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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 3)

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adi zabardast.........awesome........mind blasting....
too damn cool...... Clap

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ADI bahut aacha likhtey ho
adi mai khuch bhi reply nahi kar pa rahi hoon or mera messanger bhi work nahi kar raha hai i m really sad mera orkut mail khuch work nahi kar raha hai manu ne merey liye orkut par message chordey hai main woh bhi nahi dekh pa rahi hoon na hi apni story post kar pa rahi hoon i m crying mera stupid net i hate it i m missing all of u lot
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great story Clap
cont soon Tongue
cant wait 4 the next part Wink
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ADI i m dying to alk with u all yaha link post karo
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Suri...Tanasha..Unum..Sur...thanx 4 ur comments Smile

Edited by Adildagr8 - 20 March 2006 at 2:42am
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ADI aap to chah gayey ho hmmmmmmm ab hum kya kahey aapki tareef main sabney itna khuch kahe diya hai phir bhi tumahri story tumahri poems ki tarah lazawaab hai see i told u after reading ur first poem at my testi ki ur a goood writer and now u have proved me wrong u r not a good writer u r the best writer who can catches the attention of reader in just 4 part and make them addictive towards ur story waho i have never seen such a catchy story ur fabolous ok abhi tak to main tumahri poems ki fan thi ab tumahri story ki bhi ho gayi hooon

aur haan tum sudharney waley to ho nahi thx to bolna tumahri aadat ho gayi hai main wapis aa gayi hoon ab tum ko dekh lungi thx bol kar to dekhao lagta hai MANU se tumahri complain karni pardeygi

anyways keep up the good work merey pc main khuch prob hai isliye mai messanger par baat nahi kar pa rahi hoon na hi pm ke reply isliye thora time or lagey ka mujhe wapis aaney ke liye but i will be back soon

tab tak yuhi story likhtey raho tc bye

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              DIL KYA KARE(Part-5)

Recap:Sujal & Kashish...spent sumtime at da beach where Kashish tell him abt Tusshaar(she don't mentions da name)...itz almost morning...Sujal takes....Kashish to Angad house....

