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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 11)

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 2:01am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rajeev1

Big smile ..it wasnt broing..it was funny!......but OMG...if i will tell you this you'll be saying i have gone bonkers...but lat night i was thinking of the same tie scene...exactly like that for KTH...hehehe...i cant belive keh bilkul waisa hi aaj tumne likha...hehehe....its creepy...lol...but it was great!......hope you get well soon and write more..hehe Big smile

Farah...muj par inzaamAngry...ab mein tumharay mind mein tu tha nahi..k..tumhara idea chori kar liyaWink...waise asasy hi achay achay idea invent karti rahoo shyad..tumharay idea idhar 4ward hotay hoooLOL...anywayz...i am glad u liked da part...Embarrassed



Edited by Adildagr8 - 24 March 2006 at 9:03am

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 2:09am | IP Logged
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Unum....n Mehreen thanx 4 ur comments...i will continue soon.... Embarrassed

Welcome bac Mehreen i hav seen u after such a long time..tum..nayi story start...karooo Big smile

 

hy adi.......thanx mujhe wellcome kehne ka.........actually mai kum aate hun.........exams ho rahay thay........aur aab result ki tension lagi hue hai............plzzzzz meray liye pray karna..........31 of march ko result hai................aur mere stories already hain........baas unhe continue karne ka time nahi milta..........but aap ne mere stories pe comments nahi diye........mai bohot naraz hun es baat se.............Cry

 

Ohhh no need 4 thanx....n all da best 4 ur reult...i am sure u wud get gud marks....i will definately pray.....aur...rahi baat comments kii...sorry...mein comments kar doonga...actaully i am was a silent reader of ur storyEmbarrassed

 

thanx adi........but that's not fair........silent reader only?????.....well.........it's ok.................but comments day dainazaror...aur plzzzzzz result ki pray yaad se karna............well anywayz.....mindblowing part.........superb part..........keep it up........................Clap

Acha...Mehreen jee....ab mein comments day diya karoongaa n paka...se i will pray.....n thanx 4 ur comments dearSmile

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 5:08am | IP Logged
LOL LOL .....u see great minds think a like LOL LOL ....... Wink
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 8:18am | IP Logged
:::That is superb Adil je.Thanxs 4 writing soon.Plz continue it.Hope that u will post next part tommorow Big smile   & GET WELL SOON Wink A big applause Clap


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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 9:06am | IP Logged
get well soon
continue when you can its great Smile
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Yeah Farah..i agree gr8 mind think alike..but mera mind gr8 nahi hai... Wink

Maha & Unum n Jyothi...  thanx alot 4 ur comment Embarrassed i wud continue now LOL


Edited by Adildagr8 - 24 March 2006 at 10:05am
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                                      DIL KYA KARE (Part-8)

Recap:Sujal..n Kashih...spent sumtime 2gether..whereas Sujal keeps on teasing her...

Itz one fine morning....Sujal iz geeting ready to leave 4 da office...Kazhizh iz buzy...in...making da breakfazt...Sujal..goez down...n c Kazhizh working..he goez n standz beide her..n azk...
Sujal:kya kar rahi hooo
Kazhizh:tumhein kya lagta hai mein kya kar rahi hoo
Sujal:acha..jaldi nastha dooo..mujay office jana hai...
Kazhish:aaj jaldi aajana.....
Sujal:kyun
Kazhizh:aise hiii...
Sujal(confued):ok......
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OFFICE
(Sujal iz working in office...wen da phone ring..itz Kazh...)
Kashish:Hii..Sujal..kaisay hoo
Sujal:mein acha hoon...
Kashish:r u free
Sujal :haan kyun
Kashish:tum meray saath shopping par chaloo
Sujal:mein nahi....
Kashish:Sujal.. tumharay liye kuch leyna hai...mujay tumhari choice..ka pata nahi hai..
Sujal:tum jo bhi layoogii..mujay passand hoga...
Kashish:itz was very sweet...lekin...tum meray saath shopping par arahay hoo...
Sujal:nahi..mein nahi arahaa...
Kashish:tum arahay hoo...i am waiting(she disconnects da phone)
Sujal(to himself):yeh tu hona hi..tha..lag ja kaam par..shopping....ok...araha hoon mein...
He reaches..house....picks Kashish 4rm there...n goes 4 shopping..they hav been shopping whole day...Sujal is just happy to...see tat Kashish iz happy..laughing on his silly jokes..n...all n all...Sujal...was enjoying wid her...itz was nice to hav her in his life....
(SONG IN BACKGROUD)
Itz a beautiful day
Tu meray pass hai
Itz a beautiful day
Baat yeh khass hai..
Annkein yeh ankkion say kehnay lagi kuch ishron mein
Tera nahi..sirf samjhay gay inki zubaan
Dil kaisay miltay hai..ab jaa k humnay yeh jana hai..
dekhoo shuroo hogayi pyar dastaan
Itz a beautiful nite
Chandi raat hai
Itz beautiful Nite
Pyar ki baat...
Itz a beautiful Nite

