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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 14)

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Posted: 25 March 2006 at 8:21am | IP Logged
LOL LOL ..dekh lo adi.....mein ne waqai mein mashur ki hai..iska saboot kiran hai...... Wink
jaldhi se next part bhi likho...in fact...abhi kuch der pehle tumhari story ki baat hi ho rahi thi kiran keh saath....hain na kiran Tongue
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adi ur just " the best " ............. Clap

adi tumhe yaad hain tumne apni story likhne se pehle mujhse poocha tha ki who is my fav writer..........ajj me telling u i totally love ur story.......hum   appke likhne ke istyle par fida ho gaye..............u write so damn well.....................Tongue

aur haan no thanku for the dedicatin....... LOL
    




Edited by sun_423 - 25 March 2006 at 10:04am
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                                          DIL KYA KARE(Part-9)


Recap:Sujal n Kashish spent...sumtime 2egther on shopping..Vasu is very irrated...n calls a man named Rocky..n tells him to murder Sujal n it shud look like..an accident..

One week has passed...Sujal n Kashish didn't came to know how these 7 days passed...ausaual its a braight morning...Sujal is still sleeping..as he has taken off 4rm da office..2 help Kashish...as she is decorating...da house according to her taste...whereas Vasu has been intefaring..but..Sujal has been Kashish support..
Kashish:Sujal..uthooo
Sujal:haan baba utha raha hoo..raat ko itna kaam kiya abhi thora tu late uthanay doo..
Kashish:teq hai..tum soo mujay late horaha hai..mein office jaa rahi hoo..
Sujal(sits up):office..wich office..aaj meri tu chuti hai..
Kashish:haan...par mein nay ek week ki leave lii thi..apany office..say..remember Shergills Interprises....
Sujal:ohhh haan...ek week hogaya bhi gaya...waise tumhein job karnay ki kya zaroorat hai...
Kashish:kyun tumhein mera..kaam karna passand nahi...
Sujal:nahi asi baat nahi hai..mujay tu lagta hai har larki ko kaam karna chaiye...i was just wondering..tum Gerewal ko join karloo...
Kashish:nahi..mein yeh job bhi chor rahi hoon...mujay ab Shergills...k saath kaam nahi karna...mein bus resign kanray jaa rahi hoo..
Sujal:ohhh..chaloo mein saaaaath chalta hoon.. office.say.. kuch files collect karni hai...
Kashish:Sujal..tum rehnay doo...mein chali jyon gii tumharay tayar honay k chakar mein mein late hojayongii..
Sujal:just giv me 2 mins..i will b ready...mein larkayion ki tarah zaida time nahi leta
Kashish:k..jaldi jayoo..
Sujal..takes a quick bath...n cums..out..wearing a black..T Shirt...n a blue jeans....Kashish 1st time show him...in casual clothes..otherwise..alwayz..suit..wid tie as a complexsion..she is observing tat Sujal is quite gud looking n charming....
Sujal:Kashishhhhh...
Kashish:haan....
Sujal:kya howa...ab late nahi horahay chalein....
Kashish:haan chaloo...
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SHERGIL OFFICE
Kashish enter da office...whereas Sujal following her...although..Kashish told him 2 stay out..but he said..he will get bored waiting....out..so he is here...
Kashish:Hiii..Rosy..
Rosy:Hii..Mam..u r looking very beautiful..
Sujal(interups):mein bhi subah say yehi bol raha hoon lekin maan rahi thi...achi lag rahi hai na...
Rosy(confused):haan bahut achi lag rahi hai..
Kashish:Sujal...tum bhi naa...Rosy..meet Sujal..my Husband..
Rosy:Hii Sir...
Sujal:Hii Rosy..nice to meet u...
Rosy:same here Sir..
Kashish:Mr.Tusshar hai..
Rosy:nahi Mam...woh tu london gay howay hai..
Kashish:Mr.Swayam to hogay..
Rosy:yeah...Mam..woh apnay cabin...ek cleint hai andar unk baad app andar jaa sakti hai..
Kashish:ok thanx...
Sujal:wudn't u ask me 4 a coffee..Rosy
