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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 20)

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Smile adi wonderful pls continue soon

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adil ...i have just fininh reding ....it is so cute ...i hate the characters of tushaar n vasu ...but sujal .......he is so cute ................plz plz plz continue soon ......u r too gud ! Clap
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gr part....
ur story is fantastic Tongue

plzzz post ur next part soon
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yeh kya ...aaj kuch nahi likha??..... Cry Cry
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Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

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ab iska matlab tum mujhse online poochna
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Sur...u r very very naughty...hasoo..mat..kya yaar..story hi tu likhi hai.....WinkLOL

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               DIL KYA KARE(Part-12)

Reacap:Kashish..keep fast 4 Sujal....she realizes tat she loves Sujal..Anjali tells her tat she will help her..making Sujal realize tat he also loves her....


Everybody comes down from the terrace…all the women fix themselves something to eat…and Kashish along with her food brings edibles for Sujal…all of the couples decide to go outside separately so that they can share some romantic moments…Sujal and Kashish go out to the gardens…
Kashish: kitna acha lag raha hai yahan bahar!
Sujal(who is staring at Kashish.. manages to mumble out):hmmmmm
Kashish(looks at Sujal and their eyes meet): Sujal tum mujhey aisa kyun dekh rahay ho, jaisay tum ne pehlay mujhey kabhi nahee dekha…
Sujal(in his heart):Tum mein jo kashish hai voh roz barhti jaati hai…her din mein tumhari taraf pehlay se zayda khicha chala aata hoon…na janay mujhay kya ho gaya hai…
Kashish(who is getting frustrated now):kuch bolo ge bhi…ya khali mein hee bak bak kerti rahoon gee..
Sujal(with a mischievous smile):Tumhein pata hai Kashish tum bak bak kertay hoay bohat hee zayda adorable lagti hoo
Kashish(in her mind):uff! Is lerkay ka kuch nahee ho sakta..itney romantic atmosphere mein is ko mazak sooj raha hai…
Sujal(who reads Kashish's mind):Kashish mein janta hoon…key tum mujh se jitna expect kerti ho mein us pe kabhi poora nahee utroon ga…
Kashish: Sujal tum aisa kiyun soochtay ho…tumhara saath bitaye hoye yeh kuch din hee meri zindagi ke sub se yaad gaar lamhay hain..kiyun ke tum meray saath ho..aur tumhara saath meray liye her rasam, her rivaaj, her bandhan, her rishtay se zayada mayene rakhta hai…
Sujal(under his breath):Kashish tumharay saath ke liye tu mein bhi is duniya se akelay ler sakta hoon…ager zaroorat peray tu jaan bhi khushi khushi de doun ga…aur yakeen mano samjho ga meri zindagi safal ho gayee…
Kashish:Kuch kaha tum ne??
Sujal: nahee kuch nahee…tumhein nahee lagta kafi dair ho gayee hai..humein ander chalna chahiye??
Kashish: Haan chalu..voh log bhi aa gaye hoon ge…humara hee intezaar ho raha ho ga…
They both head inside….on their way Kashish loses her balance and trips..Sujal tries to hold her but she slips out of his hand..and her ankle twists badly…
Kashish: Aaaaah!!
Sujal: (who's now in more pain then Kashish) KASHISH!! Kahan lagi batao..kya zaroorat thee itne jaldi mein chalnay gee…kitni baar bola hai sambhal ker chala kero..is se zayada chot lag jaati tu….
Kashish: Eik tu mujhey choot lagi hai ulta tum mujh pe chilla rahay ho..yeh nahee ke mujhey uthanay mein madad kero..
Sujal(Calms down):acha haath dou apna…
(Kashish tries to get up holding Sujal's hand but fails to get up)
Sujal couldn't take Kashish's pain any longer picks her up in his arms…
(Sujal Kashish ko goud mein utha ker ander le ja raha hota hai…lekin us lamhay dono eik dosray ki aankhoon mein dekh rahay hotay hain..aisay jaisay duniya mein is se zayada pyara ehsaas aur koi nahee…aisay jaisay ager duniya is pal tham bhi jaye tu koi gham nahee….)
{Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhuknay lagay…
