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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 6)

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 9:33am | IP Logged

Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

haanji urdu to aachi to honi thi meri aakhir merey guru aap ho chalo tumney meri bahut help ki u r best thanku thanku thanku thanku thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss so much tumney meri taraf se sab ko inform kar diya

Miss.Shruti Verma...tats enuf....bahut hogaya apka THANKS..app baaz nahi ayegiii....ok...now i won't talk to u if u didn't stoped saying..THANX...Angry Angry Angry Angry 

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 10:20am | IP Logged
adi very good part........ Clap
i just loved it........... Tongue
me waiting for the next part eagerly......Big smile
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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
look Mr ADIL ZUBEIR shayad aap bhool rahey ho ki aap bhi mujhey bahut thanx boltey ho .aur tum mujhse khafa ho main nahi manti aur tumney yeah kaisey kahe diya ki tum mujhse baat nahi karogey

dekho ADI zab tak tum merey ko thanx bolna band nahi karogey tab tak main bhi thx bolungi .kyunki hum dono sudharney waley nahi hai

aur rahi baat baat na karney ki to tum chahey mujhse baat karo ya na karo main to zaroor baat karungi aakhir dosti ki hai to nibhaney pardegi isliye main tera peecha itney asani se nahi chordney wali .

waisey ADI yaar i m so happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy abhi tera homepage check kar rahi thi and i m glad ki mainey terey saarey frnds ke beech mai thori si zagah banali hai that u consider me as ur frnd

waisey janab tum likhna shuru kardo sacchi yaar kya likhtey ho jo tumney apney life ke 17 yrs describe kiye thai they r amazing my god i was touched with everyline
i wish u luck for ur upcoming future

ab to naraz nahi hona nahi ho to ek aachi si smile de dena merey liye woh hi kafi hoga

chal kal baat kareygey merey thread par
till then tc luv ya

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 10:42pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

look Mr ADIL ZUBEIR shayad aap bhool rahey ho ki aap bhi mujhey bahut thanx boltey ho .aur tum mujhse khafa ho main nahi manti aur tumney yeah kaisey kahe diya ki tum mujhse baat nahi karogey

dekho ADI zab tak tum merey ko thanx bolna band nahi karogey tab tak main bhi thx bolungi .kyunki hum dono sudharney waley nahi hai

aur rahi baat baat na karney ki to tum chahey mujhse baat karo ya na karo main to zaroor baat karungi aakhir dosti ki hai to nibhaney pardegi isliye main tera peecha itney asani se nahi chordney wali .

waisey ADI yaar i m so happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy abhi tera homepage check kar rahi thi and i m glad ki mainey terey saarey frnds ke beech mai thori si zagah banali hai that u consider me as ur frnd

waisey janab tum likhna shuru kardo sacchi yaar kya likhtey ho jo tumney apney life ke 17 yrs describe kiye thai they r amazing my god i was touched with everyline
i wish u luck for ur upcoming future

ab to naraz nahi hona nahi ho to ek aachi si smile de dena merey liye woh hi kafi hoga

chal kal baat kareygey merey thread par
till then tc luv ya

Mein kuch bhool nahi raha...Sur...bus kar naa..thanx kyun itna bolti hooo.Ouch..manta hoo mei bhi bolta hoon...par sirf tumhein tease karnay k liye... Embarrassed...aur nahi kaoronga mein tumsay baat..jab tak..tum yeh word bolna band nahi karti...Angry...i had enuf yaar....waisay i am surprised...remembered my ful name..haan...WinkMr.Adil Zubair....Dead itz soundz horribleLOL...aur zyda happy honay wali baat nahi hai....u r were my 1st friend at IF...how can i 4get to mention ur nameTonguen here a smile 4 uBig smile....tumsay naraaz raha kahan sakta hoon..ab plz jali comp teq karwaooooCry..c u on ur thread...Tc...Love yea..Smile

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Posted: 21 March 2006 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
LOL LOL ..yaar tum log to larte hi nahi.,,hehehe,,,

chalo koi nahi....yaar aaj dosra din hai......adi kahin dulha dulhan bhaag to nahi gaye???? LOL LOL LOL
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Posted: 22 March 2006 at 1:43am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rajeev1

LOL LOL ..yaar tum log to larte hi nahi.,,hehehe,,,

chalo koi nahi....yaar aaj dosra din hai......adi kahin dulha dulhan bhaag to nahi gaye???? LOL LOL LOL

Yaar mera aur Sur ka tu chalta rehta haiEmbarrassed....aur dulha dulhan bhaagay nahi woh late utthay thayWink...isiliye...here da part....Big smileab jaldi parh kar comment karoooLOL

Suri...thanx nahi bolonga..agay...Sur...say..larai horahi haiTongue



Edited by Adildagr8 - 22 March 2006 at 1:49am
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Posted: 22 March 2006 at 1:44am | IP Logged
                                                     DIL KYA KARE(Part-6)

Recap:Sujal & Kashish....cum know abt their marriage..both r very surprised...but agree...n now...da preprations...of da marriage...begin...Vasu is very surprised..n disappointed..to know...tat Sujal agreed 4 da marriage..

