Khushi ki khushi NEW Part 2 on PG 7 - Page 5

Hmm...nice !! 😊  do continue !! 😳

wow nice one plzzz continue

Good Start, The character's are within their  characteristics  traits,  DTeacher ... Felt the end was bit  abrupt ..😊

Would like to see  Part II and carry it to its logical conclusion ...


For a first timer ..Awesome 👍🏼

I Want You To Continue This :) 😳

Thanks you all very much for the comments and likes !! 😳

I am very humbled by your kindness - that goes to all of you!! 😊

I am hoping to add the next part in a few hours time. 😃

niceee...u shud continue it

First of all so sorry for the late response...

I loved this, This is your first attempt and I was hooked and it was brilliant.

Originally posted by: lwfw

r  u sure this is your first OS😲,  it was good 👏
please continue and  pm me when you update 😳

Hi, my dear friend - so pleased you read it - the update will be on in the next half hour hopefully! 😃

Originally posted by: shybabe

First of all so sorry for the late response...

And for your first one...this was BRAVO!👏

Thanks so much for the pm!

Originally posted by: tanthya

Good Start, The character's are within their  characteristics  traits,  DTeacher ... Felt the end was bit  abrupt ..😊

Would like to see  Part II and carry it to its logical conclusion ...

For a first timer ..Awesome 👍🏼

Originally posted by: incandescent

Hmm...nice !! 😊  do continue !! 😳

Nice to hear from some of my favourite writers! What an honour. 😃

Thank you for the feedback and I will post the update in about 20 minutes. 😊