Baat aa ker zubaan tak ruknay lagay..
Aankhoon Aankhoon mein ikraar honay lagay…
Bol dou ager tumhain pyaar honay lagay..
Honay lagay….. honay lagay….honay lagay..
Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhuknay lagay…
Baat aa ker zubaan tak ruknay lagay..
Aankhoon Aankhoon mein ikraar honay lagay…
Bol dou ager tumhain pyaar honay lagay..
Honay lagay…… honay lagay….honay lagay
Chahnay jab lagay dil kisi ki khushi…
Dil lagi yeh nahee yeh hai dil ki lagi…
Andhiyoon ko dabanay se kya fayeda…
Pyaar dil mein chupanay se kya fayeda…
Jaan se pyara jab..dildaar honay lagay…
Bol dou ager tumhein pyaar honay laga…
Honay lagay..honay lagay…
Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhuknay lagay…
Baat aa ker zubaan tak ruknay lagay..
Aankhoon Aankhoon mein ikraar honay lagay…
Bol dou ager tumhain pyaar honay lagay..
Honay lagay…… honay lagay….honay lagay
Us ki khusboo ager apni saasoon mein ho..
Us ka sapna ager apni aankhoon mein..
Jab na dil ke bahelnay ke surat lagay..
Jab koi zindagi ki zaroorat lagay…
Aur jeena bhi dushwaar honay lagay..
Bol dou ager tumhein pyaar honay lagay..
Honay lagay..honay lagay….
Jab kisi ki taraf dil jhuknay lagay…
Baat aa ker zubaan tak ruknay lagay..
Aankhoon Aankhoon mein ikraar honay lagay…
Bol dou ager tumhain pyaar honay lagay…
Honay lagay…… honay lagay….honay lagay..
Pyaar hona hee tha…
Pyaar tu hona hee tha…}
They both come back to the reality as they approach the house doors…..Anjali, Kripa, Angad and Kavya are already there…talking to each other..when they see these two coming….Kripa and Anjali run towards them seeing Kashish injured)
Kripa: kya hua Kashish ko??
Sujal: kuch nahee wapis aatay waqt fisal gayee thee…
Anjali: Sujal, tum is ko upar le jao..aur bandage cupboard mein hai…tu tum laga dena
(Sujal takes Kashish upstair…on their way Kashish galances at Anjali..who winks at her…it was all planned out by Anjali)
Sujal: (bandaging Kashish's foot) Ab tumhein zayada dard tu nahee ho raha??
Kashish: Nahee..mein theek hoon..tum khwa makhwa pareshaan nahee ho..
Sujal: khwa makhwa..tumhein itni choot lagee hai..aur tum keh rahee ho khwa makhwa..
Kashish: acha baba ghalti ho gayee…ainda se nahee kahoon gee…
Sujal: (smiles) that's like my babes…
Kashish: Babes???????
Sujal: (without thinking says) haan voh kya hai na..ke shaadi se pehlay mein apni her gf ko babes bolata tha…sab ke sab bohat khush hoti thee yeh naam sun ker…
Kashish: (who is getting all angry now) haan ab tumhari un gfs aur mujh mein tu koi farq hee nahee hai..
Sujal: (realizes what he just said) Eik ferq hai…
Kashish: (out of curiosity) kyaaaa??
Sujal: yehi ke mein tumhein dekh ker jeeta hoon….kya yehi kam hai??
Kashish: (at a verge of tears) mein nahee janti thee Sujal ke tum meray baray mein itnee gehrayee (deeply) mein soochtay ho
Sujal: Ab tak yeh baat mein bhi nahee janta tha..tumharay saath ne ehsaas dilaya hai ke tum meray liye kya ho
Kashish: kya hoon??
Sujal: (who wants to avoid this conversation) Uff! Eik tu tum sawaal bohat kerti ho..tumhein tu araam kerna chahiye….ab tum soo jao…
Kashish: Jo aap ka hukum meray pati dev!
(Sujal tugs her into the blanky….and sits beside her…while Kashish closes her eyes and goes into deep sleep)
Sujal: (looking @ Kashish and thinking in his mind) Kiyun mujhey Kashish ke takleef se dard hota hai…kiyun us ke khou janay ka dar meray saath saya ban ker chalta hai…kiyun us ki eik muskurahat meray dil mein ujala ker deti hai…kiyun us ke aansoon meray dil ko cheer ke guzaratay hain….KAHIN MUJHEY SE PYAAR????
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Friendz here da part endz...i wasn't feeling well..so cudn't write da part...this part..is writtren by AREEJ she wrote this 4 me...hope u like this...
PLZ DO COMMENT
Luv
Adi


Edited by Adildagr8 - 31 March 2006 at 1:58am
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Golu..Amna...Riddhima..Koolgirl_fire..thanx all 4 ur comments... Embarrassed


Farah Jee...thora tu intezaar kiya kare..Army mein transfer karna hi paray gaa... LOL



Edited by Adildagr8 - 31 March 2006 at 2:16am

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