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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 28)

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                  DIL KYA KARE(Part-16)



Recap:Tusshar tells Kashish they r going to Goa 4 sum project work....Kashish refused then he threatens her tat he will tell Sujal abt there past...

SHERGILS OFFICE
Tusshar is sitting in his cabin n..is playing...wid..da pen...n smiling..wen Swayam enters....
Swayam:Hey Tussahar kya horaha hai..
Tussahr:kuch nahi bhai bus asay hi..
Swayam:mein nay suna tu Goa jaa raha hai..
Tusshar:haan..woh project....
Swayam(interups):yeh Kashish...
Tusshar:Kashish....haan..wph meray saaath arahi hai..
Swayam:wat r u upto...
Tusshar(smiles):kuch nahi bhai...apko yaad hai bachpan mein apnay kholonay kisi k pass bardhast nahi karta tha..chaye mein ussay kheloon ya na khelta hoon..meri cheezain meray pass hi rehni chaiye..
Swayam:Tusshar..Kashish kisi ab kisi ki patani hai...
Tusshar:jaanta hoo..usko mainay yeh kaha tha..k woh meri patni nahi ban sakti yeh nahi k...woh kisi aur say shadi kar lay...
Swayam:tu kehna kya chata hai..
Tusshar:beshak woh patni kisi aur ki hai..par rahay woh meray saath hi...
Swayam:pata nahi teray dimaagh mein kya chal raha...
Tusshar:don't worry bhai....mein jo kuch karoonga soch samjh kar karoonga..
AIRPORT
Kashish:Sujal ab tum jayoo...meri flight ka time horaha hai..
Sujal:Kashish jana zaroori hai...
Kashish:nahi mein tu picnic par jaa rahi hoo..
Sujal:Goa..waise picnic k liye bura tu nahi hai..
Kashish:Sujalll...tum piclay ek ghantay say yahan hoo..mujay drop karnay aye...tumhein jana nahi hai kya...
Sujal:tumhein chor kar janay ka maan nahi hai..
Kashish:sab tab say yehi dekh rahay hai..
Sujal:tu kya howa...mein bus tumhein c off karnay aya..hoon..
(Just then da flight is announced...n Tusshar moves towardz Kashish...)
Tusshar:shall we leave..
Kashish:haan bus..woh..
(Tusshar is still standing...wen Sujal says...)
Sujal:do u mind leaving...
Tussahr:nahi i was just..(he leaves)
Sujal:tumhein nahi lagta he is jealous of me..
Kashish(confused):nahi tu..tumhein asa kyun laga...
Sujal:nahi bus asie hi..jis tarah say woh tumhein dekhta hai..mujay acha nahi lagta..door rehna issay...
Kashish(smiles):acha baba aur kuch...
Sujal(sad):nahi...ab jayoooo..(Kashish hugs Sujal )
Kashish:Bye...(she leaves....she just reached da check in counter...wen her mobile rings...itz Sujal..)
Kashish:ab kya howa...
Sujal:i am already missing u...
Kashish:Sujallll...Bye...
Sujal:hmmm ok Bye..Takecare...
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It hav been 5 dayz n Sujal is missing Kashish very much...he is unable to concetrate in his work....since 5 dayz he has been counting each min...4 him itz like time hav stoped...Kashish ka intezaar lamba hota jaa raha hai...