Rosy:sure Sir...
Kashish(irrated):Sujalllllll...Rosy someother time we r leaving...sorry...
Rosy:itz ok Mam...
Sujal:tum jayoo mein yahan wait karta hoon..
(Kashish hold Sujal hand n drags him to Swayam cabin...n they both r waiting there..)
Kashish:tum Rosy ko kya bol rahay thay..
Sujal:mainay kya bola...
Kashish:tat coffee thing...
Sujal:woh..subah say ek coffee bhi nahi pe...
Kashish:Sujal u r impossible..
Sujal:i was just being freindly...
Kashish:yeah...friendly....
They r agruing...wen Archie cums out 4rm Swayam Cabin...Kashish enters in...leaving Sujal behind...
Kashish:Sujal tum yahan wait karoo..mein abhi ati hoon
Sujal:ok...(he didn't noticed Archie..)
Archie:Hii Sujal..where were u...
Sujal:Ohhh hii Archie..kaisi hoo..
Archie:mein tu achi hoo..tumnay shadi karli aur bataya bhi nahi...
Sujal:haan woh..bus..
Archie:kahan hai..Mrs.Sujal Gerewal...woh bhi tu mil lay apni..husband ki girlfriend say...jisay...shadi k waday tu howay..par..nibahae usk saath..
Sujal:Archie...mein nay khabhi tumsay koi wada kiya...u knew...hum khabhi shadi nahi karany walay..aur tum Kashish nahi milogii..Bye..
Archie:oh..Kashish nice name...mein tu milogii hii..tum mujay nahi ruk saktay..
Sujal(to himself):agay Rosy..kam thi joo is Archie ko abhi abhi ana tha..anywayz...God help me..
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Swayam Cabin
Swayam:tumhein Tusshar nay appoint kiya tha...wohi tumahra resignation bhi accpet kar sakta hai..mein is baray mein kuch nahi kar sakta..
Kashish:par...mujay ab is job ki koi zarorat nahi hai...
Swayam:Tusshar k anay say phealy tum yeh job nahi chor sakti..u hav to work here...
Kashish:ok..Tusshar wapis kab araha hai
Tusahar:next month...
Kashish(diappointed):a month..OK
Swayam:so u r joining 4rm 2day...
Kashish:i guess no...mujay...2 week ki leave chaiye..
Swayam:woh kyun...already...tumhari shadi par..u had enuf..leave....
Kashish:haan...but now i am goin on my honeymoon...sab ko leave milti hai..so does i desereve...
Swayam:tat not fair...
Kashish:everything is fair Mr.Shergil...yahan par ek nuskaan dosray ka fyda hai...
Swayam:ok f9...ur leave is granted...
Kashish:thanx alot...(she leaves n cum out..n sees Sujal n Archie talking..)
Sujal:chalein..
Kashish:yeah chalo..
Archie:Sujal..mein apna intro khud karwaoo k tum karwa rahay hoo..
Kashish:Sujal...yeh kon hai..
Sujal:r u interested in knowing tat..
Kashish glares at him....
Sujal:ok bata raha hoo..meet Archie..my ex.girlfriend...
Kashish:Hi...Archie..nice to meet u...
(Sujal is very surprised at Kashish reaction...he thought she wud feel bad...n misunderstood him...)
Archie(shocked):was it really nice to meet me...
Kashish:haan...Sujal..shall we leave...
Sujal(smiles):yeah sure...
(They both r in da car...n Sujal..is observsing Kashish is worried abt sumthing..)
Sujal:tumharay Boss nay kya kaha...
Kashish:nothing just..mujay 1 month aur job karni paraygioi...according to da contract...
Sujal:hmmmm par...humein Delhi jana hai..mera friend ki 4 anniversery hai..i told u abt Kayva Anjali..
Kashish:haan janti hoo...mein leave lay li hai..
Sujal:gud...aur ek baat poachoo..
Kashish:haan poachoo
Sujal:tum naraaz tu nahi hoo
Kashish:kis baat par..
Sujal:woh Archie...
Kashish:nahi...i was thinking..tumhein usk elwa koi nahi mila...
Sujal:Kashish..woh bus..hum boyfriend girlfriend nahi thay..just we used pass time..
Kashish(mischeivously):joo bhi tha bad choice Sujal...
Sujal:kya tum....lekin...thanx..
Kashish:kisliye...
Sujal:isiliye k u didn't misunderstood me...
Kashish:ab itni understanding to hai hi hum mein..
Sujal:hmmmm...
Kashish:mujay tumahray past say ko lena dena nahi hai...jaisay tumhein past say koi fariq nahi parhta..
Sujal:hmmmm acha...tumhein kuch shopping karni hai tu karloo...mein office say 1 hr mein kuch files lay kar ata hoon..
