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DIL KYA KARE...SK Fanfic(Full Ended) (Page 10)

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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 12:15pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by rajeev1

Embarrassed .....chal choro yar...tum log to anth keh ache bache ho...larte hi nahi! Tongue

haan farah ji hum bahut shariif hai lartey nahi hai Wink

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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
:::Kub likho gay adil ji.I hope that me n others r waiting.To wait someone is not a good thing.Plz write soon.Waiting............. Embarrassed
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
                               DIL KYA KARE(Part-7)

Recap:Sujal n Kashish get married....Kashish says tat she wants sum time...to settle in this marriage...Vasu..i very...disappointed to see Sujal...happy in this marriage...

GEREWAL HOUSE
Breakfast Table
Sujal...n Kashish r busy....eating da....breakfat...n Vasu..is signaling..Rishi..to say sumthing...he i 1st a little hesitant...then he..say..
Rishi:Bigb mujay kuch paisay chaiye..
Sujal:kiddo...manager ko bol day...dena..woh dai day gaa...
Rishi:Bigb...mujay kuch zyda paisay chaiye...app check par sign kardooo..
(Sujal takes da check 4rm Rishi n signs it....)
Sujal:hmmmm ok...yeh lay blank check...enjoy ur self...
Rishi:i love u Bigb
Sujal:love u too kiddo....( his mobile rings he picks it up)
Angad:Hiii..Sujal..
Sujal:Hii...yaar kaisa..hai...
Angad:yeh sawaaal tu mujay poachna chaiye tha..
Sujal:kyun...mujay kya hona tha..
Angad:raat kaisi..thi...
Sujal:sahi thi..kyun...
Angad:nahi..shadi k baad pheli raat aur..sirf..saahi..
Sujal:bahut achi..thi...ab bol..phone kyun kiya...
Angad:haan sahi hia..ab tu dosto ko phone karnay k liye reason dena parhta hai...anywyz..yaar...sorry...but aaj ek bahut imp meeting hai..so tujay office ana hoga..
Sujal:tu sambhal yaar..aaj Kashish ko usk dad k ghar laykar jana hai...
Angad:sirf eek..ghantay ka kaam hai..
Sujal:ok mein ata hoon...
Angad:yeh Kripa say baat kar...
Kripa:Sujal tum office nahi arahay...mein yeh meeting dekhlonngiii..tum Kashish k saath jayooo..
Sujal:tum dono decide karloo...call me then...
Kashish:kya howa...
Sujal:office me kuch zaroori kaam hai mujay jana hoga..
Vasu:shaadi k dosray din office...not fair..Sujal...Kashish k saaath hona zyda zaroori hai..
Sujal:thanx 4 da advice...Kashish taayar hojayoo...office say phelay..mein tumhein drop kardoonga...
Kashish:ok teq hai...
(They both go to da room n start getting ready...Sujal cud observe tat Kashish i not happy as he is going office..he is trying to talk to her..but she anwering just wat he asks 4...)
Sujal:meri shirt kahan hai..
Kashih:wahan bed par hai..
Sujal:meri tie kahan hai..
Kashih:wahi parhi hai..
Sujal:ok....(he is abt to knot da tie..tat..his mobile rings itz Angad)
Sujal:haan bol
Angad:clients say baat kii mainay...woh maan nahi rahay tujay ana hii paray ga..
Sujal:hmmmm...ok...
Angad:Bye....(he disconnects...)
Sujal:Kashish...meri tie tu band doo..
Kashish:band loo naa..mein tayyar horahi hoo..
Sujal:mein phone par baat kar raha hoo...late hojayongaa meeting k liye...
Kashish:tum bhi naa layoo....(she takes da tie n beings to...tye it...)
Sujal:kab lenay ayoo tumhein..
Kashish:shaam ko...
Sujal:itni dayer wahan kya karoo gii..
Kashish(annoyed):tumhein kya tum bus kaam karoo..(Sujal is enjoying da expressions on Kashih face...n is staring at her...non-stop)
Kashish:kya dekh rahay hoo...
Sujal:tumhein...
Kashish:ab phone par baat nahi karni kya...layoo mein bhi Angad say poacho asa konsa zaroori kaam hai..
Sujal:nahi woh...(b4 he cud complete...Kashish takes...da mobile...n sees..tat there is no one..)
Kashish:phone par tu koi bhi nahi hai..
Sujal(smiles):haan..woh..waise kafi achi tie bandti hai..
Kashish(smiles):tum pagal hoo...
Sujal:pehlay tu nahi tha..shayad ab hoo jayoon...
Kashish:Sujal..chalein..dad intezaar kar rahay hogay...
Sujal:haaan chaloo..tum hii baatein kark time waste karti rehti hoo...(they move...towardz..da car)
Kashish:mein..baatein karti hoo.