Itz...da day of da marriage...all r very happy...expect..Vasu...the Gerewal house...is decorated like a castle...Sujal...is busy...dressing up..whereas..Kripa...n Angad...r helping him....he has almost tried...3 to 4 shirvani...but..still he is not satisfied..
Angad:Sujalll...
Sujal:haan....
Angad:bus kar..kitnay...baar aur try karay..gaa..
Sujal:kya yaar tum logo bata bhi nahi rahay konsi achi hai...
Kripa:tab say wohi tu bata rahay hai..k black...wali..phen lay...
Sujal:Shirvani..pehna zaroori hai kya...suit...phen leta hoon naa...
Kripa:Sujal...tumhari shadi hai...businness meeting nahi..jo suit phen kar jayogay...
Angad:sabko...shadi mein pheni parhti hai..
Sujal:mujay kya pata...kya phena hai..pheli..baar shadi kar raha hoon naa..
Angad:tera..kya matlab hai..mein yahan roz shadi karta hoon...
Sujal:mainay asa tu nahi kaha...
Just then Vasu enters...n sees them laughing..n is..very much irriated..n says...
Vasu:agr tum logo ki baatien hogayi hoon..tu Sujal..zara jaldi tayyar hojayoo...muhrat ka time horaha hai...
Sujal:apnay shadi karwani hai naa..app kehti hai tu mein asay hi chalta hoon...shadi..to hojayegii..
Vasu(i will get kind of look):Sujal....mein neechay wait kar rahi hoon..
Sujal:haan araha hoon...
Kripa(mischeivously):asay chalna hai kya..
Sujal(smiles):nahi..yaar..Kashish..bhaag jayegii....tum log jayoo mein tayyar hokar ata hoon...
Angad:haan haan..ab tu Kashish ki fekar hi bahut hai...
Sujal:hey Angad asa kuch nahi hai..tu to mujay janta hai....
Kripa:tum dono ki baatein phir shuroo hogayii..ab usay tayyar honay doo...
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The recipation of Baraat is done......Sujal..sits...in da mandap..he is wearing a...black shirwani wid..sum golden emboriey...n is looking really handsome...he sees...Kashish...cuming down 4rm stairs...he is totally stunted wid her beauty...he is unable to take his eyes of her...she is wearing a pink...langha....n looking...ravishing.....she sits beside Sujal...all da..rasams r done...Sujal..puts sindoor...in her maang..n.Mangalssutra...around her neck....da marriage is over...now itz time...4 ruksati...Kashish meets everyone...n cries.....Sujal..is feeling bad 4 her...n but is standing quitely..on a side....Angad..observes tat sumthing is distrubing....Sujal..he asks...
Angad:kya howa...
Sujal:kuch nahi yaar...yeh larkayin itna rooti(cry) kyun hai...
Angad(laughs):ohhh..Kashish ro rahi hai...
Sujal:nahi yaar..i am just feeling bad 4 her...
Angad:beta aaj yeh khud roo rahi hai...kal tujay..rulaaygiii...
Sujal:chal..jab mujay rulaye gii khud tu nahi rooy gii...naa...
Angad(surprised):wah wah...kya baat hai...usk ronay say takleef yahan...
Sujal:haan...akhir pitani hai meri....
Angad:not bad...kal tak joo insan...shadi say bhaagta tha...aaj usko apni patni ki itni fekar...
Sujal:saat pehray liye......7 din..tak fekar tu honi chaiye....
Angad:haan haan..yeh 7 din...7 janam mein kasiay badaly ga...pata bhi nahi chalay gaa...
The ruksahti is...finshied...Kashish reaches Gerewal house....the ghar parvash is done...Kripa...takes..Kashish...to da a bedroom...wich is beautifully decorated wid roses.......she leaves Kashish alone 4 a min...n goes out..n sees..Sujal..n Angad..aheading 2wards da room...Kripa..blocks...Sujal..way....n says...
Kripa:andar jana hai...yu phelay..10 thousand doo...
Sujal:hey...yeh..rasam to..behen karti hai..naa..
Kripa:haan..haan..par....tumhari koi behen hai nahi..so yeh haq mera...
Sujal:kyun..koi zaroorat nahi...
Kripa:teq hai..agr tum paisay nahi doogay...tu andar no entry...