Sujal(in heart):Kashish yeh 5 din mainay kaisay guzaray mein hi jaanta hoo...10 more days...nahi hoga..mujsay..mujay tumsay milna hai kisi bhi tarah...
Angad:kya soch raha hai..
Sujal:kuch nahi...
Angad:Kashish ko miss kar raha hai..
Sujal:haan yaar...
Angad:Sujal...tu uskoo har ghantay k baad phone karta hai...phir bhi...
Sujal:Angad..5 din hogay..mein nay usko nahi dekha...
Angad:asay hi ghumati hai larkyain..akhir tu bhi phas hi gaya naa...
Sujal:mujay samjh nahi ata tum log mujay shadi say itna dartay kyun thay...mera experience to bahut acha hai..
Angad:abhi tu shadi ko sirf 1 month howa hai..abhi tu acha hi lagay gaa..agay agay dekh hota hai kya...
Sujal:agay kya...haan..
Kripa:Angad tum kya ussay ulti ulti baatein sakatay rehtay hoo..
Angad:mujay kuch sikhanay ki kya zaroorat..hum mein sab say ulta tu yeh khud hai...
Kripa:tum dono ki baaton mein batatna bhul gayi...Sujal Mr.Chopra k saath joo meeting hai kab rakhoon....woh sirf yehi ek hafta yahan hai phir he is going bac to london...
Sujal:Mr.Chopra..no meetings...yaar...
Kripa:Sujal...tum Goa chalay jayoooo..aaj kal Mr.Chopa bhi wohi hai....
Sujal(smiles):Goa...gr8....yeh meeting kal hi hogi...
Angad:Kripa yeh kya kiya..
Kripa(confused):mainay kya kiya...
Sujal(mummbles):Kashish mein araha hoon..
Angad:jaa ab next 10 dayz tak koi honay nahi wala..
Sujal:tu kitna samjhdaar hai..naa..office sambhal leyna..
Kripa(mischeivously):han tum jayooo..aur plz meeting bhi attend kar leyna...
Sujal:meeting hi tu attend karnay jaa raha hoon..
Angad:haan pata hai...
Sujal is very excited to meet Kashish...he choose driving to go to Goa...he has been driving since noon....he is few miles away 4rm Goa....He is remembering all da sweet moments spent wid Kashish........how they met 1st time...there marriage....wen he proposed...Kashish...
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GOA
(There a knock at da door...Kashish opens it....)
Tusshar:Hiii...
Kashish:kuch kaam tha..
Tusshar:haan mein dinner k liye jaa raha tha..socha tumsay bhi poachloon
Kashish:no thanx...
Tusshar:come on Kashish...kab tak mujsay door rahoogi...tum mujsay pyar karti thi..
Kashish:Tusshar..mera yahan tumahray saath hona sirf...majboori..hai...aur raha..pyar ka sawaal..tumnay uska jawaab khud day diya..mein pyar karti THI
Tusshar:Kashish...mujay ghussa mat dilyooo...mein tumhein Goa isliye laya..tha..k...
Kashish:Tusshar..jayooo yahan say plz...
Tusshar:tumhein meray saath dinner par jana hi hoga...warna
Kashish:kya warna....tumhari dhamkioo say mein tang agayii hoon...kya karoo gay tum..
Tusshar:sab kuch bata doon mein Sujal....
Kashish:tumhein joo karna hai karoo..i don't..care..just get out of my room....
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Sujal reaches...da hotel...where Kashish is staying.....he goes to her room...wid...a big...bouquet wich covers his face....he knocks...Kashish opens da door...
Sujal:Suprise...(he handsover da flowers to her..)
Kashish:tum yahan...
Sujal:kyun mera ana mana tha...
Kashish:nahi par...
Sujal:Kashish.....par war..choro...i am missed u soo much.....tum jaanti hoo yeh 5 din mainay kaisay..gauzaray....ek ek pal gin kar guazara....
Kashish(thinks):Sujal yahan..agr Tussahr nay issay sab bata diya...
Sujal:kya howa tum pareshan kyun hoo..
Kashish:nahi kuch nahi...tum thak gay hogay...fresh hojayoo..
Sujal:haan mein tried to tha..par tumhein dekh liya..sab thaken khatam...
Kashish:hmmm..par achank..tum..yahan
Sujal:maiany socha..tum akalei..Goa..dekh kar kya karoo..gi..mein saath joo nahi tha..
Kashish:hmmmmm
Sujal:kya howa tum meray yahan anay say khush nahi..
Kashish:nahi asa nahi hai....
Sujal:chaloo tum tayaar hojayoo...phir hum dinner par chaltay hai..mein fresh hokar ata hoon
(he cums out Kashish is still not ready..)
Sujal:tum abhi tak tayyar nahi hui..
Kashish:Sujal...mera bhook nahi hai...tum chalay jayooo
Sujal:hmmm chalo teq hai mein yahan beth kar dekhta hoon..k..is kamray mein itna intersting kya hai..joo tum piclay...5 din...say yahan raha kar bore nahi hui..
Kashish:nahi woh...
Sujal(teasingly):kahin meray begahir hi tu dating nahi kar rahi thi..koi aur tu nahi mil gaya..
Kashish(annoyed):Sujal...kaisi baatein kar rahay hoo...
Sujal:Kashish...tum har baat ko itni serious kyun leti hoo..
Kashish:tum bhi tu...
Sujal:acha..phir dinner par..
Kashish:tum manay walay nahi hoon
Sujal:nahi addat say majboor hoon..
Kashish:chalooo...
Sujal:ab aise chaloo gii tu lagay gaa..mein..apni biwi ko nahi kisi ko zabardati dinner laya hoon..
Kashish:tu mein kya karoo..
Sujal:Goa itni romantic place hai..log yahan akar..aur romantic hojatay hai..aur tum hoo k....
Kashish(smiles):acha baba i am sorry....chalein...
Sujal:nahi...
Kashish:kyun ab kya howa...
(Sujal thinks 4 a while..n says...)
Sujal:nahi kuch nahi...
Kashish:Sujal...
Sujal:abhi tum nahi batana chati koi baat nahi..mein nahi poachoongaa..par jab tumhein lagay tum apni pareshani share kar sakti hoo...mein yehi hoon..
Kashish:Sujal..asa nahi...hai...
Sujal:phir kaisa hai..
Kashish:Sujal...mein tumhein(just then their's a knock at da door...)
Sujal:mein dekhta hoon...
Tusshar(shocked):Hiiii...Sujalllll
Sujal:Hi...Tuuuuushar..
Tusshar(annoyed):tum yahan..
Sujal:God giv me break..Goa mein kahin likha hai...k yahan Sujal Gerewal ki entry band hai..phleay Kashish aur ab tum...
Tusshar:nahi..woh....
Sujal:newayz...choro...tum bhi dinner k liye jaa rahay hoo...
Tusshar:haan
Sujal:tum humein join tu nahi karnay walay...
Tusshar(smiles):nahi don't worry enjoy ur self..
Sujal(laughs):nahi agr u wana join u r most welcum..
Tusshar:no itz ok....
Sujal:chalein Kashish...
Kashish:haan.....
They all move to da resturtant....Sujal....n Kashish sitss n Tusshar sits on a near by table...Sujal order food...n he is waiting....wen he leaves...4 a min...
Sujal:mein ek min mein ata hoon
Kashish:par kahan jaa rahay hoo
Sujal:wait naa..itna miss karna acha nahi..
Kashish:acha..jayoooo(he leaves...)
Tusshar:yeh yahan kya kar raha hai..
Kashish:mujay nahi pata...
Tusshar:tumnay kaha tha naa..jo karna hai karloo ab dekhna mein kya karta hoon...
He also leaves..to find Sujal...Kashish is sitting very nervous...she don't know wat to do...wat wud she say Sujal...she is thinking all this..wen..a there a annoucement....
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Here da part endz guyz...
Hope u like it..
This part is dedicated to love of my life..Kiran(my finacee)
Plz Do Comment...
Luv
Adi


