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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 34)

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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 5:38am | IP Logged
adil plzzzz post ur next part sooooon........

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adi how long do we have to waitplz plz plzzzzzz cont soon dyin to know wat happens next plzzzzzzzzzzz
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adi yaar kahaa ho seriously intezaar nahi ho raha hain.. mujhe teri story padni hain i'am eagerly waiting for you to post it.... Smile Tongue Big smile
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                        DIL KYA KARE(LAST PART)

Recap:Sujal n Kashish r bac together....Kashish...leaves...da job....


Tushar:hello..
Lady:Tusshar..tum haaath par haath dhar kaisay beth saktay hoo..Sujal aur Kashish phir say ek hogay....tumhein kaha mainay k unkooo alag kardoo...lekin woh tumsay howa nahi...Goa mein accident tu karwa diya Sujal ka..par phir bhi howa kya..zinda hai naa..woh....mein tu bhechta rahi hoo..tumsay haath mila kar..ek kaam tum sahi nahi kartay
Tusshar:sab mein karoo..app tu unk saath ghar par rehti hai...apnay konsa teer mar liya....Vasu..jeee....mera jooo hosakta tha woh mainay kiya...ab..bus mujay..thora time aur day...mein Sujal aur Kashish ka kya karta hooo..bus dekhti jaye...
Vasu:tabsay dekh hi tu rahi hoon...Tusshar..mainay asie hi nahi tumhein.Gerewal Empire k 50% shares...tumhein denay ka wada kiya..hai..i want..reaults..dammit...Sujal..ko rastay say haathoo..humaray pass..zyda time nahi hai..will k mutabiq..woh shadi k baad yeh will kisi naam bhi transfer kar sakta hai..agr usnay apnay naam say will haath li...tu mujay usk marnay ka bhi koi fyda nahi hoga...
Tusshar: haan na main koshish kar toh raha hoon.
Vassu: koshish nahee mujay jaidad apnay naam per karwani hai kisi bhi haalat main.....(and puts the phone down)
The camera zooms upon the enterance of the room where Rishi is standing listening to what ever his mom said...
Vasu:Rishi tum..
Rishi:mom..Bigb ka accident..
Vasu:nahi woh..tu..
Rishi:mom app aisa kar sakti hai..app jaaanti hai mein Bigb say kitna pyar karta hoon..phir...
Vasu:Rishi...listen to me..
Rishi(wid tears in his eyes):aur..Bigb..unka tu humein ehassn mana chaiye k dad k..death k abad unhoon nay humein is ghar mein rehnay diya..woh chatay tu humein kab ka nikal detay...(saying this he leaves)
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IN A COFFEE HOUSE:
Sujal: Kashish tumay us Tushar se darnay ki koi zarurat nahe hai........ Main us Tusshar ko ......
Kashish(interups):haan haan janti hoon tum Tusshar ko nahe choro ge, aur kisne kaha ke main darti hoon whenever im with u mujay kisi cheez ka darr nahe lagta (she says this unconciously)
Sujal (mischeiviously): hmmmm...acha???? Kher ab batao job toh aap ne chhor di madam aagay kia karnay ka irada hai? Wanna join my business?
Kashish: nahe Sujal main chahti hoon ke ab kuch waqt ghar ko bhi doon.
Sujal:ghar per??? Usssss pagal billi ke saath' nahe baba main aisa nahe kar sakta tumaray saath.
Kashish: oh come on Sujal mama ko hum mana bhi toh saktay hin na.
Sujal:(annoyed):Kashish main keh raha hoon na koi faida nahe hoga.
Kashish:acha baba ghussa kyun ho rahay ho...
Sujal(angry):hmmmmm
Kashish(teasing):Pata hai ghussay maain tum bahut sweet lagtay ho.
Sujal:SWEET!!! Please Kashish mujay SWEET nahe bolo.
Kashish:kyun Sujal tum toh itne sweet aur cute aur.........