Sujal:aur kyaa..dekhoo ba lardooo gii tu..aur late hojayegay...(they sit in da car..)
Kashish:Sujalllll...
Sujal:janta hoon..mera naam bahut acha.hai..par achi wifes apnay hussband ka naam nahi leti...
Kashish:acha..naam nahi leti tu kya kehti hai..
Sujal:hmmm..u know..pyar say kuch bhi bolti hai..jaisasy..Akash ko Aki...Rajeev ko..Raj....
Kashish:oh...acha...so mein tumhein Suji bolangii..
Sujal:nahi nahi..tum mera naam hii lay...
Kashish:kyun tumnay hi bola..k pyar say..boltay hai..
Sujal:haan..par tum mujsay yar tu nahi karti...
Kasshish:hmmm..yeh bhi hai..
Sujal:agr pyar..nahi karti tu..do u hate me...
Kashish:mainay asa tu nahi kaha...
Sujal:so u don't hate me..
Kashissh:no...
Sujal:tat means u love me...
Kashish:Sujal..ghar aagaya..
Sujal:tumhara ghar thora aur door hota tu..porb thi ussay...
Kasshish:Sujal...tum bhi na..
Sujal:kya mein bhi..bata kar tu jayoo..
Kashish:Bye Sujal..
Sujal(mischeivously):Haan bye...mein shaam mein late ayonga
Kashish(smiles): haan late ana jaldi mat ana mein intezaar nahi karoongii...
Sujal(smiles bac):mat karna intezaar....
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Sujal has been working hard all..day......now..itz time go pick Kashish he...leaves...da office..n is in car wen calls Kasshish
Sujal:kya kar rahi hooo
Kashish:tumhara intezaar nahi kar rahi
Sujal:gud...karna bhi nahi chaiye tha...acha suno..
Kashish:bolo...
Sujal:dinner..par chalay...
Kashish:hmmmm sochan paray gaa..
Sujal:com on yaar...ab yeh mat kehna..tumhein..Ramu kaka k haath ka kahan zyda passand hai..
Kashish:ok..chalooo...kab tak arahay hoo..
Sujal:ankkien band karoo...i will b there...
Kashish:haan haan...
Sujal:nahi serioussly(he stops da car....rings da a bell)
Kashish:koi aya hai...
Sujal:mein hoo...ab darwaza khulogii..
Kashish:haan arahi hoo..
Sujal:sooo..ankkein band kii thi kya...
Kashish:nahi...
Mr.Sinha:Kashish..sab baatein darwazy par hi karoogii..k usssasy andar bhi anay doo gii..
Sujal:Namsatay uncle(he takes ashirwaad)..mein bhi yehi keha raha tha..k mujay uncle say milnay doo..par yeh hai k...
Kashish(grits her teeth):dad woh...
Sujal:ab..bhanay banay say kuch nahi hoogaa...tumhara pati aya..hai..jayoo jakar pani lay kar ayoo...
Mr.Sinha:haann Kashih Sujal..ko pani lay kar ayooo
Kashish(glares at Sujal):jee dad...
(He drinks da water...n..is now they both gets up to leave....Kashish meets her dad..n Sujal..takes his blessing...n leave..they r in car now)
Sujal:soo..Mam...konsay resturant mein jana passand karay gii..
Kashish:hum ghar jaa rahay..
Sujal:Kashish..mein tu bus mazak kar raha..tha..chaloo naa dinner par....
Kashish:nahi...
Sujal:plz..ok i am sorry...
Kashish:teq hai..lekin phelay hum mandir jayegay..
Sujal:is waqt kon mandir jata hai..
Kashish:mein jati hoon..agr tum mujay lay kar jayoogay...tu mein phir hi...dinner par chalein gay...
Sujal:tats blackmailing...
Kashish:haan hai tu...
Sujal:ok chaloo..
They both reach da temple...both get off....Kashish..going in...wen he observes Sujal till standing by da car...
Kashish:Sujal..chaloo..
Sujal:mein mandir khabhi nahi aya
Kashish:agr khabhi nahi aye iska yeh matlab nahi..k khabhi ayoo bhi naa...
Sujaal:Kashish tum hokar ayoo..naa..mein yahan wait karta hoon..
Kashish:Sujal chaloo...
Sujal:tum bahut zidi hoo...
They both go inside the temple....n Kashish is praying...n Sujal is watching her pray...Kashish opens her eyes n sees...tat Sujal didn't prayed...
Kashish:tumnay kuch nahi manga..
Sujal:nahi mujay kuch nahi chaiye..
Kasshish:hmmmm chaloo tumhara dinner...
Sujal:haan ek min..mein abhi aya...
He goes in temple...n say..God..
Sujal:mujay app say kuch nahi chaiye..lekin Kashish nay joo bhii maanga ussay day dena...(he returns bac....)
Kashish:kya howa...
Sujal:kuch nahi chalooo..
They both leave...n hav a candle light dinner...then they retrun bac..here one more day of there life passs in company of eachother....
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Ok i know..this part was little boring..but i wud write one more interesting actually 2day i wasn't feeling well...so just..worte...4 my friend..Suri..n Farah
Plz Do Comment
Luv
Adi



