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adi another grea part.

Just loved it.

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great part dude plz continue soon Wink
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continue soon its great
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Clap Clap ..wow..adi great..areej...tum bhi chaa gayi wah wah! lol
chalo yaar ab tum jaldhi se theek ho..jab theek hogaye tab kahongi....we want morreeee Clap
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                DIL KYA KARE(Part-13)


Recap:Sujal realizes his love 4 Kashish...

Sujal didn't slept last nite..he has been thinking tat...his feeling 4 Kashish... is this really love....
Itz Morning...Kashish wakes up n sees...Sujal..standing by da window...
Kashish:tum itni jaldi uth gay...
Sujal(in heart):yahan soya kon tha...
Kashish:kya howa(she standz up moves towardz to da washroom...)
Sujal:kuch nahi....tumhara payon ab kaisa hai..
Kashish:meray payon ko kya howa..
Sujal(surprised):woh kal raat...
(Kashish realizes tat she had a sparin in her feet atlast nite...)
Kashish(confused):haan..ab mera payon teq hai..don't worry..
Sujal:dard tu nahi horaha naa..
Kashish:nahi baba...
Sujal:chaloo tum fresh hojayooo..
AFTERNOON
Kyva:annivesery meri hai...aur biwi k saath ghum Sujal raha hai..
Angad:apni biwi k saath saath humari biwiyion ko bhi shopping par lay gaya..
Kyva:woh dono humari biwiyain baad mein hai..uski dost phelay...thi
Angad:haan yeh bhi hai...
Kyva:ek tarah say acha hi hai..humein party ki tayyari bhi tu kanri hai...
Angad:waise teri anniversy achi hai..shaadi woh bhi Valentine day walay din...
Kyva:ab baatein kam kar aur kaam kar..
Angad:tu yahan mujsay kaam karwa...Sujal wahan mazay kar raha hoga...
Kyva:karnay day mazay...becharay ki nayi nayi shadi hui hai..
Angad:hmmm chal..
(They both indulge in working...n arranging 4 party...wich is to b held...2morrow evening...)
SHOPPING MALL
They all Sujal,Kashish,Kripa,Anjali hav been shopping since morning...itz noon now...
Anjali:thak gay shopping kar k...
Kripa:haan really..
Sujal:tum log...thak gay..kyun...tab coolie tu mein bana howa hoo..
Anjali:mujay tu bhook lag rahi..
Sujal:abhi aur shopping karloo
Kashish:bhook tu mujay bhi bahut lagi hai..
Sujal:chaloo woh samnay resturtant mein chaltay...
Anjali:mein kuch order kar k ati hoo..
Kashish:nahi tum ruko mein jati hoon..
Kripa:ok...
Sujal(to himself):kya yehi pyar hota hai...mujay nahi pata..mein kaisay kisi say pyar kar sakta hoon....i don't belive in love..par agr pyar nahi tu kya hai...
Anjali:Sujal..kal kya hai..
Sujal(still lost..):tumhari anniversery
Kripa:idiot usk elwa...
Sujal:haan Valentine's Day..
Anjali:thanx God isko itna tu pata hai..
Kripa:tu phir kya socha hai..
Sujal:sochna kya hai..
Kripa(fedup):Sujal..u r impossible..Anjali tu hi samjha...
Anjali:Sujal..hum yeh poach rahi thi...k who is gona b ur Valentine this year...
Sujal(confused):ofcourse Kashish...
Anjali:ohhh..poacha ussay..
Sujal:ismein poachnay ka kya hai....
Kripa:yehi k will she b ur Valentine...
Sujal:hmmmmm
Anjali:kya howa...
Sujal:Anjali...tum Kyva say pyar karti hoo....
Anjali(confused):haan..
Sujal:tumhein kaisay pata k u love him...
Anjali:jis insan say hum pyar kartay hai..usi ki khushi mein humari khushi hoti hai...usk dard say humein dard hota hai...usko khonay ka dar hota hai...bus..humein khud hi pata chal jata hai..k humein ussay pyar hai..
Sujal(lost):jab hum usko kisi aur k saath dekhtay hai..humein jealously hoti hai...
Kripa:haan...