Sujal(smiles):ab main shuru ho jaoun.
Kashish:SUJAL!!! Hum yahan coffee house main kia kar rahe hain.
Sujal:romance...
Kashish:aargh!! Kuch aur karna ata bhi hai ya nahe....Aray wo dekho RAJEEV KHANDELWAL'Sujalllllllll he is sooooooooooooooooooooo cute.
Sujal(getting jealous):tumay sharam nahe ati apnay pati dev ke saamne kisi aur admi ke baaray main baat kartay huay.
Kashish:come on Sujal don't be such a baby.
Sujal:chalo office chaltay hai..Angad wud b waiting..
Kashish:hmmm chaloo
Sujal(thinking): y did this Rajeev guy have to come here'khush rahe na apni Amna ke saath.
SK IN CAR
Kashish:Sujal...
Sujal:hmm...
Kashish(teasing):tumay Raj ko dekh ker kia hua tha.
Sujal:ab yeh Raj kaun hai.
Kashish: Rajeev Khandewal ka nick...
Sujal:don't tell me ke tum us bandariya kia naam hai? Haan Kekta ke dramay dekhti thi.
Kashish:hahahhaa kekta nahe EKTA.
Sujal:aray aik hii baat hai ekta naam ka bera gharak kia hai us aurat ne kisi hero heroin ko ek saath rehnay kab dia hai us ne...
Kashish:hahaha tum kitni shweet baatein kartay ho.
Sujal:phir SHWEET!
Kashish:acha baba ab nahe boloon gi....
Sujal:loooo office..agaya...
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GEREWAL OFFICE
Sujal:aaj ki meeting tu achi hogi....yeh project humein hi milay gaa...
Angad:haan mujay bhi yehi lagta hai...
Kashish:Agr kaam khatam hogaya hooo....shall we talk abt...Kripa's birthday...
Angad:haan isliye tu tumhein bulaya tha..
Sujal:soo watz da plan...
Angad:well a surprise birthday party...wat say...
Sujal:hmmm soundz good...
Kashish:soo humein kya karna hoga..
Angad:well kuch zyda nahi..just take..Kripa 4 shopping...pura din..
Sujal:Ohhh no...
Kashish:Ohhh yes....yeh tu sab say insan kaam hai..done mein aur Sujal...Kripa ko..pura din busy rakhay gay...
Angad:bus teq hai..mein baki sab arrange karloonga...
Angad:ok then mein chalta hoon...
Sujal:hmmmm
Kashish:So Mr. Sujal...ab app kaam karay mein ghar jaa rahi hoo...
Sujal:app chali jayengay..tu mein yahan kya karoongaa..(he moves close to her...)
Kashish:Sujal...yeh office hai...
Angad(interups):Aheem aheem..Sujal...woh...mujay Mr. Mehra ki file chaiye thi..
Sujal(disappointed):aaaja yeh rahi file...
Kashish is smiling..at Sujal...
Sujal:tum kya has rahi hoo..
Kashish:nahi kuch nahi mein tu jaa rahi thi..
Angad:nahi Kashish tum rukooo mein jaa raha hon..
Sujal:Kashish..tumhein tu mein baad mein dekhloonga..Angad tu ruk mujay tujsay kuch baat karni hai...
Kashish(smiles):Byeee.....(she leaves..)
Angad:haan bol kya howa..
Sujal:mujay meri will banwani hai...
Angad:kyun...i mean achanak...yeh will...
Sujal:haan...bus aise hi...
Angad:Sujal...tu mujsay kuch chupa raha hai..
Sujal:nahi kuch bhi nahi...bus...
Angad:kya howa..
Sujal:Goa mein joo mera accident howa...tat was planned
Angad:tu yeh kaisay keha sakta hai
Sujal:pata nahi..mujay aisa lagta hai....usdin tu itni drink bhi nahi...ki thi..k drive na kar pata..
Angad:tujay kisi par shak hai...(Rishi enters)
Rishi:Mom par...