Edited by Adildagr8 - 08 April 2006 at 9:39am

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Clap great going..cont soon adil..
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Posted: 08 April 2006 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

Originally posted by appki_kashish

Wah Wah Adil kya likhte ho ek dum apne jaisa bana diya Sujal ko usse bade flirt toh tum ho anywayz thoda sudhar jao aur Sujal ko bhi sudharo Wink aur phir Kashish Sujal ko chodke dusro pe bhi concentrate karo Wink by the way ur story roxxx but not you LOLn ya keep writing akhir training toh mujhse hi li hain na aur haaan sara credit khud mat lo mera bhi nam aana chahiye  akhir i play such an imp part im sure mujhse impress hoke hi u wrote da story EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

wah wah kiren bahut aachey Clapkya baat kahi too good luv ur comment boley to jahkas WinkWink 

adi bolo hai koi jawab and i agree with her yaar sab ko dedicate kartey kabhi apni life ki heroine ka naam bhi le liya karoy LOLLOL

chalo tum dono bilkul story ke couple ki tarah ho Big smile

Sur tum dost meri hoo...agree Kiran k saath karti hoo..yeh kya baat hui...Confusedaur Sur..mein naam mention karoon ya na karoon..har part ussi ko dedicated hota haiEmbarrassed....lekin agr tum kehti hoo tu naam bhi lay leta hoon..LOLab hum story k couple ki tarah to hongay hi story hi humari haiWink

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Posted: 08 April 2006 at 11:13am | IP Logged
gr8 part adil...too gud...

keep it goin.....cont soon. Embarrassed
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Posted: 08 April 2006 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
gr8 part adi
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Posted: 08 April 2006 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Adildagr8

Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

Originally posted by appki_kashish

Wah Wah Adil kya likhte ho ek dum apne jaisa bana diya Sujal ko usse bade flirt toh tum ho anywayz thoda sudhar jao aur Sujal ko bhi sudharo Wink aur phir Kashish Sujal ko chodke dusro pe bhi concentrate karo Wink by the way ur story roxxx but not you LOLn ya keep writing akhir training toh mujhse hi li hain na aur haaan sara credit khud mat lo mera bhi nam aana chahiye  akhir i play such an imp part im sure mujhse impress hoke hi u wrote da story EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

wah wah kiren bahut aachey Clapkya baat kahi too good luv ur comment boley to jahkas WinkWink 

adi bolo hai koi jawab and i agree with her yaar sab ko dedicate kartey kabhi apni life ki heroine ka naam bhi le liya karoy LOLLOL

chalo tum dono bilkul story ke couple ki tarah ho Big smile

Sur tum dost meri hoo...agree Kiran k saath karti hoo..yeh kya baat hui...Confusedaur Sur..mein naam mention karoon ya na karoon..har part ussi ko dedicated hota haiEmbarrassed....lekin agr tum kehti hoo tu naam bhi lay leta hoon..LOLab hum story k couple ki tarah to hongay hi story hi humari haiWink

yaar dost to hoon tumahri par kiran se main to agree karungi Tongueafterall last main to tum bhi ussey agree kartey ho Winkhmmmm hum janty hai ki aapki poori story kiran ke liye hi haiEmbarrassedhaan ji poori story to aap dono ki hai to hogey hi aap dno hero heroineEmbarrassed



Edited by shruti_gauri1 - 08 April 2006 at 2:21pm
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adi ur story as lovely as a fresh flower, as sweet as a song of nightangle Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
overall brilliant part Clap
aur yaar ab kiran terey se bahut khush honey wali hai Wink Wink Wink madam se 1 din baat karwao


Edited by shruti_gauri1 - 08 April 2006 at 3:18pm
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