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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 16)

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Posted: 26 March 2006 at 10:33pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by fakhra

adi ji bohot hi achay......baas tiyar rahaiye mai story post kar dun gi......comments dayne na bhuliye ga......hmmmmm........wase aap bohot achay writer hain......kya kahay aur......superb part..... Clap

Thanx alot 4 ur comments..yeah i am ready wid my comments on ur story...just post it dear.Wink...Unum n Sawera thanx to u tooEmbarrassed



Edited by Adildagr8 - 26 March 2006 at 10:37pm

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Posted: 26 March 2006 at 11:11pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

ADI absolutly mindblowing Clap cool part Tongue luv ur story Smile waisey Adi ek baat jo mainey notice ki hai ki tumahri story ka sujal tumahri tarah mischivious hai LOL aur haan ITEM waladialouge bahut mast tha LOL i never thought k u will write such dialouge LOL but overall fantastic story well written and janab aap humsey kahe rahey thi ki aap romentic story nahi likh saktey to yeah kya hai bahut aacha likha hai keeit up

Sur ab thanx nahi bol raha warna doabra fight hojaye gii...yaar ab Sujal...thora sa muj par hi gaya haiEmbarrassed...naa..aur Item yaar tumhari yaad agayi thi...LOLaur yaar..romantic..achi nahi likhta..romantic..comdey..tu likh hi leta hoon...Wink

Sarah hope u will like the next parts tooBig smile



Edited by Adildagr8 - 26 March 2006 at 11:15pm
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 5:21am | IP Logged

Originally posted by saara 1

HI shruti sis.....century baad aapka deedar howaaaaa LOL

Acha ek humble request hai.....abhi apni story agar ho sake na toe na shuru karna...0okkkkkk LOL

haila saara darling hum jantey hai ki aaj kal hum EID ka chand ho gaye hai bahut kam deedar detey hai Wink

haila sis log request nahi order kartey hai i will soon post my story all the best lv ya

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 5:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Adildagr8

Originally posted by shruti_gauri1

ADI absolutly mindblowing Clap cool part Tongue luv ur story Smile waisey Adi ek baat jo mainey notice ki hai ki tumahri story ka sujal tumahri tarah mischivious hai LOL aur haan ITEM waladialouge bahut mast tha LOL i never thought k u will write such dialouge LOL but overall fantastic story well written and janab aap humsey kahe rahey thi ki aap romentic story nahi likh saktey to yeah kya hai bahut aacha likha hai keeit up

Sur ab thanx nahi bol raha warna doabra fight hojaye gii...yaar ab Sujal...thora sa muj par hi gaya haiEmbarrassed...naa..aur Item yaar tumhari yaad agayi thi...LOLaur yaar..romantic..achi nahi likhta..romantic..comdey..tu likh hi leta hoon...Wink

Sarah hope u will like the next parts tooBig smile

aacha kiya Adi jo thanx nahi bola Tonguesujal tujh par thora nahi poora gaya hai jab bhi story pardti hoon tumahri mischief yaad aati hai LOLLOLLOLhaan lag raha tha ki meri yaad aa gayi thi LOLLOL

romentic comedy nahi solid romentic story hai comment dekh kar samajh nahi aaya kya kitney popular ho tum

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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 8:00am | IP Logged
...dekho yaar...abhi mein kitne der baad ayi hon....phri bhi tumne story.......ok ok...nahi kehti....warna tum muje seedah police se army mein transfer kar do ge LOL
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 9:11am | IP Logged
adi very nice part once again Clap ab jaldi se agla part post karo can't wait

Edited by parvathicanada - 27 March 2006 at 9:11am
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 11:45am | IP Logged
:::Adil je it was too good OWESOME Clap Keep writin such stories.Plz aap stroy zaida likha kerain.Waisay this part was too good. Smile Smile Smile Continue very very soon.Waiting.......


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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 10:58pm | IP Logged

                  DIL KYA KARE(Part-10)

Recap:Kashish goes to resign but..Swayam informs her..tat only..Tusshar can accpect her...resignation...so she has 2 work...Vasu's attack is floped..Sujal n Kashish r going to Delhi on..Sujal's friendz...anniversery...