Angad:Sujal..paisay day doo..warna..pori raat bahir guzarni paray giii..
Sujal:gr8...teq hai...mein andar nahi jata.....
Kripa:uffff...yeh larka pagal hai...
Sujal:mainay kya kiya...
Kripa:kuch nahi..meri hi glati hai...
Sujal:paisay chaiye...yeh lay..(he takes out da money..n gives to Kripa)
Angad:chal....ab jaa....Kashish intezaar kar rahi hogii..
Sujal:acha..jayoo..par mein andar jakar kya karoonga...
Kripa:yeh bhi mein bataooo
Sujal(mischeivously):haan bata naa...
Kripa:SUJALLLLLLLLLLL
Sujal:jaa raha hoo...y r shouting..(he..goes.in...
Kripa..n Angad leave.....)
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Sujal enters da room....n sees Kashish..n sits in front of her....n is thinking wat to say..
Sujal:Kashish....yeh hai tumhara ghar..jaisay marzi mein hoo rahoo..wana decorate u most welcome...jo karna hai karoo..but bus..Vasu..Aunty door rehna..
Kashish:Kyun....
Sujal:Vasu jee chup nahi bethay gii....humaray dermayiaan..misunderstanding karnay ki koshish karen gii..tak mei tumhein...
Kashish:tum fekar mat karoo..humaray beech koi misunderstanding nahi hogi...
Sujal(laughs):haa..misunderstanding to tab hogi..jab koi understanding hogi....
Kashish:Sujallll...
Sujal:ok ok..waisay ek baat bolon..
Kashish:haan bolo...
Sujal:tum aaj bahut khubsorat lag rahi hoo..(he moves forward..Kashish suddenly bac off...he wanted to get sumthing...4rm benath da pillow..place..behind Kashish...)
Sujal:hey..Kaashish mein bus yeh ring lay raha tha...
Kashish(confused):sorry...
Sujal(smiles):itz ok...yeh ring tumharay liye...u know koi rasam thi...k wedding nite par..gift detay hai..(she opens da box)
Kashish:itz soo beautiful..thanx...
Sujal:u r welcome...tum change karlo..mein fresh hokar ata hoon...(he ahead to..a bathroom)
Sujal cums out..n sees Kashish..is in da balcony....n looking out at da moon...he goes n stands beside...n..says...
Sujal:kya dekh rahi hoo...
Kashish:tum agay..
Sujal(smiles):nahi mein nahi aya..mera bhoot...hai
Kashish:Sujal...khabhi tu serious howa karoo...
Sujal:acha..bus mein serious hogaya..ab bolo...kya dekh rahi hoo...
Kashish:dekh rahi thi...k aaj yeh chand kitna akela lag raha hai...
Sujal:miss kar rahi hoo...
Kashish:kisko....
Sujal:naam...tu pata nahi hai..aur mein jana chata hoon...par shyad jissay tum pyar karti thi...
Kashish:Sujal..mein usko..bhoolnay ki..pori koshish kar rahi hoo...par....
Sujal:janta hai...itna asan nahi..hai...mei tu bus..
Kashish:Sujal...mujay thora time chaiye...
Sujal:tumhein jitna waqt chaiye..lay loo...i don't want u to comprise on anthing....
Kashish:hmmmm thanks..
Sujal:tum nay abhi tak change nahi kiya..change kark soo jayoo..thak gayi hogi...
Kashish:tum meray baray mein sab jantay hoo...lekin apnay baray mein khabhi kuch nahi bataya..
Sujal:hmmm meray baray mein..kuch bataynay ko hai hi nahi...acha abhi andar chalo..warna sardi lag jaye gii...
Kashish:hmmmmm chalooo...
Sujal...makes Kaashish comfortable..on da bed.....n he takes a pillow...n goes on da sofa....switches of da lite...n say...
Sujal:Gud Nite...
Kashish:Gud Nite...
Kashish..is lying on da bed..n is thinking abt...her 1st meeting wid Sujal...n how...r they now married...sshe is very toched by his concern...she is looking at him...while he is sleeping...or..mayb can b said..pretending to b sleeing..he is also unableto sleep...he is thinking abt..his..concern 4 Kashish is increasing day b day...both r thinking abt eachother..
(SONG AT DA BACKGROUND)
Woh pheli baar jab hum milay
Hatho mein haath jab hum chalay
Hogaya kuch asan yeh saafar
Ayi humein phir manzil nazar