Kashish:tumhara office ka kaam khabhi khatam nahi hona..
Sujal:sirf 1 hr...waisay abhi shopping mein tumhein 2 hrs say zyda hi lagay gay...
Kashish:ok jaldi jayoo aur jaldi wapis ana...
(He drops her in front of a shopping center n leaves..)
Itz has been...2 hrs...n Kashish had finished her shopping...n itz almost evening....half of there time was spent in office..than..shopping..now Kashish is..waiting 4 Sujal...here cum Sujal....he apolosises..4 getting late...they both r retruning home...wen Kashish sees icecream palour..
Kashish:Sujal mujay icecream khani hai...
Sujal:Kashish...itni sardi mein icecream...
Kashish:sardi mein hi tu icecream khanay ka zyda maza hai..
Sujal:tumharay bhi kya logic hai..acha bolo konsa flavour..
Kashish:chocolate...
Sujal:ok mein abhi lata hoon...(he crosses da road n goes to da icecream palour..)
Kashish is waiting....n in front of there car another cums n is parked...there is a guy ....a ..spoil barts..n is drunk....he sees Kashish...n cums...to her window...n says...
Guy:app jaisay khubsorat larki..akeli kya kar rahi hai..chalin hum kis din kaam ayegay..hum appko companay day detay..hai..
Kashish:tum log yahan say chalay jayoo..mein tum jaisay larkaoo say baat bhi nahi karna chatai...
Guy:mainay baat karnay ko kaha bhi nahi..hum too..
(Sujal returns...n is seeing...this...he says.....)
Sujal:oye bhai kyun akeli larki ko tang kar rahi hoo..
Guy:kyun tumhari kya lagti hai...
Sujal:yeh mein tumhein kyun bataoo..ek min...yeh icecream pakarana plz...(he handover da icecream to Kashish)
Guy:heroo...humaray kaam k beech mein tang mat uraoo....
Sujal:kya karoo yaar..bachpan ki adat hai dosraoo k kaam mein tang uarana
Sujal:dekh yaar..mera larnay bikul mood nahi hai...jaa kaam kar apna..
Guy:larna tu mujay bhi nahi hai...chal item bahut hogaya tera natak...(he hold Kashish hand...)
Sujal(angry):haath chor uska...
Guy:kya kar lay gaa..nahi choronga...
He looses his temper...n starts beating..da guy very hard...all da ppl gather around..n tries to stop....but..he keeps on beating him...he is kicking him..n the guy is bleeding like hell...Kashish also cum out...n stops Sujal..but he has no eefect..he is beating him brutaly..n is saying BOLA THA HAATH MAT LAGANA..NAHI MANA NAA..Kashish had never seen Sujal soo furious....she is shocked to see him like this...alast he clams down...they both sit in car...Kashish still thinking abt..da incident...wen Sujal say...
Sujal:Ohh..icecream tu pigal gayi...mein dosri lay kar ata hoon...
Kashish:nahi itz ok..itni bhi nahi pigali..
Sujal:acha yeh loo...asa kartay hai mein chocolate leta hoon..tum butterscotch try karoo..shayd ekk dosray k choice khanay say humari choice bhi mil jaye...
Kashish:hmmmm..
Sujal:kya howa...
Kashish:tumhein ussay inta marna nahi chaiye tha...
Sujal:ab tu mar diya...ab mar wapis tu nah lay sakta na...chaloo ab icecream khayoo...
Kashish:Sujal i am serious..
Sujal:pata nahi kab ghussa agaya...tumhein to pata hai..mujay ghussa nahia ta lekin jab usany tumahra haath pakra..pata.nahi..acha ab choro naa...joo hona tha hogaya..
Kashish:hmmmmmm...
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Vasu:Rocky..yumsay ek kaam nahi hota....
Rocky:Madam..mein truck manray hi wala tha..k achank logo ki bheer akatai hogayi..
Vasu:logo gii bheer...
Rocky:haan woh shaib kisi ko buri tarah say mar rahay thay...
Vasu:acha..suno..ab tumhein yeh kaam Mumbai mein karna hoga...parsoo woh dono Mumbai jaa rahay hai...
Rocky:teq hai madam jee...(he disconnects):
Vasu:kab tak bachoo gaay Sujal aaj nahi tu kal..tumhein meray rastay say hatna hi hoga....
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Here da part endz...
Comming up:Kashish & Sujal..trip...to Delhi....Kashish realizes her love 4 Sujal....
PLZ DO COMMENT
Luv
Adi


