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Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 4)

sweetz_gurl Senior Member

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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 7:58am | IP Logged

Originally posted by nabz8888

it was rly nice!!!! hmm, yeh saath din larki in ke chakar mein saath din angad falls for kripa hojayega (my prediction)

i m really impressed by ur predictions..Clap

lucky-moon Goldie

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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
mindblowing plz continue
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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
tht was really gud...plzz continue soon Clap
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Posted: 18 March 2006 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
continue soon its great Big smile
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Part 3

PRI:oh yeah Miss Sharma mein ne aap ke addmisson form taiyaar ker diya hai aur bhaij bhi diya hai..u can go and attend all ur classes from Today..Good Luck Miss Sharma..!

K:thank u sir!

PRI:u may go now..

She leaves the office.Kripa didn't know her classes.So she was walking to see if she herself can find it but in vain.Then she saw a girl running from behind Kripa.Kripa turns around and we see Mishti running.

K:Excuse me..

But Mishti goes running in front of her.Kripa again yells.

K:Hey u..!!

Mishti turns around.

M:Yes!r u talking with me..

K:Yes u..please can i ask u something..

Mishti comes running to her.

M:Please jaldi pocho jo bhi pochna hai mein jaldi mein hon...c'mon i m late..

K:woh mein Science Student hon aur mujhe classes ka nahi pata to..

M:Oh don't worry come with me..mein bhi Science student hon..chalo jaldi...

They both runs to where Mishti was going.They reached their class.


T:Hi Miss Bose...Aaj kya excuse baataye gi aap..


K(interrupts):Sorry Mam woh mein nayi ayi hon to is liye woh mujhe classes baata rahi thi,,

T:its ok..c'mon Mishti go to ur seat..and u girl come here..

Kripa goes to where the Teacher told her.

T:Well please let us know ur name..

K:Kripa Sharma..

T:oh so Kripa Sharma..u r a science student right..


T:what do u think that what will u do after becoming a doctor..?

K:I want to help those who r poorer who don't even have money for their surgeries...i want to help them who have no day left for their lives..and last but not the least i want to make the people sure that Doctors also have heart and they can also think from their heart not from only brain..

The teacher claps for her as the class.

T:Very good Imagination..I Hope ur all dreams come true and this one too...i hope u will not give me any way to be angry on u...So Kripa here is ur class..go and sit where u want..


Kripa looks at the whole class.Then she took a deep breath and moves towards where Mishti's seat was.She sits beside her and the class starts.At the lunch time,Kripa and Mishti became fast friends and they both moves to Canteen.Kripa didn't know that Mishti was Prithvi's Sister.They both take seat at a table.Mishti's eye fell on Prithvi.


He Turns around abut couldn't see who was sitting with her as her back was facing him.Angad was also with him.


A:chal wahi chalte hain..

They both gets up from their table and moves to Mishti's table.

M:s se milo ye hai Kripa..

Kripa turns around to face Prithvi.



M:Haan ye hai Prithvi mera bhai tum ise janti ho..

K:yeah ofcourse suba hi to mile the right..


K:per tumne kabhi baataya nahi ke tumhari behen bhi hai..

P:oops sorry..

K(smiles):its ok..

M:Ao betho tum dono..

K(realizes):dono..Prithvi ke ilawa aur kon hai..

She turns her face to the other way and saw Angad.



P:Woh Kripa please ise maaf ker do..u know na ragging to aik aam cheez hai..


Angad winks at Prithvi.

A:aray maaf ker do na...waise bhi kon sa bohut bara kaam ker diya hai meine...its a normal thing babes.

He puts her arm on her shoulder.

K(angrily):Apna haath uthao..


K:meine kaha apna haath sharafat se utha lo..

A:oh sorry..

He pulls her arm back.In the mean time,he got a call from a friend.He excuses himself and goes to a corner.

A:Hi Josh..kaise ho tum..Aaj college kyon nahi aye..

Then the other person on the line we see its none other than Josh!

J:Sorry..i was not feeling well..

A:and now?

J:yeah much better..

A:then why don't u come to college..

J:R u mad..

A:oh c'mon..tum ne sirf Sir Shukla ki class attend nahi ki hai now c'mon..

J:just look behind..


J:c'mon first look..

Angad turns back and is shocked to see Josh standing behind him.

A:tu kabhi nahi sudhrega ga..

He hugs him..

J:same like u..

Both at the same time:RIGHT!

Then they both laugh and head to the table.

P:Hey Josh..

J:Hi..hi Mishti..and Hi Sweetie..

Kripa just looks at him.

Angad whispers something to Josh.

J:oh i see...oh sorry..i thought u was his new girlfriend..

Angad hits his elbow into Josh's stomach.

J:OWWWWWWWWWWW..oops sorry i mean to say Angad's new Girl Friend..don't take to wrong way..

K:its ok..

The bell rings.Kripa and Mishti gets up and was about to leave when--

A:aray suniye to..

Kripa turns around..

A:tumhari Book..

Kripa takes her book back from him and was about to go again.

A:aray rukiye to..

She again stops and looks at him.

A:ur bag..

Kripa takes it and was about to go when her strips got open from the back..

A:aray tehriye to..

Kripa then again stops and turns to him angrily..

K:what do u want..sari cheezen aik satah nahi de sakta kya...

A(makes a puppy face):woh..woh tumhare strips khul gaye..


A:woh..aray woh..

He points towards her back.Krips started moving back and fell embarassment in front of him.

A:well if u don't mind then i'll tied them..

Kripa just stops and moves to her way back.He tieds her strips and gives a quick kiss on her cheeks and runs from there.


Kripa then feel shy and goes to her class.The whoe day went studing and now it was the time to go back to home.Kripa was heading towards her car when Mishti calls her.


Kripa looks behind.

K:Mishti what happen?

M:woh car is broken down..if u could give me a lift..?

K:oh yeah sure please have a seat...

They both sat in Kripa's car and Kripa drives the car to Prithvi's house as she knows his car way.At the way to Mishti's house,a car comes very fast and yes it was a red beauty of Angad.He comes and start to drive at the level of Kripa's car.Angad pulls down his mirror as Josh was also sitting next to him.Kripa's mirror was also down.



A:oh yeah..i wanna tell u that u r really beautiful..

Kripa just ignores him and start to pull her mirror up.

M:Woh bura nahi hai..


M:ANgad bura nahi hai..he is a nice guy but aik bohut buri adat hai ke woh larkiyon ke sath flirter hai..

K:Its ok..mein use dekhte hi samajh gayi thi...Bigara hua hai bas..

M:yeah u r right..

They both laugh at this.

To Be Continued.

Sweetz Gurl
lucky-moon Goldie

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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 10:16am | IP Logged
it was mindblowing wow plz continue
Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 10:18am | IP Logged
great part!! that was awesome! continue soon!
kashish805 Senior Member

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Posted: 19 March 2006 at 11:03am | IP Logged
I just read ur fan fic it is great
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