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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 24)

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Posted: 03 April 2006 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Adildagr8

Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

jao adi main nahi baat karti tumsey thanx bola Angry nahi baat karungi tumsey

Ok mat karooo dekhta hoon..kab mujsay naraaz rehti hoo.....mujay pata hai tum mujsay baat kiye beghair raha hi nahi sakti.....WinkLOL

 

hmmmmmm janab tum kafi khuch meri adat jan gaye ho LOL

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Posted: 03 April 2006 at 10:24am | IP Logged

Originally posted by kahish-rox

hey adi...u rock man....love this story!!

Hey thanx Kiran..just inspired 4rm ur stories....Smile

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Posted: 03 April 2006 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

Originally posted by Adildagr8

Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

jao adi main nahi baat karti tumsey thanx bola Angry nahi baat karungi tumsey

Ok mat karooo dekhta hoon..kab tak mujsay naraaz rehti hoo.....mujay pata hai tum mujsay baat kiye beghair raha hi nahi sakti.....WinkLOL

 

hmmmmmm janab tum kafi khuch meri adat jan gaye ho LOL

Ab appko itna tu jaan hi gaya hoon...aur yeh bhi janta hoo app mujsay naraaz nahi hosakti...Wink

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Posted: 03 April 2006 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Adildagr8

Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

Originally posted by Adildagr8

Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

jao adi main nahi baat karti tumsey thanx bola Angry nahi baat karungi tumsey

Ok mat karooo dekhta hoon..kab tak mujsay naraaz rehti hoo.....mujay pata hai tum mujsay baat kiye beghair raha hi nahi sakti.....WinkLOL

 

hmmmmmm janab tum kafi khuch meri adat jan gaye ho LOL

Ab appko itna tu jaan hi gaya hoon...aur yeh bhi janta hoo app mujsay naraaz nahi hosakti...Wink

woh to hai dono ek dusrey se naraz nahi rahe saktey na hi baat kiye bina rahey saktey haiTongue

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Posted: 03 April 2006 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 12:35am | IP Logged
                  DIL KYA KARE(Part-14)

Recap:Suja n Kashish confess their love to each other...n spent sum romantic moments wich each other...

MORNING
When Kashish eyes opened the next morning, she was at first startled, wondering where she had come but then when she saw Sujal next to her she rembered all the sweet moment between them she runs her fingers through his hair and bends down to kiss his forehead when he opens his eyes Sujal gives a mischievous smile Kashish shyly looks away
Sujal:kya kar rahi thi Mrs Kashish Sujal Garewal
(Kashish feel shy and she buried her face in his shoulder and Sujal put his hand arround her and kisses her forhead)
Kashish:Gud Morning
Sujal:Gud Morning wife(still looking at her n smiling constantly)
Kashish:kya dekh rahay hoo...
Sujal:tumhein aur kisko
Kashish:Sujallll
Sujal:aaj say phelay tum kahbhi inti khubsorat nahi lagi..
Kashish:ohh really...
Sujal:tumhein kya lagta hai......(he moves close to her face...wen again his mobile rings..)
Kashish(smiles):Sujal pick up phone..kisi ko zaroori kaam hoga...
Sujal:log bhi na..romance hi nahi karnay detay...
Kashish(enquires):Sujal...nahi kanray detay...kal..raaat..
Sujal(naughtliy):kya Kashish..
Kashish(blushes):nahi kuch nahi...
(Sujal again cuts da call)
Sujal:so meri morning kiss kahan hai
(Kashish look shyly and try to getup but Sujal usko uthney nahi deta hai)
Kashish:chordo na Sujal ghar wapis nahi jana hai kya sab wait ar rahey hogey
Sujal:kartey hai to karney do abhi Sujal Garewal apney official honeymoon par hai
(Kashish smile and he try to kiss her when his cellphone start ringing again)
Sujal:issey bhi abhi bajna tha
Kashish(giggles):tum phone uthtoo mein fresh hokar ati hoo...
Sujal:mein bhi chalta hoon..
Kashish:nahi...koi zaroorat nahi...(she gets off da bed...)
Sujal:Hey Kashish...
Kashish:kya hai..
Sujal:u know i love u
Kashish(smiles):pata hai....
(Sujal picks up to da phone..)
Sujal:Hiii
Angad:kahan hai...
Sujal:kyun tujay bhi ana hai
Angad:tu kal raat gayb kahan hogaya...
Sujal:kahin nahi bus asay hii...
Kyva:haan asay hiii
Sujal:Hi...
Kyva:agr humari yaad ajaye tu..wapis ajayii..
Sujal:haan ok....
Kyva:bewafa insan...dosto ko bhul gaya..
Sujal:chal cup kar mein abhi araha hoon..
Kyva(teasing):take ur time..
Sujal:tujay mein akar batata hoon...
Kyva:chal..bye
Sujal:bye...
(Kashish n Sujal..reach...Nanda House...now da Qs starts...)
Angad:kal tu beghair bataye hi gayab hogaya..
Sujal:haan woh bus asay hiii
Kripa:ohhh..hota hai...
Sujal:nahi..mein tu asay hi..
Angad:koi baat nahi yaar..hum bhi asay hi parties par gayab hotay thay..
(Anjali cum wid coffee...n sits wid them..n asks)
Anjali:kal raat kaisa raha...
Sujal(suprised):kya...
Anjali:party aur kya...
Sujal:acha acha woh..woh.tu kamal thi..kyun Kashish..
Kashish(glares at him):haan party bahut achi thi..