Edited by Adildagr8 - 27 March 2006 at 3:14am
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Clap ...hehehe.....kya item piece likha hai baap..cha gaye..hehehe LOL

Edited by rajeev1 - 26 March 2006 at 1:15am
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Posted: 26 March 2006 at 1:22am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sun_423

adi ur just " the best " ............. Clap

adi tumhe yaad hain tumne apni story likhne se pehle mujhse poocha tha ki who is my fav writer..........ajj me telling u i totally love ur story.......hum   appke likhne ke istyle par fida ho gaye..............u write so damn well.....................Tongue

aur haan no thanku for the dedicatin....... LOL
    


Suri....u made my day...wid ur lovely commentSmile...yaar..tum meri writing par fida...mein tu bus..timepass k liye likhta hoonLOL...ab thanx nahi bolonga u know friendshiup rulesEmbarrassed

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Posted: 26 March 2006 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Clap adi tusi toh gr8 ho yaar.kya likthe ho. amazing. plz post the next part soon.
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Posted: 26 March 2006 at 2:42am | IP Logged

Originally posted by kahish-rox

ADIII!!!
I simply LOVE ur story/.....wow....mujhey aota chla keh tumhari story likhnay ka raaz yeh hai khe logoon ki stories parh parh ker BHUT experience ho gaya hai...hehehehe...AWESOME...LOVE IT...WRITE MORE...!!!

Thanx alot...Kiran 4 ur comment...i am really surprised...tat u gav me comments...itz a big thing to get gud comments 4rm a person..who is ur ideal....n yeah u r write i had all exprience 4rm ur stories....Embarrassed

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Posted: 26 March 2006 at 2:54am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rajeev1

LOL LOL ..dekh lo adi.....mein ne waqai mein mashur ki hai..iska saboot kiran hai...... Wink
jaldhi se next part bhi likho...in fact...abhi kuch der pehle tumhari story ki baat hi ho rahi thi kiran keh saath....hain na kiran Tongue
write more...jaldhiiii Embarrassed Embarrassed

Haan Farah...Kiran k comments say..pata chal hi gaya...k tumnay kitni publicity kii....yar...tum tu police k tarah meray peechay hoo...likh deta hoon story....waise thanx 4 ur comments..LOL

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