Chaltay yun hum muskaranay lagay
Ek dujay k ansoo churnay lagay
Aur pal bahr mein hum kintay pass agay
Ek sur hum gunaganay lagay

Woh pheli baar jab hum milay
Hatho mein haath jab hum chalay
Hogaya kuch asan yeh saafar
Ayi humein phir manzil nazar
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Itz is a bright sunny day....da birdz a singing.....da cool breeze is blowing....Sujal is still sleeping..whereas...Kashish cums...out....after a bath...she is..dryinh her hairs...n da drops of water wakes Sujal up...
Sujal:yaar..yeh subah subah meray mein barish..kahan say horahi hai..
Kashish:Sujal...Gud Morning...
Sujal:Gud Morning.....wife...
Kashish:uth gay..mujay raat mein jaldi sonay ko bol rhaay thay...naa..10 baj rahay hai ....
Sujal:aree...itna late hogaya....raat sahi tarah soya nahi naa...s
Kashish:jhooothay..sahi tarah nahi soye...asa lag raha tha ghoray(horses)...bech kar soo rahay hoo..
Sujal(surprsied):tum kaisay pata...
Kashish:kyunki mein pori raat tumhein dekh rahi thi...
(Kashish realizes wat she said...n tries to clearify...)
Kashish:i mean...mujay neend nahi arahi thi..mein bore horahi thi..socha tumhein dekhloon..
Sujal:meri shakal par jokes nazar aarahay thay...k tumnay socha...
Jusst then there is a knock at da door....n itz Vasu...
Sujal:Vasu jee...agayii....acha yeh..sofa..wala pillow..rakh dena aur mera poachay tu kehna...naha raha hai...
Kashish:par..mein....
Sujal:mera subah mood kharab hojayega...tumhein dekha hai..ussay dekhna nahi chata..tum handle karlo...
Kashish:ok..teq hai...
Sujal:hmmmm ok...jayoo darwaza khuloo...
(Kashish forgets to ut da pillow..on bed..itz still on sofa...)
Vasu:itni dayer laga di darwaa khulnay mein..
Kashish:woh..bus...
Vasu:Sujal kahan hai...
Kashish:woh bathroom mein hai...
Vasu:acha..nechay nasthay par mein tum logo ka inntezaar kar rahi hoon..(she is abt to leave wen she sees da pillow on da sofa...she has an evil smile..she turns Kashish n ask..)
Vasu:yahan...koi soya tha...
Kashish:haan..nahi..woh...
(Sujal is listening this...he cums out..pretending at came to take towel...)
Sujal:Kashish..mera..towel..day doo..
Kashish:haan mein abhi layi..(she goes to cupboard)
Sujal:Gud Morning Vasu Jee....
Vasu:Gud Morning...
Sujal:kuch kaam hai...
Vasu:nahi mein...tumhein breakfast k liye bulnay ayi..
Sujal:bula liya..
Vasu:haan...
Sujal:tu..hum atay hai..
Vasu:haan jaa rahi hoo..lagta hai..double bed chota parhta hai...jis waja ssy..tum mein say kisi ko sofay par sona parha..
Sujal:ohh.yeh...nahi..actaully...bed bahut bada tha...so hum..sofay pay.thay...apko koi prob hai...
Vasu(annoyed):nahi...mein tu bus...
Sujal:agr apki investigation...complete hogayi hoo...do u mind leaving...
Vasu:jaa rahi mein...(she..leaves...in anger...)
Sujal n Kashish r laughing like..hell.....wen Kashish says...
Kashish:Sujal...tum kuch aur nahi keha saktay..thay..
Sujal:joo us waqt dimaagh mein aya...bol diya....sawaal bhi tu ultay ultay kar thi...
Kashish:kya soch rahi hogi..humaray baray mein...
Sujal:by de way..sofa wala idea bura tu nahi...
Kashish:Sujallll tum sudhargay..nahi.....(she..beat him waid a cusion...)
Vasu(to herself):mainay tu socha tha...k Sujal...shadi ko lay kar tensed hoga...par yahan tu asa kuch nazar nahi araha...mujay tu apna plan flop hotay howay nazar araha hai..agr..Sujal nay..Kashish ko...ek saal say phelay divorce nahi di..tu yeh sari dalaut..meray haath say nikal jayegiiii.....
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Here da part end guyz...
Like my every part is also decidecated to Shruti...n Farah too...
Hope u like it....
Plz do comment
Luv
Adi


Edited by Adildagr8 - 22 March 2006 at 3:09am
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