Sujal(shocked):tum yeh
Rishi(intrups):mainay Mom ko...Tusshar say baat kartay howa suna..
Angad:Lekin Vasu Aunty..yeh kaam akleay nahi kar sakti hoo naa hoo..kahin na kahin ismein koi aur bhi shamil tha...
Rishi: u r rite Angad...is harkat mein unka saath...Mr. Tusshar Shergil nay diya..
Angad:Aunty jaisai bhi thi...mein khabhi yeh nahi soch sakta k woh itni gir jayegiii...k property k liye tujay marnay ki koshish karay...
Sujal:mujay kuch samjh mein nahi araha..agr yeh sab property k liye howa...tu mein rahooo ya naa rahoo..yeh property Mrs.Vasu Gerewal ko khabhi nahi milay giii..
Rishi:Bigb apko kuch nahi hoga...
Sujal:Angad....mein chata hoon tum meri will banayooo..jismein...meri 50% property Kashish k naam kardooo aur 50% Rishi k...aur agr...in dono mein say kisi ek ko bhi kuch hogaya tu..yeh sari property trust mein chali jaeygii..
Rishi:par Bigb mujay property nahi...
Sujal(interups):Kiddoo....mein joo kar raha hoo...sab ki bhali k liye kar raha hoon..
Rishi:mein Mom aur Tusshar ko chornay wala nahi hoon..
Sujal:nahi Rishi..mujay koi action nahi lena..
Angad:Sujal...par kyun..
Sujal:mein is baat ko aagay nahi barhana chata..mein manoo ya na mano..woh meri..maa..hai..chaye sautali(step) hi sahi..
Rishi:par BigB..
Sujal:keha diya..naa mainay..Rishi....
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ONE WEEK LATER
Last week has been very hetic for Sujal all da pending work was done....Kashish also joined Gerewals to help Sujal..all was being well...but...Tusshar was planing sumthing evil....
Sujal... is getting ready...as he had to take Kripa n Kashish 4 shopping....as itz her bday 2day....n all decided they wud act as they don't remember anything...They both goo to Angad's House...
Kashish:Hiiii
Kripa:hiii....tum log aaj yahan kaisay...
Sujal:kyun hum nahi aasaktay...
Kripa:mein nay asa nahi kaha..mein tu...
Kashish(interups):woh actually...hum shopping par jaa rahay thay...so soch tumhein bhi lay jaye....
Kripa(to herself):mein nay socha shyad in dono ko hi yaad hoga..lekin nahi..mera bday kisi ko yaad nahi hai...Angad...ko bhi nahi...
Sujal:kya soch rahi hooo....chalein..
Kripa:shopping..hmmm nice..idea..Angad to subah say pata nahi kis cheez mein busy hai...
Both of them hav been shopping n Sujal is carrying all bags....like a collie...itz evening.....n time go home...
Sujal:agr app logo ki shopping hogayi hooo..tu ghar chalein...
Kripa:hmmm chaloo..
EVENING PARTY TIME
After shoping wen they goo home...da lightes r off...
Kripa:yeh light ko kya hogaya..Sujal..dekho naa..
Sujal:mein band nahi ki..mein kya dekhoo
Kashish:Sujal....
Kripa:rukooon mein hi dekhti hoon..
Sujal:acha..tum ..andar jayooo hum dono(SK)dekhtay hoon..wats da prob...
Kripa(giggles)::haan jaa rahi hoo..ab tu paka..hai..light nahi anay wali..Sujal aur Kashish dono..dekhnay jaa rahay hai..
Sujal:nahi..do log milkar teq karay gay tu jaldi ajayegi naa...
Kripa:haan haan jayooo..
(Kripa goes in opens da door...flowers r showered in her..n..light ons...she see everyone...including SK..n Angad..standing in there...n singing..HAPPY BIRTHDAY 2 u..Kripa is overwhelmed wid Angad...attitude..of..wishing..her..Angad moves 4ward..i wished n she hugs him...they cut cake...n da party..get started....it is on itz full swing...)