Itz is evening n Sujal has been driving since noon....Kashish is very tried...n is getting bored....n says...
Kashish:Sujal...
Sujal:haan...
Kashish:kitna time lagay ga...
Sujal:bus..1 ghanta aur ..hum bus highway par hi hai..
Kashish:hmmmm pichalay..3 ghantoo say yehi sun rahi hoon..
Sujal:acha...chaloo..sirf..1 hr raha gaya..does it sound better...
Kashish:Sujal..jaldi chaloo naa...
Sujal:chala tu raha hoo...ab urha tu sakta nahi..
Kashish:aaj hii delhi ki pori flight ko ful hona tha..
Sujal:just wait a little..bus poachnay walay hai..waisay bhi mein hoo na...koi prob nahi hogi...
(Just then da car..brokes down...it stops in middle of da road..n there is no one around...)
Kashish:kya howa...
Sujal:mein dekhta hoon..(he gets off n sees da engine...Kashish has been sitting...n waiting..but there is no reply 4rm Sujal..so she gets off....)
Kashish:kya howa...car ruk kyun gayi...
Sujal:car k pichalay dono tyre puncture hogay...
Kashish:ek suna tha..dono akthay kaisay..puncture hogay...ab yeh kisnay kiya....
Sujal:mainay kiya...
Kashish:wat....
Sujal:ek tu tha..mainy socha dosra aklea kya kare gaa..isliye dosray ko bhi punture kar diya...
Kashish:Sujalll...
Sujal:aur kya yaar....agay yeh prob upar say tumharay sawaal....
(Just then it starts rainning...)
Sujal:loo is ki kami thi...
Kashish:wow...rain...i love rains....
Sujal:me too..
(Kashish...is playing in rain like kidz....she is all drunched in rain....Sujal..is staring at her...)
Kashish:kya howa...
Sujal:kuch nahi...
Kashish:ab kya kare.....gari kharab hai....aur yeh barish bhi kharab hai...
Sujal:hmmmm i hav an idea..
Kashish:kya....
(He goes to his car...n puts on the FM on..he sum bac n...bends on his knees..n extend his hand...n asks...)
Sujal:may i hav da honur of dancing wid..my beautiful wife...
Kashish:mazak kar rahy hoo
Sujal:nahi...mein tu serious hoon..now giv me ur hand...
Kashish(confused):Sujal...road...par.....
Sujal:tu kya howa biwi hoo meri...so tell me Mrs.Kashish Sujal Gerewal...may i hav da pleasure of dancing wid u...
Kashish(smiles):sure.....(she handover her hand....Sujal..pulls her close to him...he..put..his hand on her waist....Kashish is 1st hesitate...to hold him.....than..they begin to dance...)
(SONG IN DA BACKGROUND)
Tham jaa zindagi tham jaa
Yehi lamha hai manzil meri

Sanson ki garmi mein
Hooton ki narmi mein
Milnay ki aas mein
Chahat ki pyass mein
Arzoo sii ek machali hai
Machali hui ek arzoooo
Arzoo mein thara ek lamha
Yehi lamha hai manzil meri
Tham jaa zindagi tham jaa

Badal intezaar k akhir baras gay
Faslion k pathar bhi reth say bighar gay..
Boondyion say pigali hai dooriyain
Pigali hui yeh dorriyain...
Dorriyain mein thara ek lamha
Yehi lamha hai manzil meri
Tham jaa zindagi tham jaa

Tham jaa zindagi tham jaa
Yehi lamha hai manzil meri

(They has been dancing 4 a while...da rain had been never soo beautiful 4 Sujal...da dance was rather a passinate one...it was a very close dance....Kashish..realises....wats goin on....she feels...uncomfortable...n bac off...n goes n sits in da car....Sujal is left confused...he moves towards da car...
The rain stops...n da cool wind is blowing...Kashish is feeling cold....she is looking to Sujal..he notices this n says...)
Sujal:Kashish nahi..mera coat nahi...ab tum yeh appect mat karna k...mein..filmi style mein tumehin coat doonga...
Kashish:haan..mat doo..mein nay manga kya....
Sujal:tum tu naraaz hogayi..yeh sardi lag jaye giii...(he takes off his coat...n gives to Kashish..he gets off da car..)
Kashish:kahan jaa rahay hoo..
Sujal:kahin nahi mein yehi lift..lenay ki koshish karta hoon..
(He has tried..alot..but..nobady..gav them lift....he is still trying...Kashish also..cum out n stands wid him....after a while...sneezes....)
Sujal:kya howa..lag gayi naa sardi..
Kashish:mujay abhi bhi sardi lag rahi hai..
Sujal:ab shirt uttar kar doo kya..
Kashish(mischeivously):mainay asa tu nahi kaha...(Just then... a car stops...there r 3 boyz.....they offer them lift..)
1 Guy:kahan jana hai appko..hum drop kar detay hai..
Kashish:woh..Delhi...
Sujal:no thanx humay kahin nahi jana...
1 Guy:Delhi..hum bhi wohi jaa rahay hai..
Sujal:Mr. tumhein kaha naa..humein kahin nahi jana.,..
2Guy:tu yahan Highway..par..picnic manaye aye hoo..
Sujal:haan kuch asa hiiii..kyun yeh Highway apka hai..
3 Guys:Come on guyz we r getting late...(They leave 4rm there...)
Kashish:woh lift day tu rahay thay....
Sujal:par humein unk saath nahi jana tha..
Kashish:kyun...
Sujal:kyun..ka koi jawaab nahi..now sit in da car...mein dekhta hoon...
Kashish:mein kyun...car mein....lift lay letay na...batao naa kyun nahi..lii lift....
Sujal:tum meray beghair bataye manay wali nahi...
Kashish:nahi...
Sujal:ok...woh teen thay...aur mein aik...
Kashish:haan tu ismein kya hai..
Sujal:ismein yeh hai...phir agr unmein say tumhein kuch bolta tu phir mujay ghussa ajata...kal tu us becharay nay mar kahyi...aaj mujay khani parhti...
Kashish:oooh i c
Sujal:haan now u c...
Kashish:tumhein ghussa kyun ata hai..jab mujay koi kuch bolta hai...
Sujal:gud Qs...
Kashish:haan mujay pata hai ab jawaab doo..
Sujal:yeh kaisa sawaal hai...
Kashish(mischeivously):tum bhi tu mujsay asy hi sawaal poachtay hoo..
Sujal:hmmm ok..mujay ghussa kyun ata hai.....
Kashish:hmmmmm
Sujal:tum meri pitani tu meri zamadari hoo...askar husband ko asaay mein ghussa ata hai..tu mujay bhi aya...
Kashish:tumhein sirf ghussa sirf isliye ata hai..k husband ko ana chaiye...
Sujal(confused):haan...shayd nahi..pata nahi..tum bhi kya lay kar beth gayi...mein car dekh kar ata hoon(they get da lift)
Kashish:lift mil gayiii

