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Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 24)

hawoo Goldie

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nice prt..cont soon Smile

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fantastic!!! really really superb!!! i loved it!!! take care n cont. soon...the stars tell me that adi n kripa will end up getting engaged!!!!
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brilliant part!! continue soon yaar
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its great
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Awesum job! Clap
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Part 18

K:Mom..this is not a game that i will just take 10 mins and tell you...its about my life...


K:Now Give me a hug..

Gayatri just hugs her for a second angrily.


Gayatri looks at Kripa.


Gayatri smiles and hugs her.Kripa hugs her back and after minutes she runs upstairs.Just then Kripa recieves a letter on her site table.She opens that letter and start jumping in joy.She started screaming.

K:WOWWWWWWWWWW...aaaaaaahhhhhh i can't believe it...moooooooomm..

Gayatri comes in her room running.

G:What happened...?

K:Mom..Mom Mom..

She holds her and twirls her around.

K:Mom...i topped the college........and now you proudly can say that you are the mother of an independent doctor...........

G:Oh My God...really...

Gayatri runs downstairs and calls Surybhaan to tell him the good news.Kripa was so happy.She just calls Aditya.

K:Hi Aditya...

Ad:I think there is a good news..c'mon tell me..

K:How did you get to know..

Ad:Well i don't know but i can hear from your voice....the excitement is like you became a doctor or topped the college...Well is this is true then the result is not out yet...

K:Yeah Yeah..thats right...I topped the college..

Ad(Shocked) must be joking with me right..

K:Noooooo...You didn't got a letter..from university..

Ad(Talks in one breath):Which letter and which university..Kripa tell me everything i m confused and i m dying to know my result if this is true..



Just then Aditya's door bell rings.

Ad:Shut Up!!!!!Kripa tell me Please..

K:But you just said Shut up..

Ad:God not you..i didn't said to you...

K:Who else lives with you..

The door bell again rings.

Ad:God this bell Shut this bell..Kripa Please..

Aditya start sweating and his face becomes red.

K:Adi..check who is on the door may result is there waiting for you on the door...


He quickly shuts the phone and runs to the door.He opens the door and some people were standing there.


People:Sir..This is your Result which is out today from the university.

Ad(with shaking hands):Thanx..

He quickly close the door and opens that Envelop.He takes out the result paper and was finally relived.When he reads his marks he also jumps.

Next Morning,Adi was getting bored.Prithvi calls Adi.


Adi:Hi..How are you..

P:Fine well..congratulations..

Ad:For what?

P:You must be passed with good marks..

Ad:Oh yeah..thanx...

P:Well i was thinking that why not today we celebrate out success..


P:All the students of the college are coming at a new disc in Bandra..So can you inform Kripa too..

Ad:Yeah sure why not..So whats the timing..

P:Well the timing is 8:30 PM Sharp.


Saying that they both hangs up the phone.On the other hand,Angad was sitting on his bed.He was remembering old memories of Kripa.

A:Why can't i forget her...Why...

Angad holds his head from his hands.At Evening,Aditya quickly gets ready and leaves to Kripa's house.He rings the bell.Gayatri opens the door.

Ad(Delighted):Hi Aunty..

G:Hello Beta..come inside..

Ad:Thanx...where is Kripa aunty..

G:She is up in her room..

AD:oh..i see.. can go to her room..

He kisses Gayatri on the cheeck.

Ad:Thanx Aunty..

He runs upstairs and knocks at her room.Kripa opens the door.

K:Adi tum..

Ad:Haan c'mon get ready fast we don't have time...

He looks at his watch.

Ad:What..its 7:30 have a get ready fast..

K:But where are we going..

Ad:Kripa...There is a part at a new disco..for all the students of the college..


Ad:No ifs and no Buts..


Kripa looks through her closet and takes out a while gown skirt and a blue sleeveless top.She quickly gets ready. look amazing.. shall we leave..


They both leaves and gets into Aditya's car.They soon reach there.Kripa comes out and sees that Angad also comes at the same time.She quickly slips her arm in Aditya's arm.Aditya looks at her arm and smiles.Angad looks at them and start boiling.They all heads inside.Kripa was feeling embarassing because Angad was sitting at bar.He was drinking and just looking at her which was making her feel embarass.Mishti was also with Angad.

M:Angad..What happened...Why are you behaving so wierd these dayz..


M:What nothing...every time when i ask any question you just answer nothing...this time i'll not spare are not happy with me?