Edited by Adildagr8 - 23 March 2006 at 11:32pm
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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 11:40pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by rajeev1

oh no...abhi mein ne itni excitement se yeh page khola tha....yeh soch keh keh agla part agaya hoga....chalo khair koi baat nahi...par agar kal tak next part nahi aya na to.......................................................... ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ .........................................to................. ............................................................ ........................................... mein purso ka intezar karungi.. LOL Tongue

Gud grl...Farah....parsoo ka intezaarLOL..anywayz sorry...kal post nahi kiya...i wasn't feeling well actually..anywayz this one is 4 uEmbarrassed

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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fakhra

Originally posted by Adildagr8

Unum....n Mehreen thanx 4 ur comments...i will continue soon.... Embarrassed

Welcome bac Mehreen i hav seen u after such a long time..tum..nayi story start...karooo Big smile

 

hy adi.......thanx mujhe wellcome kehne ka.........actually mai kum aate hun.........exams ho rahay thay........aur aab result ki tension lagi hue hai............plzzzzz meray liye pray karna..........31 of march ko result hai................aur mere stories already hain........baas unhe continue karne ka time nahi milta..........but aap ne mere stories pe comments nahi diye........mai bohot naraz hun es baat se.............Cry

 

Ohhh no need 4 thanx....n all da best 4 ur reult...i am sure u wud get gud marks....i will definately pray.....aur...rahi baat comments kii...sorry...mein comments kar doonga...actaully i am was a silent reader of ur storyEmbarrassed

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Posted: 23 March 2006 at 11:47pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by shinymoon

:::Kub likho gay adil ji.I hope that me n others r waiting.To wait someone is not a good thing.Plz write soon.Waiting............. Embarrassed

Sorry...4 kept u waiting.....anywayz....i will try u continue daily but it quite difficult.....Tongue

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Big smile ..it wasnt broing..it was funny!......but OMG...if i will tell you this you'll be saying i have gone bonkers...but lat night i was thinking of the same tie scene...exactly like that for KTH...hehehe...i cant belive keh bilkul waisa hi aaj tumne likha...hehehe....its creepy...lol...but it was great!......hope you get well soon and write more..hehe Big smile
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Adildagr8

Originally posted by fakhra

Originally posted by Adildagr8

Unum....n Mehreen thanx 4 ur comments...i will continue soon.... Embarrassed

Welcome bac Mehreen i hav seen u after such a long time..tum..nayi story start...karooo Big smile

 

hy adi.......thanx mujhe wellcome kehne ka.........actually mai kum aate hun.........exams ho rahay thay........aur aab result ki tension lagi hue hai............plzzzzz meray liye pray karna..........31 of march ko result hai................aur mere stories already hain........baas unhe continue karne ka time nahi milta..........but aap ne mere stories pe comments nahi diye........mai bohot naraz hun es baat se.............Cry

 

Ohhh no need 4 thanx....n all da best 4 ur reult...i am sure u wud get gud marks....i will definately pray.....aur...rahi baat comments kii...sorry...mein comments kar doonga...actaully i am was a silent reader of ur storyEmbarrassed

 

thanx adi........but that's not fair........silent reader only?????.....well.........it's ok.................but comments day dainazaror...aur plzzzzzz result ki pray yaad se karna............well anywayz.....mindblowing part.........superb part..........keep it up........................Clap

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