Sujal(thinks):goshh !!! woh insecurity woh jealousness jisko main naam nahin de paa raha tha woh pyaar  hai...
Anjali:Sujalll...
Sujal:haan..acha pyar ka izhaar karna zaroori hota hai..
Kashish(returns):haan bahut zaroori hota hai..warna app jis say pyar kartay hoo ussay kaisay pata chalay ga...
Sujal:pyar karnay walay tu kehtay hai...k pyar annkion mein dekh jata hai...
Kashish:haan woh tu dekh jata hai...
Sujal(mummbles):tumhein meri annkein mein nahi dekhta..
Kashish(teasing):nahi...
Sujal(confused):kya matlab
Kashish:nahi mein tu Anjali ko bol rahi thi..k Coffe NAHI hai...
Sujal:ohhh....acha..
(Kashish..Kripa...n Anjali..r all aware of wats going on in Sujal mind...)
Kripa:chalein...ghar woh log intezaar kar rahay hoogay..
Kashish:haan chaloo..
(They go home....n all da arrangement 4 party r done...all 3 couples r getting ready in there rooms...Sujal..is all ready...n..is walking to n fro in da room...Kashish is getting irritated by his behaviour...)
Kashish:Sujal kya howa..
Sujal(nervous):nahi kuch nahi...
Kashish:yeh mera necklace..band kardoo..
Sujal(thinks):Sujal...ek i love hi tu bolna hai..bol day...itni larkayion ko bol chuka hai..Kashish ko bhi bol day..agr nahi bolay gaa..tu aur kon..bolay..tujay hi kehna hoga...be a man..yaar...u can do it...
Kashish:Sujallll
Sujal:yes i can do it...
Kashish:kya..
Sujal:nahi kuch nahi..(he locks da necklace...n Kashish is smiling at him...)
Kashish:Sujal kuch kehna hai..
Sujal:haan..tumhein kaisay pata..
Kashish:nahi mujay laga k shyad tumhein kuch kehna hai..
Sujal:haan kehna tu hai..
Kashish:hmmm bolo..
(Sujal gathers all his courage...n speaks...)
Sujal:Kashish..i love u...
Kashish:haan tu...
Sujal:kya matlab tu..i love...kya tum bhi mujsay..i mean...u..do u love me...
Kashish:sochna paray gaa...
Sujal:comeon Kashish i know u love me..ab bolo bhi
Kashish:propose me...phir..sochti hoo i love u or not...
Sujal:propose..shadi say phelay kartay haai naa..
Kashish:tu i love bhi shaadi say phealy bolna tha naa..
Sujal:Kashish..
Kashish:Sujal....(Just then Anjali cums to calls both of them..)
Kashish:chalein..
Sujal(confused):After u....
The party...is at itz full swing...all da ppl r  enjoying...themselves...Sujal goes to da stage..n da musik..stops...
Sujal:may i hav ur attention plz...(All da ppl look 2wardz him...)
Sujal:mujay nahi pata..k pyar ka izhaar  kaisay kartay hai..aaj mein apni wife..Kashish k liye kuch kehna chata hoon...(pauses)Kashish I love u... i really do...mein yeh nahi kehta k..mein tumhein hamshea khush rakhoongaa...khabhi..dukhi nahi honay doonga..par yeh zaroor kehta hoon.. us dukh mein mein hamshea tumharay saath doongaa...tum jab bhi mor kar dekhoo gii mujay apnay saath payoongi.....(he is moving towardz Kashish..while saying all this..he reaches...to her n bendz on his kness n says)mein yeh nahi kehta k mein tumsay duniya mein sab say zyda pyar karta hoo..par yeh zaroor kehta hoon..k jitna pyar mein aaj tumsay karata hoon....utna hi pori zindagi karta rahoo gaa....I love..u...alot...will u b mine...
(Kashish is all speechless....she can't belive Sujal love her soo much..she hold his hand he standz up...they both hug....Sujal got Kashish answer.....)
Sujal:so u love me...
Kashish:hmmm mayb..
Sujal:kya abhi bhi mayb..
Kashish:Sujal...(she hugs him again..)
(After sumtime they both leave da party....)
Kashish:hum kahan jaa rahay hai...
Sujal:tum chaloo tu sahi...
Kashish(smiles):ab tu pori zindagi tumharay saath hii chalna hai..chaloo....
Sujal stops da car...in front of a hotel...
Kashish:yahan kyun...