All r sitting on breakfasst table...n Sujal is making Kashish feel at home...Kripa who is observing all this...ask Angad...
Kripa:Angad...yeh larki kon hai...
Angad:mujay nahi pata....humnay sirf isko lift di thi..
Kripa:Sujal...ko dekh kar tu lagta hai..kafi time say janta hai...anywaz SUJAL
Sujal:haan...kya howa...
Kripa:ek min yahan meri baat suno....
Sujal:hmmmm araha hoon...
Kripa:jaldi ayon...
Sujal:haan bolo....
Kripa:yeh larki kon hai...
Sujal(smiles to Kashish):woh...Kashish....
Kripa:Kashish kon....
Sujal:pata nahi...
Kripa:kya matlab pata nahi...
Sujal:mujay isk baray mein kuch nahi pata..
Kripa:tu yeh tumharay saath kya kar rahi hai..s
Sujal:woh....raat mein humnay isko lift di thi...
Kripa:raat mein di thi..ab subah horahi hai....Sujal mujay seedhay seedhay bataoo gay chakar kya hai...
Sujal(makes a sad face):kitna shak karti hoo muj par..chakar konsa chakar...koi chakar nahi hai....kya tumhein mein asa lagta hoon...
Kripa:ab...dramay mat karooo...aur bola...yeh sab kya horaha hai...
Sujal:ok..bata raha hoon..mein kal raat isay life di thi...isnay bola..k mein isay beach par chordoon...ab mein ek zamandar insan honay k natay ek laarki ko akelay..kaisay chor deta...
Kripa(doubtful):janti hoo tum kitnay zamaydaar hoo agay bolo...
Sujal:haan...agay yeh..k beach..par baatein karaty howay...subah hogayi...agr mein isay is time ghar chornay jata...tu fazool ka scence create hojata...u know..this society....
Kripa:so tum isay yahan lay aye...
Sujal:haan...friendz in need r friend indeed...
Kripa:isk ghar inform kardiya hai...
Sujal:haan...kardiya..tha..bus abt tum..subah 10 bajay tak usko ghar...chor dena...
Kripa:ok....tum....tumhara kuch nahi hosakta...
Sujal(confused):ab mainay kiya kya....
Sujal introduce...Kashish to Kripa..........n Angad...
Sujal:Kashih..yeh Angad hai..meri best friend...issay tu tum mil hi chuki hoo...yeh hai Kripa..Angad ki wife...
Kripa:haan.....Angad...wife...aur is buddho ki friend...
Sujal:Kripa...dosroo k samnay tu achay say baat kiya kaoro...
Kripa:kyun...mainay kuch galat kaha kya....
Angad:acha hogaya na...ab..yeh dono bahut thak gay hogay....jayoo dono araam karloo...
Sujal:haan...mujay tu bahut neend arahi hai...Kashish...ayoo tumhein guest room dekha doon...
Kashish:nahi itz ok...agay hi ap logo nay meray liya kitna kuch kiya hai....mein yehi teq hoon...
Sujal:agr tum nahi soo rahi...tu mein rukta company k liye...warna bore hojayoogii..
Kripa:chaloo..Kashish..warna yeh phir tumhara sar kahay gaa...
Kashish:nahi yeh bahut achi baatein kartay hai...
Angad:Sujal...ki baatein...achi...kya bol raha tha yaar..
Sujal:kuch nahi ab usay sonay day..
SK pass smile to eachother....n leave....
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Itz....12 in da afternoon.....Sujal..yawns n wake up....n looks at da watch....he jumps out of da bed..n goes...down...in da living room...there is no one there..than he goes to kitchen n sees...Kripa working there....he goes there...
Kripa:coffe...
Sujal:yeah..
Kripa:akhir neend khul gayii...
Sujal:Kashish..abhi tak jaagi nahi...
Kripa:woh tu apnay ghar bhi chali gayi...
Sujal:kya..tumnay mujay uthaya kyun nahi....
Kripa:Sujal...kuch hai kya...
Sujal:maltab....
Kripa:tujay nahi lagta tu...Kashish ko zyda hi imp day raha hai...
Sujal:nahi...i was just trying to help...anywayz mein chalta hoo..office..mein ek bahut imp meeting hai...
Kripa:tum fresh hojayoo...dono akatay chaltay hai...
Sujal:hmmmm ok.....
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1 week has been passed since than.....Sujal...was regretting...tat he cudn't...ask anything abt how can connect her....although Kripa...knew her home...but...she has been teasing Sujal...by Kashish name...so he want to ask her....but still sumhow meet her...da reason wich he has been answering his mind is...tat he just want to make sure....tat she is..f9 now...he is still thinking...wen his phone rings...
Sujal:hello....
Vasu:Hello...Sujaal...Mom here...
Sujal:Vasu jee...apnay kaisay phone kar liya...
Vasu:woh actually..jo larki mainay tumharay liye passand ki thi...she wana meet u...
Sujal(shocked):mujsay kyun milna chatai hai...apnay dekh li..bus sahi hai...
Vasu:ajeeb insan hoo..shadi usnay tumhsay karni hai....milay gay bhi tumsay...
Sujal:par....
Vasu:woh 1 ghantay mein tumharay office arahi hai...bye(she disconnects)
