!!

Sec sends her in

She goes in

Ved looks at her!!!

He's like wow!!!

Ved gives Dk signals

Saying pick her pick her!!!!

Dk is like oh man!!!!

Dk looks at her things

And he gives her the job!!!!

Dk: congratulations!!!!!


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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Part 2

Puts his hand out!!

She shakes it

Its none other than Disha!!

Disha; thank you sir! Thank you so much!!!!!…..

Dk: May I ask you need the job???

Disha; I need the money really badly!!!!! I am only supporting myself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is like okay!

But Disha also tells him

The time that she has to work

Due to other responsibilities

(I will reveal later on)

Dk is like okay!!!

Dk is like I will see you here 1st thing tomorrow morning!

Disha is like thank you!

She leaves

She's like phew!

I got it!

She comes to her small tiny home

And she prays saying thanks for giving me this job!!!!!!!!

As she really needed it!!!

Her family doesn't care about her anymore!!

She's on her own!!!!!!!!!

Later on in the afternoon

Aryan is waiting outside

No one has picked him up!!!

Priya has gone out

Sum looks at the time

And she's like how come Aryan isnt back yet

She goes

And finds him standing there

She takes him!!

And they both go!!

They pass Kanaka

Aryan is like can we meet chachu!

Sum: he must be busy!

Aryan begs

Sum is like okay

Both of them go!!

Aryan runs to Dk's cabin

Dk is reading something

Aryan; chachu!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk looks up!

DK: Aryan!!!

Aryan hugs him!!!!

He gets along w/ Aryan so well!!!!!

Everyone gets along

Its only the brothers that don't get along

And for Priya…..

She can careless

She's in a rich home

What more can she ask for!!

Dk sees Sum

And hugs her!!!

He tells them to sit!!!

Ved walks in!

He sees them

He's happy as well!

Aryan: Ved chachu!!!

All of them talk

And then they both end up leaving!!!

They come home!!

Priya isnt home!!

She wont come til 11- or maybe 12!

Suraj don't care!!!!!

She can do whatever she wants

Just don't bug him about it!!!

Aryan wants his mom

But she isnt there!!

If I didn't mention.. he's 4 years old!



The End!
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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 12:35am | IP Logged
AWWWWW, Poor Aryan Cry What kind of a mother is priya Angry Angry Angry

Wow, awesome update Guli..you've already got suspense goin on Clap
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very nice
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