They return late at nite....n Sujal iz very tried...Kashish had been finding sumthing since they returned....
Sujal:kya dhoond rahi hoo..
Kashish:aaj humnay studio say apni photo bhi to collect ki thi naa...woh kahan hai
Sujal:subah dhoond leyna itni jaldi kya hia
Kashish:nahi mujay abhi laga kar dekhni hai kaisi hai
Sujal:woh...Side walay bag mein dekhoo mayb umein hoo..
Kashish findz da photo..n tries to put it on da wall....but iz unable to..she ask Sujal to help her...he cums n picks her up...she iz quite surprised abt tat...but puts da photo....just then there a knock at da door..itz Vasu..Sujal sees her n get inbalance...n they both fall on da bed....Sujal feel n on her..KaShiSh....n Vasu...says
Vasu:mein bus Gud Nite kehnay ayi thi..
Sujal(confuSed):haan Gud Nite
After tat he returns 2 Kashish n says
Sujal:tumhein nahi lagta tum muj par gir kar uthna bhul jati hoo
Kashish:ohhh..(she gets up)lekin ghiraya bhi tu tumnay tha naa
Sujal:Vasu jee ko dekh kar dar gaya tha
Kashish:Sujal..tum life mein serious kab hogay..
Sujal:abhi tak tu nahi howa..lekin shyad jab kisi say pyar hojaye tu serious hojayoon
Kashish:don't tell me tum jaisay larkay ko aaj tak kisi say pyar nahi howa....
Sujal:larkyain aur affairs tu bahut thay..par koi asi nahi mili jisay pyar hojaye....
Kashish:hmmmmm koi bhi nahi
Sujal(miScheivouly):ab lagta hai...k pyar ho hii jayegaa..
Kashish:Gud Nite
Sujal:haan jaa hii raha hooo bed par sonay k mood nahi haiii...u knnow..tum ayi tu mujay pata chala
Kashish:kya...
Sujal:k sofay par inti achi neend ati hai....
Kashish(smile):Gud Nite
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Vasu:Sujal ka kuch karna hoga...
Rizhi:kya karoo gii mom
Vasu:tum tu chup rahooo ek blank check kya mil gaya..tumhein aur kuch chaiye nahi...aur ek mein hoon jiSay bus tumahri pari hai
Rizhi:nahi mom yeh blank check abhi k liye hai...bolo..kya karna hai...
Vasu:tumsay kuch hona bhi nahi hai...shge take da mobile n dial a no
Rocky:jee Madam
Vasu:mein chati hoon tum...Sujal ko rastay say hatha doo..leikin uski maut bikul..ek accident lagani chaiye...
Jee Madam appka kaam kal hi hojaye gaa...
Rizhi:mom app Bigb koo...
Vasu:usk marnay k baad yeh daulat property..humarii.,..
Rizhi:lekin mom...unkoo marwana zaroori hai kya
Vasu:tu nahi samjhay gaa..bus ab usko koi nahi bacha sakta.........
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This small part iz dedicated to Suri...i am Soo happy 4 her tat he talked to Rajeev..n all da beSt 4 ur examS
Plz do comment
Luv
Adi






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