Sujal:well mein apni khubsorat biwi k saath kuch waqt akelay guzarna chata hoon...
Kashish:hmmmmm chalo...(they both get off da car...)
Sujal Kashish were moving to the hotel but with a little difference......pehle Sujal Kashish jab bhi chalte the tab kadam toh saath saath padte the but koi bhi ehsaas nahin rehta tha ek hichkichahat hamesha un dono ke beech rehti thi.....woh ek doosre ko jaante the par tab bhi jis rishte mein woh bandhe hue the........woh rishta unse khush naa tha isiliye ek ajeeb si deewaar beech mein rehti hi thi lekin aaj.......aaj ka din kuch alag tha chalte hue Sujal ka haath Kashish ki kamar par tha aur bass muhabbat thi.............there was free ora a free being..........ek ajeeb si hawa thi jismein woh beh rahe the.......
Sujal:ohh yaar yeh lift neeche kyon nahin aa rahi
Kashish(in a teasing manner):tum jaise flirt ne hi upar roki hogi
Sujal:well haann ho sakta hai
(Juz then lift opens and a couple exitss and SK enter
Sujal(with a childish victory):aah dekha ek couple
Kashish:haan !!!!!!!
(After a few secs Kashish realizes that Sujal is staring her with a certain kinda naughtiness Kashish annoyed but teasingingly as if inviting trouble)
Kashish:stop it will u ???
(Sujal still gazing but with childish astonishment asks)
Sujal(with innocence):kyaa........comeon sapne aa rahe hain kya maine kuch kaha hi nahin
Kashish(lovingly):tumne kuch nahin kaha but mujhe sab samjh aa gaya
Sujal(nautingly):acha toh kyaa ise hi kehte hain pyaar ????
Kashish(confused):well...ammmmmmm mainee mujhe nahin pataa
Sujal:ohh comeon Kashish.....tum
Sujal was coming near but fortunately for Kashish and unfortunately for Sujal they reached thier floor
Kashish:oops u missed !!!!
(both exit the lift and enter their rooooooom)
Sujal(streching himself):ahhh it was such a lovely day
Kashish blushes well then he goes near to the music system and turns on the radio.......and then he streches his hand and asks complete romantic style
Sujal:ayee kashish dance karogi mere saath........now yahan baarish toh ho nahin sakti warna aur romantic ho jaata newayz i am still waiting my (pauses) love !!!!!!!!!
(Kashish accpets his invitation)
(Song in Background)
Like a dream u cant explain love can change the beating of your heart
Like the sun shining in the rain love can make your whole World fall apart
But i want it noww
I wanna spent the rest of my life with u
time will show me how
I wanna spent the rest of my life with u
Certainly everything has turned me inside out
Certainly love is the thing that i cant live without
Your my dream my love my life i juz wanna spent my life with u
Your the one who makes me smile i juz wanna spent my life With u
Gotta love some how
I wanna spent the rest of my life with u
U can show me how
I wanna spent the rest of my life with u
Certainly everything has turned me inside out
Certainly love is the thing that i cant live without
Your my dream my love my life i juz wanna spent my life with u
Your the one who makes me smile i juz wanna spent my life with u
It was the spark in Sujal's eyes never seen before it was the glow on Kashish's face never seen before it was the dance never done before it was an ordinary song never experinenced like this before and it was the love never seen before...........khud zameen sar utha kar dekhne pe aur asmaan sar zhuka kar dekhne pe majboor ho gaya
Gaane ki dhun mein behte behte ek doosre ki aankhon mein dekhte dekhte ek doosre ki bhaanhon mein zhoomte zhoomte Sujal aur Kashish ek apni hi duniya mein kho gaye lamhe unhe choo kar nikal gaye unhe pata bhi nahin chala aur dheere dheere sujal ke hoth kashish ke hothon se takraaye aurrr !!!!! un dono ki aankhen khul gayi.......and they smiled off that romantic moment and cont dancing