Sujal:Kashish..lets goo..out..
Kashish:par kyun...
Sujal:Kashish..yahan itni bheed hai...kuch time hum dono ka bhi tu hona chaiye naa....
Kashish:tum bhi na...har time to meray saathi hi hotay hoo..
Sujal:kya Kashish kitni unromanctic hooo..mein hoon k..
Kashish:acha baba chaloo..
SK goo out...n...Kashish stands..beside..da car..woh..Sujal ko dekti hai jo usko lagtar dekh raha hota hai...
Kashish:kya dekh rahay hoo..
Sujal(smiles):tumharay peechay..ek larki hai..usko dekh raha hoon...
Kashish...quickly..turns around...n find noone..
Sujal(laughs):itni..jealousy...
Kashish:nahi mein too bus yeh dekh rahi thi..
Sujal(interups):haan haan i know...waise..mujay tumharay elwa..kuch dekhta hi nahi.....mein kisko dekhoongaa..
Kashish:awww..soo sweet...
Sujal:not again...nahi mein sweet nahi hoon..
Kashish:soo..Mr.Romantic..hum bahir agay ab bolo..
Sujal:tumahri baaton mein bhool hi gaya..
(He take out a small box and woh yeah box Kashish ko deta hai and he stands next to her he looks at her and then smiles)
Kashish:Sujal yeah kya hai ????????
Sujal:meri khoobsurat biwi ke liye ek chota sa toofa hai
Kashish:lekin..kyun..i mean..birthday to Kripa ka tha..
Sujal:kyun..mein tumhein..beghair kisi waja k gift nahi day sakta..
Kashish:day saktay hoo .....par aakhir ismai hai kya?
Sujal:kya yaar Kashish itna saawal poochti ho khud khol kar dekh nahi sakti ho
(Kashish woh box khol kar dekhti hai aur usmain ek khoobsurat platinum ring hoti hai jismai side par diamonds lagey hotey hai)
Kashish:wow Sujal it is so pretty
Sujal:haan hai to par tumsey kam abhi to yeah bejaan hai jaan to ismain tab aayegi jab tum isko phenogi
(Kashish smiles and Sujal woh ring usko phenata hai )Sujal:janti ho Kashish "tumahrey jitna khoobsurat to aaj tak maine kisi ko nahee dehka "
(Kashish gazes down he holds her hands and then kisses them gently Kashish closes her eyes her heart-beat is faster than ever he kept on starring at her and she couldn't stand his gaze any longer and ended up coming in his arms and Sujal put his hands around her and they hug...
(SONG IN DA BACKGROUND)
Itz beautiful nite
Chandni raat hai
Itz beautiful nite
Pyar ki baat hai
Yeh raat kehti hai wada koi aaj karlay hum
Bahon mein bahar kahoo kuch bhi keha sanam
Madhosh kardo humein aaj kehti hai khamoshi
Hum tum say naa ja paye day do kasam
Itz beautiful nite
Chandni raat hai
Itz beautiful nite
Pyar ki baat hai
Sujal and Kashish r locked in a intimate hug They stayed for a long time in each other's arms wen Kashish mobile rings..
Kashish:ek min Sujal..mera mobile baj raha hai
Sujal:ohooo mujay tu lagta hai..k mobile ko humaray romance say kuch zyda hi prob hia.har baar..galat time par ring karta hai..
Kashish:Sujal..tum bhi..naa..(she recives da call)
Sujal:kon hai..
Kashish:ek min...Sujal...hello....haan mein abhi ati hoon..(cuts da phone)
Kashish:Sujal....tum ek min rukooo mein bus abhi ati hoon..
Sujal:par jaa kahan rahi hoo..
Kashish:wait naa...
Sujal has almost waiting 4 an hour...he goes..in..da party....Angad sees himm..
