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Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 8)

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continue soon its great

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Part 6

Kripa turns around as her hairs flys and touch Angad's face.Angad close his eyes while Kripa sits in her car and drives to her house.

ANgad just smiles there standing.He also comes to his car and drives his car to his house.Kripa goes to her house , eats her dinner after so many dayz with her parents.Chats with her parents and shares a little laugh.After some time,the three of them head to their rooms.Kripa enters her room,she feels free from 3 dayz because tomorror was Sunday and on Monday,Tuesday was a holiday of Holi.So she was bit enjoying being relaxed.Kripa was getting more excited minute by minute.Then she remembers that Angad has invited her to spent some time with Angad.She becomes more excited and happy.There was no end of her happiness but she thought to herself for once that why she is excited that she is going with Angad,Why she is feeling for Angad when he is close to her.As these question swere roaming in her mind,Kripa sleeps.

Day Three!!!!

Next Morning,Kripa was still sleeping and it was 10 o'clock.She didn't set any alarm last night because she want some peace sleep.But in the mean time,she gets a call on her cell.Kripa irritatily picks the phone up.

K(in a sleepy tone):Hello..

A:Hey my sweet friend..

K(her eyes opens wider):uhh..Angad tum..

A:haan mein kyon koi bhoot dekh liya kya...itna chonk(surprised)kyon rahi ho yaar..

K(again in a sleepy tone):nahi .. tum ne mujhe meri neend se utha diya...kitna acha sapna dekh rahi thi..

A:hey hello...utho...tum abhi tak so rahi ho kya..

K:haa nahi..

A:To utho na meri sleeping princess..dekho zara ghari(clock)mein..dus baj rahe hain...

K:what rubbish..

Kripa looks at her clock.


A(enjoying the situation):I knew it tum aise hi karo get up fast..tumhe ready hone mein bhi time lage ga....c'mon i m waiting..

K:What??U r waiting??for what??

A:Hey hello..kon si duniya mein jee rahi ho..i have invited u for a day out..and u bad...very bhi reham nahi aya tumhe...

K:Angad stop acting...tumhe actor hona chahiye tha..tum bohut achi acting ker lete ho..

A:i know that..u don't have to tell me.....Kripa tumhe taiyaar nahi hona hai kya....kitni baatein karti ho...jao baatein kam kiya karo aur kaam zayada kiya karo go and get ready..

K:Angad just shut up..

Saying that she puts off the phone while Angad just smiles to himself as he was wearing glasses of brown shades.Kripa runs to the washroom.She hurrily takes shower.Then after some time comes out covered in a pink towel.Kripa head towards her closet and takes out a short jeans and a white sleeveless shirt.She quickly wears it.She quickly applies some makeup.She was applying a pink gloss when she hears a horn.Kripa quickly throws her gloss by the side and grabs her white heal sandals.She quickly wears one and heads out of her room.She was in the middle of the stairs when she hears again a horn.She quickly tieds her sandals and was about to run when her mother calls.

G:aray Kripa kaha ja rahi hai tu..woh bhi itni jaldi taiyaar ho ker..

K:woh papa mera aik class fellow mujhe bahar le ja raha hai just for outing..

G:theek hai mager jaldi aa jana..

K:ok bye..

Without listening to Gayatri's answer Kripa runs outside.But she stops because if she will run to him then Angad will understand that she was in hurry to only meet him.Angad will take out a wrong meaning of it.So she start walking with an attitude.Angad sees her and is amazed because he saw Kripa first time in jeans.She was looking just amazing.Kripa goes to the passenger seat and takes a seat.

K:Hi Angad.. akhir tum pohonch hi gayi right...

K:tum ye shukar karo ke mein pohonch gayi..

A:ok yeah lets leave..

Angad start the car and start to drive.While driving,Kripa start checking her nails.

A:Kripa ye tum kya ker rahi ho..

K:kyon tumhe koi problem hai..

A:nahi per...u r irritating me while driving..

K:per meine to kuch kaha hi nahi aur na hi koi awaz nikali..

A:per tum jo bhi ker rahi ho os se mein irritate ho raha hon..

K:mein chahe jo marzi karon..tumhe kya..

A:per this is my car...

K:to kya...nikaal ker bahar phank do ge mujhe..

Angad stops his car.



A:meine kaha bahar niklo..


A:niklo bahar..

Kripa disappointly gets out of his car.

A:aaj ka din tum yehi guzaro...

Angad starts the car and drives.While Kripa hits her leg to a stone near by.Angad while driving remembers that he is making some hatred in Kripa's heart.He has to make love not hatred.He quickly stops the car and start to drive backwards.He pulls down the mirror.

A:chalo under aa jao..

K:kyon tum jao..

A:Kripa zid mat karo chalo aa jao under..

K:theek hai ager tum itna force karte ho to..

Kripa goes and sits in her seat.While Angad drives the car.After some time,they reaches the beach.They both heads out and start to walk holding their shoes and sandles in their hands.They both sits at a rock.

A:Kripa kal Prithvi ke ghar Holi Party hai..tumhe Prithvi ne mujhe baatane ko kaha..


A:to tum aa rahi ho na..

K:haan zaroor..

They both sits there for a while.

K:Angad tum kitne bure ho..

A:kyon meine kya kiya..

K:meine breakfast bhi nahi kiya hai to kya ab lunch bhi nahi khilao ge..

A:oops sorry pehle kyon nahi baataya..

Kripa makes a puppy face.Angad's heart melts.

A:theek hai chalo..pass mein hi aik bohut acha restaurant hai..

They both heads to their car.

To be Continued

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Edited by sweetz_gurl - 23 March 2006 at 1:33pm
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it was a gr8 part!!!!i rly enjoyed it!!!! thanx for the update!! and plz do cont. soon, i can't wait to see wat happens in prithvi's party!!
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nice part plz continue
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awwwww so cuteeeee
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Great and sweeeeet part!!! Cont soon!
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