Wat if u dance with me
Is this i was meant to be
Cant control this feeling in my heart
But i want it noww
I juz wanna spent my life with u
Time will show me how
I juz wanna spent my life with u
Your my dream my love my life i juz wanna spent my life with u
Your the one who makes me smile i juz wanna spent my life with u
I juzzzz wannna spend my life with Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu !!!!!!!!
As the song ended SK's dreams also ended and Kashish left Sujal and went and stood besides the window and Sujal after a little while went and stood forth her
Sujal:kya soch rahi ho kashish
Kashish(smiles):bas yeh soch rahi thi ki kaisi ajab hai yeh zindagi kis mod par kya hai yeh koi andaaza bhi nahin laga sakta ab hum dono ki zindagiyoon ko hi dekh lo
Sujal(relieved) haan!!!!!! lekin kashish (holds her from the shoulders) yeh mod meri zindagi ka sabse haseen mod hai bhagwan joh bhi karta hai ache ke liye karta hai....hamari shaadi hamari marzi se nahin hui aur aaj dekho......(puases) Kashish maine kabhi nahin socha tha ki main is pyaar naam ki cheez mein phasunga but knock knock akhir mere dil ko bhi toh ghar chahiye tha.......kashish tum meri zindagi mein ek aise hawa ke jhonke ki tarah aayi jiske nashe mein main ek patte ki tarah udta raha bona kuch soche samjhe ( smiles) i mean really mujhe pata hi nahin chala ki kab mujhe pyaar ho gaya and kab mera dil kisi ka aaashiyaan ban gaya
Kashish:maine kabhi nahin socha tha ki koi itna pyaar karne waala mujhe milega i really find myself blessed jab main tumare saamne is yakeen se khari hoon ki tum mujhse bahut pyaar karte ho
Sujal(denying but lovingly):naaa........khush naseeb toh main hoon....... i never thought that meri shaadi shuda zindagi aisa mod legi.............i love you kashish i really do
Kashish:i love u too
Sujal:ek baar Sujal ke saath kaho naa
Kashish(smiles):i love u Sujal.......i love u
Sujal Kashish ko apni bahoon mein le leta hai and then dheere jaane deta hai and then with their hearts thier lips lock for the 1st time.

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Here da part endz..
This part writtren by me n Surbhi...hope u like it...
Plz Doo Comment..
Luv
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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 12:14am | IP Logged
awwwwwww that was just simplyyyyyy so cuteeeeeee
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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 1:42am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rajeev1

Clap Clap ..wow..adi great..areej...tum bhi chaa gayi wah wah! lol
chalo yaar ab tum jaldhi se theek ho..jab theek hogaye tab kahongi....we want morreeee Clap

Farah..jee.......again more yaar roz ek part mil hi jata hai..phir mein more...i don't kya karna paray gaa...tat it wud b enuf 4 uLOL....anywayz...thanx 4 ur comments.....Embarrassed

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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 1:45am | IP Logged

Originally posted by ~Angel~

awwwwwww that was just simplyyyyyy so cuteeeeeee
loved every part offf ittttt Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
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thanx Angel...i am glad u like it....n thanx all Golu...koolgirl...4 ur lovely comments......Embarrassed

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