Sujal:kyun tumhein thori dayer aur rehna hai..
Kashish:Sujalllllll
Sujal:Kashishh
Kashish:chaloo agay itna time hogaya..
Sujal:ok....
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NANDA FARMHOUSE(itz a beach facing...bunglow..)
This time Kyva Anjali....hab decided to celebrate..there aniversery just wid friend...no family..Angad n Kripa r already here....n waiting 4 Sujal n Kashish....they reach Nanda house....Sujal rings da bell....Kyva opens da door...

Kyva: Sujal..kahan raha gaya tha yaar..mujay tu laga tu ayegaa hi nahi...
Sujal:tum bulayoo aur mein naa ayoo asa hosakta hai kya...meet Kashish...my wife..
Kyva:haan shadi tu mein aa nahi saka...chaloo ab hi Kashish say tu mil liya...Hii Kashish...
Kashish:Hiiii
Sujal:yaar yehi baatein karay gaa kya..
Kavya:haan andar aa naa...
(They reach da living room..where all r sitting..Angad, Kripa n Anjali...)
Kripa:Hii Sujal...Hii Kashish
Kashish:Hiii
Sujal:Hii Kripa..
Kripa:tum dono tu bilkul bheeg gay hoo...
Anjali:yeh loo towels...
Sujal:Hey...Anjali...kaisi hooo..
Anjali:mein tu achi hoo..tumhein kya howa..tum log bheeg kaisay gay...
Sujal:woh hum barish mein...
Kayva:ohhh romance chal raha tha...
Kashish(blushes):nahi..woh tu asay hi...
Anjali:Sujal...tum aur barish...(Sujal tries tu stop..her but she completes her..sentence..) tumhein tu barish passnad nahi..
Kashish(suprised n thinks):Sujal ko barish passand nahi...tab Sujal na kaha tha he also love rains...
Angad(mischeivously):Sujal kafi badal gaya hai...
Sujal:tum log bhi na..shuroo hojatay hoo..
Kayva:ab baki baatein subah karna..bahut raat hogayi hai...chaloo tumehin tumhara room dekha deta hoon...
(Sujal n Kashish gets up...n wish everyone Gud Nite...Kayva shows them their room...they both...change there clothes...n go to sleep..but Kashish sees Sujal..is uncomfortable..on Sofa..)
Kashish:Sujalll...jaag rahay ho kya
Sujal:nahi soo raha hoo
Kashish:ok...
Sujal:kya howa...
Kashish:kuch nahi tum abhi tak soye nahi..
Sujal:haan yeh sofa...mujay passand nahi...ghar walay par tu bahut achi neend ati thi...
Kashish:tum yahan bed par ajyooo..
Sujal:nahi tum sofay par kaisay soo gii..mein theek hoo..
Kashish:mein sofay par nahi soo rahi..
Sujal:tu phir....
Kashish:hum bed share kar letay hai....ab tum itni zyda jagah bhi nahi letay....
Sujal:r u sure..mein bed par
Kashish:haan ab itna trust tu hai hi tum par...
Sujal(smiles):itna trust achi nahi..
Kashish:tumhein ana hai ayoo..warna u r most welcome to sleep on tat sofa...
Sujal:nahi aaraha hoo..(he brings pillow...n makes himself comfortable...)
Kashish:Gud Nite...
Sujal:Gud Nite..aur haan..plz raat mein meri side par mat ana..mujay apni izzat bahut pyari hai...
Kashish:Sujalllll...so jayooo...
Sujal:haan soo raha hoon...
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Here da part end..
This part is dedicated to Farah(jo Army join karnay wali hai..lol)
Plz do comment
Luv
Adi



Edited by Adildagr8 - 28 March 2006 at 7:48am

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