Angad:kidhar thay..tum..party..mein aye hoo..aur gayab..
Sujal:nahi yaar..woh..did u see Kashish..
Angad:nahi...woh andar nahi ayi...
Sujal:hmm
Angad:aajaye gii..lets enjoy da party...
Sujal:hmmm yeah...
Sujal(thinks):pata nahi Kashish kahan gayi...ek min ka keha kar gayi thi...1 ghanta hogaya..uska mobile bhi nahi lag raha..
(The party is over now..Sujal..is..worried..abt Kashish where is she....Angad..n Kripa..r..also..worreid...Sujal then calls Kashish home but she is not there.. Sujal is breaking his head as to where is Kashish jab usse Tushaar call kartha hai)
Sujal:hello
Tushaar: hi Sujal''
Sujal:haan bolo..
Tusshar:Sujal lagtha hain bohat pareshaan ho..
Sujal:tumse matlab''.
Tushaar:kyun Sujal kissi ko dhoond rahe ho.. kahiin Kashish ko tho nahii''.
(Sujal ke chehre par dhamaka hotha hain'..he is very shocked)
Sujal:Tushaar Kashish kahaan hain'.
Tushaar: arre Sujal tension kyun le rahe ho'tumhari Kashish ab thak tho sahi salamat hain...fekar mat karoo..mein usssay utna hi pyar karta hoon jitna tum kartay hoo..mein usko takleef kaisay poachna sakta hon...hamshea..woh tumharay pass hoti hai..aaj ki raat woh meray saath rahay gii..tu..tumhein..prob hai..
Sujal(furious):U bas***d....Kashish kahan hai....agr tumnay Kashish ko haath bhi lagaya ..mein tumhein..chorrongaa naahi...
Tusshar:tumhein joo karna hai..karlooo...Mr.Sujal....tum Kashish khabhi nahi poanch payoogay(he cuts da phone)
Sujal:hello...hello..
Angad:kya howa..
Sujal:Angad''.Kashish (breaks down)
Kripa:Sujal'kya hua Kashish ko'sab theek tu hai na??
Sujal:Kashish..koo..Tusshar..nay..kidnap karliya..hai..
Angad:WHAT..lekin..wat does he want...
Sujal:pata nahi...
Angad:don't worry..hum..police mein inform kardetay hai..
Kripa:pata nahi..Kashish kis haal mein hogi..
They informed police..alomst..2 hrs hav been past..since..then..Sujal..patience..is alomst over..he burstd out...
Sujal(shouts):hum kya police ka intezaar kartay rahay gay....aur..hum yahan haath par haath rakh kar behtay rhay gay..
Angad:tum hi bataoo aur hum kar bhi kya saktay..hai..
Kripa:Sujal...pareshan mat hoo..Kashish mil jayegii..
Angad:Sujal..tujay...ghar jana chaiye..jaisay hi Kashish ka kuch pata chalay ga..police humein inform karday...gii...
(Angad ,Kripa and Sujal ..drive off to Gerewal House'.in the car Sujal's face expression changes from sadness to anger)
Sujal:Mein choron ga nahee us Tussahr ko jis ne meri kashish ka '.ager Kashish ko kuch howa'tu voh i bhi zinda nahee rahe ga
Angad:Sujal...sab theek hojayegaa...
They reach Gerewal..House..Rishi..cums..to know..abt...Kashish is missing...he is unable..to..see..his bigb in this condition..Sujal..suddenly gets up..n goes to Vasu's room...he has tears in his eyes...da pain..of...lossing Kashish can b seen..clearly...
Vasu:tum...is waqt yahan..
Sujal:apko..meri..jaidad..chaiye..sab lay ley....app chahati hai mein yeh ghar chor doon...woh bhi chordoongaa...jaisa app chaiye gii waisa hi hoga....mujay sirf meri Kashish wapis chaiye.....apki..dushmani mujsay thi...meri Kashish ko beech mein lanay ki kya zaroorat thi...mujay..kuch nahi chaiye...Kashish..kahan hai...
