Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Viren Jeevika scene- Jealous Viren and romance FF

Sarah4eva IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Viren and Jeevika scene - 

Jeevika closes the hospital door having just seen Manvi making sure she was ok but now it was dark and she was sleeping. Jeevika stands outside the hospital both worried for Manvi and wondering where Viren was. He said he would collect her after his office but still wasn't there yet.  She tries ringing his mobile but no answer.
She stands there getting cold from the breeze, she huddles her bare arms together.
Jeevika : Viren kahaan ho tum! She thinks..

Suddenly someone taps her arm.. She looks back excited.. 

Viren!!- she says smiling but then her smile fades as its not him but Dr Manan.
She looks awkwardly at him. 

Jeevika: Dr Manan ... aap.. Ummm.. 

Dr Manan looks around wondering what Jeevika was still doing here.

Dr Manan: Jeevika tum ab tak yahaan? Itni late hai. Chalo main tumko chorta hoon

Jeevika: Ummm nahin Viren toh ab aata hi hoga (She looks at her phone) per uska phone ...

Dr Manan: Main tumko leh chalta hoon... shayad woh office main ho. Main tumhe drop karunga

Jeevika tries again to ring viren but still no answer and she didn't want to stand in the cold anymore. She reluctantly agrees.

They arrive outside viren's office and Jeevika gets out the car. Dr Manan comes out too ..Jeevika says thanks to him. Suddenly the rain starts... and Jeevika gets wets..

Viren runs out of his office remembering he had to get Jeevika.. he sees Jeevika and Dr Manan standing there. He stops and looks at them annoyed seeing Dr Manan there. He walks slowly towards them. Jeevika sees viren and smiles in relief.

Jeevika: Viren! ... Main tumhaara bahot intezaar kari thi aur phir umm woh Dr manan mujhe yahaan laye tumhaare office main. kya tum busy the?

Viren ignores her as he just looks at Dr Manan with an expression of possessiveness for Jeevika.. He grabs Jeevika's hand leaving Dr manan there  and takes her with him inside to his office. Jeevika realises something is wrong but goes along with him. 

He takes her inside his office shuts the door and then sits down. Jeevika looks at viren worried.

Jeevika: Kya hua viren? She puts her arm on his shoulder. He first shakes her off.

Viren: Tum voh Dr Manan ke saath kyun aayi..  he says annoyed looking away.

Jeevika then smiles knowing Viren was jealous.

Jeevika: Toh tumko jalan hai?

Viren looks back at her...

Viren: Kya???

Jeevika: Jhalan..  (She laughs teasing him)

Viren gets up and corners Jeevika into wall..  there faces touch... Jeevika then realises how serious he was. -- He stares at her intensely.. and her heart starts thumping with him next to her. She tries to move but he cages her with his arm on both sides still staring at her. She looks into his eyes lost..

Viren? She says breathlessly.. -- He puts his hand on her lips softly and brushes her wet hair aside from her face.

Viren: Tumko pata hai Jeevika,  agar koi aur tumko dekhe toh main yeh seh nahin sakta... kabhi nahin! Aur voh dr manan!! -- he thumps his hand on the wall shaking her slightly... She grabs his bruised hand and kisses it slowly..

Jeevika: Viren.. tumko kya hua hai? Main tumhaari hoon aur hamesha rahongi.. 

She cups his face and kisses his forehead... he hugs her passionately

Jeevika then looks up and viren smiling..

Jeevika: Ab hum chale? 

Viren shakes his head.. 

Jeevika looks confused.. 'Kyun?'

He then holds her to face him... and brings her face near him looking at her lips. 

Viren: Kyunke tumhe mujhe meri kiss nahin diya..

Jeevika blushes... And pushes him away playfully..

Jeevika: Tumhaara gift ghar main milega...  - She walks towards the door but viren hold her dupatta making her stop.  'Viren..!' She tries to get her dupatta off him but he pulls her closer as they move to the door closer..

All of a sudden the door opens Jeevika falls on top of Viren!

Dadaji walks in and looks at them shocked... Viren and Jeevika quickly get up embarrassed. Viren is still holding Jeevika's dupatta , Jeevika quickly grabs it off him as Dadji notices. 

Dadaji doesn't say a word he just looks at Viren.. Viren looks at Jeevika.

Jeevika: Dadaji hum abhi ghar aarahe the.. she walks out the office slowly

Viren tries to walk after her... but Dadaji stops him.

Viren beta...?.. Viren looks back reluctantly.

Dadaji laughs at him... Chalo main ghar main milta hoon.. mujhe kuch kaam hai.


Viren and Jeevika run outside the office and its still raining... Jeevika laughs and so does Viren!!  

Jeevika: Viren tum pagal ho.. dadaji humko pagar liya

Viren: Haan toh? Voh jaante ke hum pyaar karte hai.. aur..?

Jeevika: Aur?

He pulls her again towards him with her dripping dupatta..

Viren: Aur tum meri patni ho.. sirf meri.

Jeevika smiles as he goes in to kiss her wet lips. Viren sees Dadji walk outside ... He quickly grabs Jeevika's hand and they run to the car. Jeevika bursts out laughing again...  Viren smiles.. 'Koi humein chorta nahin'! - They make their way home.

Edited by Sarahvirika - 10 December 2011 at 9:16pm

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sonika_virman Senior Member

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
wow nice one .and yipee I m d first one to post the comment :))

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ananya123 Goldie

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
loved it!!! thank you so much sarah!!

Edited by ananya123 - 10 December 2011 at 9:25pm

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shahriddhi Groupbie

Joined: 03 December 2011
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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
Aww <3 so cute!
I want to see the possessive and jealous side of viren in the show! Though it shoulnt create problems between them. Their understanding should alwys be the binding factor in their relationship
I am dying to see their chemistry after marriage !!

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maankigeet4ever IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
awww...very cute :) and loved the jealous Viren :D

Reya <3

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Hawa-Hawaii IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
ahhh...jealous viren...a treat...!!!!

lovely :)

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inlvwithehmmbh Senior Member

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Sarah u leave me speechless once again! see i told u without seeing it that it would be awesome after all who is writing <3  are u gonna continue? pls do!! i'm imaging jealous viren, it would look so cute and their kiss awesomeee:)!!!! Thanks so much Sarah love YA!!<3<3

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Virika-KryRan Senior Member

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Posts: 455

Posted: 10 December 2011 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Sarah!! great to see another written piece from you...sooo cute totally loved it <3

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