Mishti was heartbroken.

A:I m not happy.....But...I m very Happy..

Mishti quickly hugs him.

M:I love you Angad..

A(whispers):I love you Kripa..

M:But you have to prove to me that you love me..

A:What kind of prove you want from me?

M:That how much you love me..

A:But can i?

Josh comes from behind and pats at Angad's back that Angad falls down.

J:oops Sorry...

A:c'mon pick me up now..

Josh helps him up..

J:So Buddy whats going on?

A:She want a prove from me that how much i love her..


Angad quickly looks at him.

J:oops Sorry..

Josh Whispers to Angad.

J:Sorry...You are continuously looking at Kripa thats why i thought that she want a prove..Sorry Buddy..

A:Its ok..

J:Well than just sing a song..



J:yeah..he sings really good..

A:Josh stop it ok..

He looks at Kripa..

A:I have stopped singing..

J:Oh c'mon yaar..

M:c'mon...Please for me.....

Angad looks at Mishti.

A:Ab tanhaa raha na jaaye

Josh runs to the DJ and tells him while the DJ plays the music.

DJ:Please Join on the Dance floor..

Some People comes and dance on the dance floor while Mishti takes Angad and Adi also takes Kripa.

Rock Your Body - 3
Rock Your Body - 3
Rock Your Body - 3
Rock Your Body - 3

Ab Tanhaa Raha Na Jaaye (Angad sings again while looking at Kripa)

Rock Your Body - 3
Rock Your Body - 3

Dil Tumhare bina kahi chain na paaye (Angad remembers some old memories of Kripa and himself)
Ab tanha raha na jaaye

Rock Your Body - 3 Shake Shake
Rock Your Body - 3

Dil tumhare bina kahi chain na paaye
Ab tanha raha na jaaye      (Mishti sings while hugging Angad)

Rock Your Body - 3

beqaraari badi hain badi betaabiyan hain (Prithvi comes in the dance floor and sings)
inn faasalon mein nazdeekiyan hain
dil ki deewaron pe hain sirf tasveer teri
teri yaad jana zanzeer meri

bhala chahat ko jaanam koi kaise chhupaaye
ab tanha raha na jaaye        (Adi Twirls Kripa while Kripa sings)

rock your body - 3

Rock Your Body - 3

mere jazbaat tujhse mere din raat tujhse
mere aashiqui ke khayal tujhse   (Angad again sings while looking at Kripa.He was continuously looking at her)
teri aahat jo aayen dhadke dil yeh mera
har khayal se hain bas tera basera

ishq tera mujhe toh deewana banaye
ab tanha raha na jaaye   (Mishti again sings)

rock your body - 3 shake shake
rock your body - 3

dil tumhare bina kahi chain na paaye
ab tanha raha na jaaye

rock your body - 3 shake shake
rock your body - 3
rock your body - 3 shake shake
rock your body - 3

Everyone claps.Angad leaves from there outside.Kripa looks at him.He was totally drunk.Kripa excuses herself from Aditya and also goes outside.Outside Angad was walking like a drunker singing.

A(in a drunk tone):Ab Tanha raha na jaye...Rock you body..Body...Shake...

He laughs.Kripa comes from behind.She just stands far away from him and looks at him.Angad falls on the road.Kripa runs to her.


She quickly holds him.

A:Hmm..Kripa?Why are you here...go inside...Aditya must be waiting for you...Oops...ADI must be waiting for you..

K:Angad get up..

A:No..No..leave me....Oh no..Wrong don't have to leave me because you have leaved me...

K:Angad just shut up and get up..

A:No..Why Kripa....tum ne apne aap ko mere dimaag se to nikaal diya....mager mere dil se kaise nikaalo gi.....

Kripa closes her eyes in pain.

A:Is dil ka kya kasoor tha Kripa....

K:Angad please..tum hosh mein nahi ho..

A:Nahi...mein pure hosh mein hon..

Kripa was about to help him to get up.

A:No No..don't touch me...don't touch me....


A:Kripa i will not marry Mishti...Yes i will not....Becuase you didn't selected your life partner....


A:are you gonna get married to Aditya..


A:Yes or no..


A:Just go from here Kripa...just go....

K:Listen to me An--

A(Yells):Just go from here...

Kripa cries and leaves from there.

To be Continued..

Preview:What will be Kripa's Decision?
Keep reading..

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