Vasu:yeh kya keha rahi hooo....mujay kuch nahi pata..
Rishi:mom....app apni...ghityaa harkton say baaz nahi aye....usdin..mainay apko kuch kaha nahi...yeh soch kar k..apko khud eshaas hojayegaa..k app galat hoo..lekin..
Vasu:Rishi mera yakeen karoo..mujay..kuch nahi pata..Kashish..kahan hai..
Sujal(shouts):apko..nahi pata tu kisko pata hai..(clams down)..sorry...bus mujay meri..Kashish..chaiye...
Rishi:mumma mein yeh nahi manta k...Tusshar nahi..bhabhi ko..kidnap kiya..aur..apko..is baray mein kuch nahi pata..
Vasu:WHATT..Tusshar nay...lekin woh kaisay..woh tu aaj kal....apnay farmhouse....gaya howa...woh yeh kaisay kar sakta hai..
Angad:hosakta...Tusshar nay Kashish ko..usi..farmhouse mein rakha hooo..yeh farmhouse kahan hai..
Vasu:Shimla..say 40 Km..door
Angad:Sujal..humein abhi wahan..k liye nilakna..hoga..
Sujal:hmmmm..
Angad police ko inform kartha hain aur khud us jagah ke liye Sujal..aur Rishi...ke saath nikal padtha hain'
(Woh log us jagah pohanch jathe hain'in btw Tushaar Kashish ko wahaan bohat dara ke rakhtha hain & Kashish sirf Sujal ka naam le rahi hothi hain'.)
Kashish:Sujal..mujay..choranay zaroor ayegaa..
Tusshar:tumhein kya lagta hai..Kashish...tumahra Sujal...yahan..tumhein chornay ayegaa...ab tumhein yahan say koi nahi chora sakta..
Tusshar:tumnay mujay thukaraya tha naa...tum hamshea meri hi rahoogii..ab dekhoo...mein tumhein iski kitni badi saza deta hoon...(he touches..Kashish..face...wid his hand wen suddenly Angad aur Sujal Tushaar pe hamla bol dethe hain..'Tusshar...takes...out...da..gun..nahi..points..2wardz ..Kashish...
Tusshar:Sujal..agay mat ayoo..wanra..mein..Kashish..ko..goli..mar doonga..
(Sujal..is still..moving..ahead... )
Tussahr:mein Kashish ko...(b4 he cud..complete...Sujal...pulls..da..gun 4rm him...n..in this..pulling..da..guns fires....n...hits..Kashish..on her arm.. Sujal..he didn't noticed..tat Kashish is hurt......he...takes da gun..isse pehle ki Tushaar kuch kare Sujal dragged him & punched him him very hard in the stomach.. Sujal then punched him on the face ..... blood started woozing out from Tushaar's mouth .. Sujal, Rishi and Angad baari baari us Tushaar ko maarthe hain par Tushaar baar baar utne ki koshish kartha rehtha hain.. phir finally Sujal usse ek zabardast blow detha hain aur finally Tushaar falls on the ground
Sujal:MERI KASHISH KO MUJSAY DOOR KARAGA..bola tha naa..ussay..ek karoch bhi ayi tu tujay zinda nahi choornga....
Sujal is kicking.. him hard aur baar baar who usse maar raha tha lekin phir police aathi hain aur Angad Sujal ko pakad letha hain badi hi mushkhil se.. phir Sujal Kashish ke pass jatha hain usse sambhaltha hai'n sees...blood..on..her..arm....woh...behosh hojati hai...
(Sujal picks up Kashish and puts her in the back seat..he reaches the hospital..with Kashish in his arms'who is all drenched in blood)
Sujal:Nurse....Doctor....
Nurse: Ward boy'strectcher lao'
(Kashish goes to O.T. 'and Angad calls Kripa)
Angad(calling):Hello Kripa!
