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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 32)

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adi tum tho too good ho...and ur story is awesome , brilliant , marvellous...etc etc.. Clap
adi waise meri tution classes kabse shuru ho rahi hain bata dena mujhe main pahunch jaoongi.. LOL
plz post the next part soon... Big smile Smile

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adi this part was wonderful. post the next part soon
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Unum...Morlen..Paru..Farah..Suri..Golu..Jyothi...thanx all 4 ur comments... Embarrassed

Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 April 2006 at 10:42am
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adi jee aj nahi likha apne? Smile
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WOW this story is really good can you post the next part of ur story iam waiting please and thank you.
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cont it yaar we r waiting Smile Smile
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                  DIL KYA KARE(Part-19)


Recap:Sujal....cums to know abt..Tusshar n Kashish...he has n heated arguement wid..Kashish..n Kashish decides to leave..he drinks..heavily..n had an accident...



1 WEEK LATER

Sujal..gets discharged...whole this week...Sujal..didn't talked abt Tusshar wid Kashish as he thought it wud b da rite time....both used to talk..wen..necessaray....
Angad:Sujal..chal..mainay sab cheezain gari mein rakh di hai..
Sujal:gari ki keys tu day...
Angad:mein kisi angle say..pagal lagta hoon..abhi abhi tu discharge howa hai...itni chot ayi hai..aur tu is halat mein drive karay gaa..
Sujal:Angad...mein ab teq hooon naa...i can drive.....
Angad:nahi u won't..drive..
Sujal:yaar..sirf haath par thori say choot hai i wud manage..
Kashish:tum drive nahi kaorogay..(she..leaves to get sumthing)
Sujal:ok teq hai..
Angad(smiles):badi jaldi maan gaya..
Sujal:chal chal..
Angad:Kashish say baat kar leyna..
Sujal:hmmmmm
Kashish:chalein..
Angad:haan...
Angad & Kripa...go in another car...n..Sujal & Kashish in another....tat car driven by driver....they both r sitting at da back seat...Kashish is looking outside da window...where as Sujal is catching small glimpes of Kashish wen...wen da wind palys wid her hairs...
(SONG AT DA BACKGROUND)
Woh humsay khafa hai
Hum unsay khafa hai
Magar baat karnay ko jee chata hai
Badi dilnahseen hai yeh unki adaayein
Adaayoin par marnay ko jee chata hai
Kashish
*******
Joo kehna hai unsay khaye bhi tu kasiay
Bina kuch khaye hum rahay bhi tu kaisay
Kasam chataooo ki mohabbhat mein ab tu
Hadhion say guzarnay ka jee chata hai
Sujal
*****
Jo dil ki dua hai khabhi kaam aye
Gari do gari tu araam ayeeeeee
Sanam bazion k haseen dayree mein
Roo kar bikharnay ka jee chata hai

Woh humsay khafa hai
Hum unsay khafa hai
Magar baat karnay ko jee chata hai
Badi dilnahseen hai yeh unki adaayein
Adaayoin par marnay ko jee chata hai