Sujal:kya office...par....
He call Angad n Kripa...n tells them abt..tat grl...
Angad:ab arahi hai tu mil lay...akhir tunay ussay shadi karni hai...
Sujal:yehi sab say badi prob hai...sab teri waja say hai...naa tu mujay yeh bakwass idea deta..naa hi mein sshadi mein phassta...s
Kripa:ab jo bhi aarahi..hai..milna to paray ga...
Sujal(nervous):hmmmmmm acha...par Angad..tum meray saath rahay ga...
Angad:haan done...
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SINHA HOUSE
Mr.Sinha:Kashish betaa..tumnnay soch samjh kar shadi k liye haan ki hai..
Kashish:haan dad bahut socha..mainay....mein kab tak..Tusshar k ghum mein ansoo bhatai rahoo gi...mujay nayi shuroo karni paray gi...kisi nay mujay kaha hai..k zindagi mein abhi bahut kuch baki hai(she think abt Sujal)
Mr.Sinha:jaisy tumahari marzi...mein Vasu jee ko phone kar k..tumharay anay ka bata diya tha...
Kashish:teq hai dad...mein chalti hoon...
Mr.Sinha:haan........Bye
Kashish is in da taxi..n is thinking abt Sujal...her prob was same as Sujal...she wanted to meet...him...but was hesitant to ask Kripa...n da reason here was...she wanted to thank him properly...watever da reason mayb...God want them to b together....She reaches...Gerewal...Industry
Here Sujal...is walking....corner to corner....n Angad n Kripa...r watching him....4rm last 30 mins...
Angad:yaar...mein tujay dekh dekh kar thak gaya hoon..ab tu beth jaa...
Kripa:tumharay asay chalnay say kuch badalnaytu wala nahi...kya kehtay hoo tum log...haan...Sujal..chill out...
Sujal:haan...haan..sab milkar mazak chill out....yahan par...(just then there a knock at da door...n a door opens...n itz a beautiful grl...she ask)
Kashish:Mr.Gerewal....
Angad:Kashish tum...
Kashish:Hi...tum log....
Kripa:haan..woh...hum kisi ka intezaar kar rahay hai.....lekin tum yahan...
Kashish:haan..mein yahan...Mr.S.Gerewal say milnay ayi thi...unsay...meri...
Sujal(interups):Hii...Kashish i am Sujal Gerewal...par tumhein mujsay kya kaam hai...
Kashish(shocked):don't tell me..meri shadi tumsay honay wali hai....
Sujal(surprised):Kashish Sinha...
Angad n Kripa...r giggling......n Sujal..n Kashish r shocked to death....
Angad:Sujal....
Sujal:hmmmmm
Kripa:tum dono baatein karoo..mein coffee bhejti hoon..
Kashish:nahi itz ok...
Angad n Kripa both leave...n Sujal..n Kashish r unable to hav a eye contact...there is a deep silence...both don't know where to start 4rm...but Sujal..atlast..break..this ice...
Sujal:so do u wana marry me...
Kashish(confused):i don't know.....meri shadi tumsay...
Sujal:kyun mein tumhein passand nahi hoon..
Kashish:nahi woh baat nahi hai...
Sujal:iska matlab passand hoo..
Kashish:meray baray i mean meray past k bawajood..tum mujsay shadi karna chatay hoo...
Sujal:acha...mein tumhein sach sach batata hoon...mujay shadi karnnay mein koi interest nahi..tumsay nahi mein kisi say shadi karna nahi chata...par..karnai parh rahi hai....
Kashish:matlab....
Sujal:matlab yeh....k meri dad ki will(he tell her all...abt da clause)..so bus isi waja..mein shadi kar raha hoon...tu ab bolo...do wana marry me...
Kashish:meray dad jo chatay hai mein wahi karoongi..tumhari jagah koi bhi hota...mein shadi karleti...woh..tu meri kismat achi hai..atleast tumehin mein jaanti tu hoon...
Sujal(smiles):hmmmmm iska matlab...tumhara jawaab haan hai..
Kashish(smiles):haan
They both...go out of da cabin...tell...Kripa n Angad abt there..decision...they both r very happy..u know tat...Vasu...isvery angry...tat how cud her agree...4 this marrige...Mr.Sinha is now busy in preparations..of...da marriage.....
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Here end this part...
Dedicated to SHRUTI....my fan.. LOL LOL missed u dear...thanx God u r bac Embarrassed
Coming up:Sujal & Kashish marriage...
Plz do Comment
Luv
Adi



Edited by Adildagr8 - 20 March 2006 at 3:34am
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waha ADI tum to bouncer par bouncer de rahey ho kya lika hai 5 part main sujal kashish ki shadi fix gr888888888 tum isi tarah likhtey rahey to main teri story ko jarror koi prize de dungi oye yeah story manu ko bhi post kar dena ussey mazaa aayega and ab to main teri sabse bardi FAN hoon dedication ke liye shukriya even i missed u lot thx god i m back lolzzz

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