Kripa: Angad kahan ho tum?? Kashish ka kuch pata chala...
Angad(interupts her in the middle):Kripa..meri baat suno'tum fauran Saint John's hospital pohanch jao'
Kripa: Per hua kya?? Kashish theek tu ho na
Angad: Kripa..Kashish..ko..goli..lagi hai...
Kripa(shocked): Kya..Theek hai mein wahan...pohanchtee hoon(cuts da call)
(Angad see Sujal..leaning..along da wall..wid his..eyes close...he...goes towards Sujal'and put his hand on Sujal's shoulder)
Angad:Sujal!
(Sujal open his eyes and as soon as sees Angad'hugs him)
Sujal:Kashishhh..
Angad:Kashish ko kuch nahee ho ga
Kripa:Angad..Kashish kaisee hai?? Doctors ne kuch kaha
Angad: Abhi tak tu O.T. se koi doctor bahar nahee aya
Sujal: Us ko kuch nahee ho ga'.jab tak meri dharkane chal rahee hain'Kashish ko kuch nahee ho sakta
(Sujal, Kripa, Angad n Rishi'all are pacing up and down the hospital'after 1 hour a doctor comes out of O.T.)
Sujal(runs to the doc):Kashish theek hai na doctor??
Doctor: She is a very lucky..grl..goli..sirf..cho(touch) kar guzar gayi..woh ab bikul teq hai...n there an other good news
Sujal:is say bari good news koi ho hi nahi sakti..meri..Kashish...teq hai...mujay..aur kya chaiye..
Doctor:Mr. Sujal...ur wife..is pregnant...congualtions...u r a gona b a father..
Sujal:haan tu ismein kya hai..(then he realized...wat did he listened)
(Sujal..is very..happy...as he has got 2 biggest news of his life...he..don't know how to express them...he..is...very suprised..n unable to react anything...wen..Angad..moves..ahead...n..hugs him..)
Sujal(still can't believe it):mein..baap banay wala hoon...
Angad, Rishi n Kripa also congralulate him.....
Sujal:kya mein Kashish say mil sakta hoon...
Doctor:haan lekin...sab nahi ..1 at a time..
(Sujal..goes..in...Kashish is..lying..on bed...Sujal..goes n sits..beside..her..his happiness is..seen on his face..n tears...can b still seen..)
Sujal:kaisi hoo..
Kashish(smiles):kaisi lag rahi hoon..
Sujal(smiles):bahut achi..
Kashish:woh tu mei hoon hi..
Sujal:mujay nahi pata aisay mukay par kya kaha jata hai..lekin..Kashish..aaj..tumnay..meri zindagi..ka..sab say..bada toofa diya hai..humara..bacha....i still can't believe..i am gona..b a father..
Kashish:tum khush hooo...
Sujal:bahut bahut khush...thank Kashish
Kashish:Sujallll..
Sujal(tears in his eyes):mein..tumharay bina rehnay ka mein soch bhi nahi sakta..agr tumhein kuch hojata..
Kashish:tum roo rahay thay..
Sujal:nahi..to..
Kashish:mein tu ek pal..k liye dar hi gayi..thi..jab Tusshar..
Sujal:us insan k zikar bhi mat karoo..bhool jayoo..woh humari zindagi mein tha bhi..waise..bhi we hav lots..more things..to dicuss..
Kashish:acha..jaisay...
Sujal:hmm..jaisay....tumhara khyal rakhna hai mujay..aur..ek naya ghar lena hai...jimein..13 rooms..hooo..
Kashish:13 rooms..itnay rooms..ka kya karegay...
Sujal:Kashish..tum bhi naa...ab Sujal..Gerewal..itna..bhi kanjoos nahi..k..apnay..bachoo..ko..unka..ek room bhi na day
Kashish:haan tu..13..rooms....kyun
Sujal:ohoooo...see...1 room..humara...aur..baki..12..bachooo..k..