Sujal(in heart):Kashish..mein..humaray darmiayaan ki yeh kamoshyain....khatam kardoongaa...tumhare bina eik eik lamha sadiyoon se lamba lagta hai…..tumhein mein apni zindagi say kahin nahi janay doongaa..
Kashish:kuch kaha...tumnay
Sujal:nahi tu...
Kashish:mujay laga mainay kuch suna..
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GEREWAL HOUSE
Sujal..cums out..after freshen...up...n sees Kashish packing her bag....she goes to.out....wen her mobile rings...itz Tusshar.... Sujal picks it up....
Sujal:Hello...Sujal..Gerewal...here..
Tusshar:jaanta hoon..par..heraan bhi hoon..yeh jaantay howay..k..Kashish mujsay pyar karti hai..phir..bhi..abhi bhi tum usk saath hai..kya yaar..kyun..uskoo chor nahi detay...kyun usko majboor kar rahay hoo apnay saath...rehnay k liye janay doo ussay...
Sujal:nahi choroonga..ussay mein..jooo karna hai karlooo...woh tumsay pyar karti hai i don;t care..lekin mein bhi ussay bahut pyar karta hoon...(he cuts da phone)
Kashish:kiska phone hai Sujal..
Sujal:kisi ka nahi...
Kashish:hmmm
Sujal(being clam):tum kahin jaa rahi hooo..
Kashish:ab tum teq hogay....jaisa tum chatay hoo waisa hi hoga....tumhari zindagi mein..meri koi jagah nahi..lekin...mein khush hoon..mujay tumhari zindagi kaa..hisa banay kaa.muka mila..
Sujal(in heart):kya tumhein abhi mujsay kuch nahi kehna ek bar keha doo tum Tusshar say nahi mujsay pyar karti hoo
Kashish(in heart):Sujal..humara rishta khabhi is moor par ayegaa mainay socha bhi nahi tha..kya tumhein meri annkeion mein apnay liye pyar nazar nahi ata...
Sujal: (in his heart) Kashish yeh tumhara ghar hai…mujh per bhi tumhara haq hai …lekin tum ne jaane ka faisla ker liya…mat jao Kashish…mein jee nahee paon ga
Kashish: (in her heart): Sujal mujhe ruk lou….bas eik baar keh dou ke Kashish ruk jao..bas eik baar…..
Both r just looking in each other eyes....there eyes r saying it all...but still words were needed to support...there feelings...Sujal turns his bac towardz Kashish....n gathers all his courage n says...
Sujal:Kashish yeh tumhara apna faisla hai mainay tumhein nahi kaha apni zindagi say janay k liye..Kashish..mainay joo pal..tumharay saath guzaray woh meri zindagi k...sabsay..haseen pal..thay..mat jayoooo Kashish plz...mat jayoooo...mein nahi raha payoonga tumharay beghair...(he hold her hand)I am sorry Kashish…mein ne tum per vishwaas nahee kiya..tumharay pyaar ke kabil nahee hoon…phir bhi tumharay saath ki zaroorat hai mujhe....
Kashish(cries):Nahi Sujal galti tumhari nahi...galti meri hai..i am sorry..mujay tumhein Tusshar k baray mein phelay hi bata dena chaiye tha...naa mein tumsay chupati..naa hi..humaray beech yeh galat fehmi hoti..
Sujal:Kashish...aaj k baad humaray darmayain koi nahi sakta..
Kashish:Sujal..I love u....very much
Sujal very slowly felt her right cheek and then hecame close and kissed her forhead and then her cheeks they were so close to each that could feel each other breathing and kashish hugged him and both fell back on the bed
song in the background :-
baahon ke darmiyaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan
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NEXT MORNING
Sujal is in da bathroom...n Kashish is checking sum files...as she has to wide up all da work of Shergils b4 leaving da..job..as being professional...
Sujal(shouts):Kashish...Ramu..Kaka...ko.mainay apnay kapray press karnay k liye diye thay...kya lay aye...
Kashish:hmmmm...
Sujal:kya hmmm mujay..do naa..
Kashish:Sujal bed par paray hai khud lay loo naa..
Sujal:Kashish...kyun tang kar rahi hoo...
Kashish:mein kab tang kar rahi hoon..mein tu kaam kar rahi hoon..
Sujal:Kashish...agr tumnay mujay...kapray nahi diye...mein asay hi bahir aajayonga..
Kashish(mischeivously):hmmm acha..
Sujal:Kashish mein serious hoon...
Kashish:mana kisnay kiya hai..
Sujal:teq hai...
Sujal cums out wearing a towel...n Kashish laughs seeing him like this...
Sujal:ab has kyun rahi hoo..
Kashish(giggles):nahi kuch nahi..
He is abt to take..his shirt..wich is placed on da bed...b4 he cud take it..Kashish takes it..n..moves away 4rm him...
Sujal:Kashish..meri shirt doo..
Kashish:Sujal..asie zyda achay lag rahay hoo..
Sujal:really...
Kashish(mischeivously):haan bahut sexy lag rahay hoo..
Sujal:Kashish...mein office k liye late horaha hoon..ek imp meeting hai..
Kashish:looo tumhein kaam ki parhi hai..raat ko..tu..pyar ki badi badi baatein kar rahay thay....
Sujal:acha...kya keha raha tha..mein...
Kashish:haan haan tumhein tu yaaad bhi nahi..
Sujal:Kashish b a gud grl aur mujay meri shirt doo..
Kashish:nahi doongi......kya karloogay Sujal...
Sujal:mujay challange mat karooo...
Sujal tries to catch Kashish but is unable to....n Kashish laughs..
Kashish:Sujal...bhaago mat..towel gir jayegaa...lol
Sujal:Kashish..mein tumhein choroonga.nahi..
Kashish:haan tu kisnay kaha hai choroo...
Sujal...after sum struggle..atlast....get hold of Kashish..he is holding..he both hand against da wall....
