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Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 44)

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anagd pagal ho gaya hai Confused
pls clear this confusion Cry Cry Cry
cont soon Big smile

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awesome part plz cont soon. Clap
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i loved your fanfic Hug   but plz plz & plz make A-K toghether bcuz you only have fight or rude scenes Angry   Broken Heart between them after their marriage .plz bring some romantic scenes Heart   
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Part 37

Next Morning,Angad opens his eyes.He gets up and sees Kripa coming from front.


She runs to him and hugs him tiedly but Angad doesn't hug her back.

K:I am soooo is my hubby's birthday...isn't it cause a celebration...

Angad doesn't reply.Kripa aparts from him and looks at him to see him not interested in her talk
. i am are thinking that you haven't got your birthday gift right?

Angad looks at her with frustrated expression.

K:i have a really big surprise for will be very happy after hearing you surprise gift for your birthday..

A(thinks):The big gift of my life you gave me
Kripa..and not one many will be very small in front of those surprises... are gonna be father of our CHILD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa smiles really wide because she thought Angad would be very happy but Angad just moved his head aside.Kripa's big smile fades away.

K(with a frown voice):Angad...what happened...aren't you happy?

Angad just doesn't reply.

K:Angad tell me....what happened...why you are not happy!!

Kripa looks at Angad with a frown look and after a while Angad replies.

A:Abbort it..!!!!

Kripa was so much shocked after listening this.A tear spills from Kripa's eyes.


A:Yes...Abort it!!!!

K:No..Angad..No...what..what are you saying...

Kripa stands up crying.

K:No....No.......Angad please say quickly that you are are just teasing me...

A:No..i am saying right..

K:No Angad..please...i don't like such jokes....just stop it....Angad..!!!

A(angry voice):i said Abbort it!!!


Angad stands up angrily and faces her.

A:you will do as i will say...!!!understood....

Saying that he leaves from there.Kripa with still a frown look falls on the bed and starts crying.Angad gets freshen up and gets ready.Before going he turns to Kripa.

A:i want a good news till evening...

Saying that he leaves from the room.Kripa cries more hard but then she controls herself.

K:I know Angad what to do now...

At Evening,Angad was pacing room.He was watchign the clock again and again.After a while,he sees Kripa coming from the door with still a frown look.Angad sees her and heads to her.

A:Thank God you came back...i think you did as i said..
Kripa just noded her head.

A:Great!..i am happy...that today you listened what i said and did too..!

Kripa just goes to her room.She sits on her bed and remembers where she went today.


Kripa goes to Prithvi's house and tells him everything.She cries on his shoulder and then after that she comes back to home.

*******End Of Flashback*********

Kripa started crying again.She just can't abbort her own child.She can't kill a small child who haven't came to this world yet.She decides to hide it from Angad and she will tell him on right time.Angad comes to his room and sees her crying.Angad comes and sits beside her.
A:Its ok Kripa..i don't mind that you abborted it...i means what you are doing is wrong but what you did today is absolutely right..

K:Wong?what wrong....what i did Angad....what wrong i did that i loved you..or that you don't love me...tell me Angad on which day you said me the three words which you used to say always before our marriage.....those three words Angad from which two heart joins...but i think our heart was never one....they were always separated and will always....

Angad looks at Kripa.

K:Tell me....why you wanted OUR child to be abborted..Why tell me why?

Angad just looks somewhere else.

K:No Angad...Tell me...Why?

A:Now this question is have abborted your child..

K:YOUR?what my...this is our child..
A:This was...not now..
K:No Angad..why you wanted me to kill our child..

A:Kripa i said before too this question is useless now because you just had an abbortion...

K:No Damn it No....i never abborted my child and NEVER WILL...

Angad looks at Kripa angrily.

K:Yes...because i can't kill my child...

A(angrily):Then where you went today??

K:i went to Prithvi's house becase at that time i needed someone...i needed a shoulder to cry on..

A(on top of his lungs):Oh yeah sure...who am i asking this....obviously you loved him once...

K:What....what are you saying Angad?

A:No no..don't say that you don't know anything about it now..

K:Angad..what..i mean--

A:No..i am sorry..i am sorry...a woman who talks to a stranger at late nights instead talking or telling her own husband her problem she talks to a stranger,lover...

K(yells):ANGAD!!!! i am having doubt that....that this child is also..also..

Kripa slaps Angad really hard.Angad was also about to slap and raise his hand but stops.He start remembering his days before when they used to go college together and some good moments.

K(crying) are so were never like never raised your hand to slap me and you want to slap me...

She takes a deep breath.

K:Go ahead Angad....Slap me...Slap me ANGAD..
Angad turns opposite from her boiling in anger.
A:Just leave!!!

Kripa lowers her eyes.

A:Just leave this house or else i will do something to myself..
Kripa start crying really hard.Angad leaves the room and Kripa start packing her clothes.After packing,Kripa looks at her side table to see her photograph with Angad in the frame in which Angad kissed her and Kripa with a shock look opens his eyes and mouth too.She slips out the photograph and also puts that on top of her clothers.Then she stands uo and leaves downstairs to see Angad , Naina and Kartick standing.Kripa looks at all but they all turns their faces.She goes to the out door and remembers her wedding day when all welcomed her.Then she steps out and leaves the house crying really hard.Soon it start raining,Angad hears the voice of the rain and remembers that Krip ajust left the house.He runs to the door and heads outside in search of Kripa.He screams his name.


But Kripa was no where seen.He falls on his knees and puts his hands on his face covering his face and starts crying.He yells and cries really loudly.

To be Continued.
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Posted: 27 October 2006 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
amazing part
very intresting
poor kripa and angad Cry
hope angad finds the truth out soon
~*Milly*~ Senior Member

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Posted: 27 October 2006 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
Aww Poor kripa stupid angad i have said that alot now adays anywhom continue soon i feel bad for angad Cry
bhumishah Goldie

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Posted: 27 October 2006 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
no poor kripa n angad
naina Angry
nice part
continue soon
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Posted: 28 October 2006 at 1:21am | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was sooooo emotional part...poooor kripa!!! Cry

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