EVENING

Guyz r standing having sum drinks..where as..ladies r busy in gossiping......

Kripa:tum log waha akleay behtay hoo..we thought hum saath enjoy karnay aye hai..
Angad:hum yehi hai..tum logo ko hi baatein hi khtam nahi hoti..
Anjali:chalo ek game kheltay hai..
Kyva:no Antaksari ...Plz..
Anjali:tu phir aur kya kehaly...
Sujal(winks at Anjali):Truth n Dare kheltay hai..
Anjali:hmmmm ok...
Kashish:mein bottle..ghumati hoon...(da 1st turn is of Angad...he chooses...dare..he is asked...to..go n hit a grl...very hard..tat she falls...he do so...n all r given..different dares n truths...now da bottle..stops upon Kashish..she choose dare...)
Anjali:tumsay kya karwaooo...
Sujal:hmmmm
Anjali:chaloo Sujal liye gana gayooo
Kashish:gana aur mein...no way...
Sujal:tats not fair..chaloo ab gana gayoo..
Kashish:hmmmm ok....
Sujal(excited):mein wait kar raha hoon
Kashish:hmmmm
SAMNAY ATAY HO TU JAISAY ISQH KA DEDAR HOTA HAI..
TUM CHALAY JATAY HO TU TUMHRAY ANAY KA INTEZAAR HOTA HAI.
TUMHARA GUNAGANA KHYLON MEIN KHOO JANA
MUJAY BAHOON MEIN LEKAR ASAAM TAK HO ANA
PAL PAL KYA MUJKO TO TUMSAY..HAR PAL MEIN SAU BAAR PYAR HOTA HAI..
Sujal(teasingly):not bad...acha tha..
Kashish:ab koshish ki thi..jaisa bhi tha..
Kripa:chaloo let continue da game...
Anjali:haan chaloo..
(This time da bottle stops at Sujal...)
Kripa:Sujal...truth or dare...
Sujal(confident):dare ofcourse
Anjali:well kiss da person sitting on ur right side...
Sujal:WHAT!!!!!!!!!!
Angad:y r u so shocked...Kashish hi tu hai..
Sujal:yeah...par ok...
Kashish(confued):Sujalllll...
Sujal:ab dare li hai tu pori tu karni pari gii...
(Just then Kashish mobiles rings...she excuses herself)
Sujal:Kashish..meri dare..
Kashish(smiles):ur bad luck...(she recieves da call)
Tusshar:Hiii
Kashish(shocked):Tusshar...
Tusshar:acha laga k tum abhi tak meri awaaz nahi bhuli...
Kashish:tumnay phone kyun kiya..
Tusshar:ab mein yeh kahoon ga k tumhein miss kar raha tha..tu tum manaogi nahi...
Kashish:mujay tumhari bakwaas sunay mein koi interst nahi tha...
Tusshar:haan ab yehi baatein bakwaas lagti hai tumhein...
Kashish:mein phone rakh rahi hoo..
Tusshar:Rukooo..mainay yeh batanay k liye..u hav to join da office soon..ek bahut imp project hai..jis mein i want u to assit me...
Kashish:but i am on leave...
Tusshar:tumhari leave mainay cancel kardi..
Kashish:par...
Tusshar:i just called u to inform tat...tumhein kal say office join karna hai..
Kahsish:ok f9..i will b there...
Tusshar:tumhara husband kaisa hai..khush hoo usk saath..
Kashish:well itz non of ur business...lekin phir bhi mein tumhein batayi hoon i am very happy...Bye
Tusshar:Bye...
(Kashish returns bac...here all hav decided to go in..as it was very cold out...all wish each other Gud Nite...n goes to there respective rooms...Sujal observes Kashish is worried abt sumthing,..)
Sujal:kiska phone tha
Kashish:kisi ka nahi..
Sujal:Kashishhhhhhhhhh
Kashish:meray boss ka he told me to join 4rm 2morrow..
Sujal:haan is mein prob kya hai..hum kal wapis jaa hi rahay hai..
Kashish:haan woh tu hai..
Sujal:sab theek hai naa...
Kashish(smiles):haan...sab theek hai..
(They reach there room...)
Sujal(mischeivously):Kashish mainay apni dare pori nahi ki...
Kashish:Sujalllllllll..
Sujal(sings):Hum tum ek kamaray mein band hoo aur chaabi kho jaye...(n moves close to Kashish..)
Kashish:Sujal..tum pagal hogay hoo..
Sujal:haan tumhara pyar mein....(the both hug)
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Here da part endz
This part is dedicted to Sur....as she helped me in writing this part....
Hope u like it..
Plz do comment
Luv
Adi


Edited by Adildagr8 - 04 April 2006 at 10:17am
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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 2:25am | IP Logged
lovely part adi. keep it up. Waiting for the next part write it soon
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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Clap ..great part adi!..... Wink Wink

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