Sujal:tu kya keha rahi..asay zyda acha lagta hoon..
Kashish:Sujal..mujay choro..
Sujal:ab kya howa...Kashish..ab bolo naa..mein bahut sexy lag raha hoon naa..
Kashish:Sujal...koi....aajayagaa...
Sujal:anay doo...(he is abt kiss Kashish)
Just then there a knock at da door...itz Rishi....
Rishi:ahemm aheemmm..
Sujal..leave Kashish..n both..hav there eyes down..
Sujal:aa naa Rishi..kuch kaam tha..
Rishi:nahi Bigb ...mein baad mein ata hoon...
Sujal:nahi..hum tu bus asie hi..
Rishi:hota hai Bigb hota hai..
Kashish:mein breakfast banati hoon..(saying this she leaves...)
Rishi:Bigb..mainay kuch nahi dekha...
Sujal:Rishiiiii
Rishi:mein apko khush dekh kar bahut khush hoon..
Sujal:hmmm
Rishi:Bigb waise apka accident kaisay howa..
Sujal:kuch sahi say yaad nahi..lekin mein bahut..drink kar k..car chala raha tha...
Rishi:Bigb mujay mom par shak hai..
Sujal:Rishi...Vasu..Jee..lalchi hai par dault ki liye itna gir sakti hai mein nahi manta..
Rishi:pata nahi bigb..lekin agr yeh kaam mom ka hai tu mein unhein nahi choronga...(Rishi leaves..)
Kashish cum bac in da room....
Kashish:chalein..
Sujal:nahi abhi kahan...subah humari adhoori raha gayi thi naa..
Kashish:konsi baat...
Sujal:dobara yaad dilayooo..
Kashish:Sujal..office...chaloooo....
Sujal:acha phelay ek kiss do..
Kashish:Sujal..nahi..
Sujal:sirf ek..yaar..
Sujal mobile rings...
Kashish:tumhara phone baj raha hai
Sujal:areee isay bhi galat time ring karna hota hai..
Kashish(smiles):tumhara bad luck..
Sujal:Hello
Angad:Sujal…kahan hai yaar tu…na koi phone, na koi khabar…jab se Kashish aye hai tumhari zindagi mein us ke ilawa tu tujhe kuch soojta nahee
Sujal:yaar bus mein office hi araha hoon..
Angad:haan jaldi aaa...u remeber naa...next week...Kripa ki birthday hai..usk liye bhi plan karna hai...asa kar Kashish ko bhi saath lay aa...
Sujal:teq mein aur Kashish atay hai...(he disconect)
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SHERGILLS OFFICE
Kashish:mainay apni job complete kardi hai....ab mera tumharay saath kaam karnay ka sawaal hi nahi uthta...
Tusshar:lekin contract..
Kashish:tum aur tumhara contract...go to hell....
Tusshar:lekin par...
Kashish:Bye Tusshar
Tusshar:i will c u in court...
Sujal:my lawyer wil c u there...as humein tumhein dekhnay mein koi intertes nahi hai..
Kashish:do watever u wana doo..
Sujal:Kashish we r getting late..chaloo...Angad..intezaar kar raha hoga...
Kashish:haan...(they both leave..)
Tusshar(in heart):Kashish tumnay meray saath acha nahi kiya..ab dekhooo mein tumahein kaisay sabak sikhata hoon...aur Mr.Sujal...tumnay bhi...Tusshar panga lay kar achi nahi kiya...mein tum dono ko barbaad kardoonga..
Just then..he mobile rings..
Tushar:heloo..
Lady:Tusshar..tum haaath par haath dhar kaisay beth saktay hoo..Sujal aur Kashish phir say ek hogay....tumhein kaha mainay k unkooo alag kardoo...lekin woh tumsay howa nahi...Goa mein accident tu karwa diya Sujal ka..par phir bhi howa kya..zinda hai naa..woh....mein tu bhechta rahi hoo..tumsay haath mila kar..ek kaam tum sahi nahi akrtay..
Tusshar:sab mein karoo..app tu unk saath ghar par rehti hai...apnay konsa teer mar liya....Vasu..jeee....mera jooo hosakta tha woh mainay kiya...ab..bus mujay..thora time aur day...mein Sujal aur Kashish ka kya karta hooo..bus dekhti jaye...
Vasu:tabsay dekh hi tu rahi hoon...Tusshar..mainay asie hi nahi tumhein.Gerewal Empire k 50% shares...tumhein denay ka wada kiya..hai..i want..reaults..dammit...Sujal..ko rastay say haathoo..humaray pass..zyda time nahi hai..will k mutabiq..woh shadi k baad yeh will kisi naam bhi transfer kar sakta hai..agr usnay apnay naam say will haath li...tu mujay usk marnay ka bhi koi fyda nahi hoga...
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Here da part endz..
This part is dedicated to all readers....especailly...Areej...Shruti..n Suri...as they helped me alot in writing this story...
PLZ DO COMMENT
Love
Adi




Edited by Adildagr8 - 20 April 2006 at 4:24am
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adi tumna totally ek " rockstar " ho....... Smile Tongue
adi main tho hairaan , bouran , pareshaan ho gayi...........waise tumne kahiin tution classes join ki hain kya itni zabardast story likhne ke liye........... Big smile Big smile Big smile
tussi tho too good ho..........cha gaye..... Clap Clap Clap
well adi aaj main tujhe apni baasha mein kuch kehthi hoon romba romba romba nalla irki.................. Embarrassed Big smile
it is in tamil & it means it is very very very nice............ Smile Tongue Big smile
adi ye tere liye:-
hum kuch kar na paye , woh kuch kar na paye.. hum apne aap ko adi ki story padne se rokh na paye...
kya kare yaar woh story hain hi itni achchi ki hum usse durr rehna paye... " DIL KYA KARE , DIL KYA KARE "... Clap   Clap
& ya adi no thanku for the dedication....... Big smile

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