Kashish:what..12 bachay...u r mad..
Sujal:nahi..abhi...tu mainay...16 sochay thay..par tumhara khyal agaya..
Kashish:ohh really...12 par nahi aya..mera khaywal...u..know..i think....bachay...do(2) hi achay..
Sujal:haan bikul teq keha rahi hoo..i agree on this...ab..dekhoona...12 mein say 2 to achay hogay hi...
Kashish:Sujal..tum bhi..naa..(she hugs Sujal)
Kashish:I love u Sujal..i really..love u..
Sujal:i love too...
Angad:agr app dono ki baatein hogayi..hoo..hum andar aasaktay hai..
Sujal:haan haan ayoo naa..mana..karoonga..bhi tu konsa..tum log ruknay walay hoo..(all laugh)
(Vasu...also..cums..n apolpzies...4rm Kashish n..Sujal...all...r happy.....Sujal..takes..Kashish..home....this..is..starting. .of..a new..phase..of Kashish life...Kashish..is...very happy....in her house...n enjoying her duties...as..a house wife..decorating her house...n Sujal..alwayz..there to help her)
(SONG IN BACKGROUND)
Sajan ghar ana tha sajan ghar aye hai
Piya maan bhana tha piya maan bhaye hai
Har khushi hai ab tumhari mujay day do ghum
Janeman Janeman Janeman Janeman

Zindagi mein aye tum chahaton k rastay
Kaash yeh rashtay sanam khat jaye hastay hastay
Sonay dildara teray pyar tu mein vari aa
meryra duawayon tunoo lag jaan sarayein
Chand ho tum chandni say bheega jaye maan
Janeman Janeman Janeman Janeman

Khuwabon k is ghar ki kher kari ohh raba
Naazon say badi main nay kari hai tayyarain
Din raat pyar di diya narazan utraya
Yeh mobahat hai abdat khabhi hoo na kam
Janeman Janeman Janeman Janeman

Sajan ghar ana tha sajan ghar aye tum
Piya man bhana tha piya man bhaye tum
Har khushi hai ab tumhari mujay day do ghum
Janeman Janeman Janeman Janeman

(SK..r living..there..life..to..fullestest...wid each other...they...small..fights..continued...but..there..love never..lessen..n is increasing day by day..)
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OK i guyz..i know..u hav been waiting..sicne..long..sorry...4 tat....this..is..last part...of da story...i thank..u all...4 ur...appreciation...n this part...is..dedicatde to all my..fanfic..readers..n..my dear..friendz...who..encourage me..n...helped..me..in writing..this..story....i never...thought i wud write..one...this part..is..specially..dedicated...to..SUR...MANU DII.....SURI..SAM..AREEJ..ASWA..FARAH....ANA..SURBHI..KOMAL. ..



Edited by Adildagr8 - 28 January 2009 at 2:02pm
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Posted: 19 May 2006 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Clap hey adil ur story rocked hope u write another one
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Big smile ..wohhhoooo. greeeeeeat part adii....cha gaye bhai cha gaye...hehehe....baut fit story thi and thank u for the dedication...ab jaldhise ek nayi story shuru karo na Wink LOL LOL ...
well done Big smile
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great ending
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Posted: 19 May 2006 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
adi pehle i'am really no sorry { sorry bolugi tho mujhe daant padegi } mere yahaan power chali gayi thi is liye   main tabhi comment nahi kar payi... Cry    but anyway tum kitna achcha likhthe ho.. tera last part padke mazaa aa gaya...it was very coolllllllll... awesome...... marvellous......zabardast......rocking... too good...... Clap adi mujhe tera part bohat achcha laga.. ek dum daasu part tha... Thumbs Up shoooo sweet kashish maa banne wali hain.... Embarrassed           
adi no thanku for the dedication.. Big smile       
ab chal jaldi se nayi fanfic start kar... LOL                     


Edited by sun_423 - 19 May 2006 at 8:11pm

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