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Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 23)

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Then the whole class goes on.Kripa and Aditya becomes fast friends during the class.After the class,Kripa and Aditya were coming out.

K:Takes these notes but give them back to me tomorrow..

Ad:Ok..but how is it if i come to ur house to give u back..

K:No can come anytime...if you want to come then let me know ok so that i'll give my address to you..


They both walked to the canteen.

Ad:Umm Kripa,can i ask something?

K:Sure why not..

Ad:Umm that boy..i don't know what is his name but why is he starring at us from long time.I noticed the whole time in class he was watching you and was giving a killing look to me...why is that?

K:Uhh Nothing..

Ad:Is he your enemy?

Kripa quickly answers.

K:Noo!!He's not..may be he was angry at you when you were answering..oops i mean quite fighting at that time..


K:Hmm so Adi where do you came from?

Ad:I came from Delhi..

K:Huh! i loved that place...

Ad:Loved means don't you love now?

K:Umm i mean i also came from there...and i just can't forget that place..that was my birth place... too..


Ad:Yeah...aur mujhe tumhe dekh ker hi pata chal gaya tha ke tum mumbaiya ho hi nahi sakti..

Kripa laughs while Angad sees her.He was burning like fire inside.He stands and holds mishti's hand.He comes near them.

A:So Kripa..!Akhir tumhe bhi tumhara jeevan saathi mil gaya huh?

Kripa just moves her head to another side and closes her eyes.Aditya looks at him.Angad look at him from his foots to is head.

A:Nice choice!

Aditya looks at Kripa and then stands up.

Ad:Whats your problem buddy?


Angad Laughs a bit.

A:Kripa knows what the Problem is.

Aditya looks again at Kripa.

A:Oh i see..Kripa never told you right that one time i lo--

Kripa quickly stands up. can you...Do you have any problem that i talks to anyone.....Yes he is my choice..what will you do...will you kill me or him.....Just forget it..Lets go Aditya..

Aditya just follows Kripa to the auditorium where no one was there.

Ad:Kripa what was that...

K:I m sorry...i m really sorry that i said that bit i have to...there was no choice for me to say something else...

Ad:But what the mystery is...i m totally confused...

Kripa tells him her whole story.

Ad:Really Sad!i m sorry..

K:Its ok...its not your fault...its my fault that there was a time that i loved him..

Ad:Don't you love him now..

Kripa stops and looks at him.

K:I think there is no answer for this difficult question which has become a part of my life...

Ad:So now what will you do?

K:I have forgived him...but i can't love him back...there is no problem for me to accept this but Angad can't accept it...

Ad:Don't worry...i m with you..

Kripa looks at him straight into his eyes which was giving caring look.Kripa and Aditya leaves for the class as the bell rings.

After the college,Kripa and Aditya were coming to their cars.They both sayed there Byes to each other.Kripa looks at her car's tire which was punctured.Kripa hits her foot on the tire and looks around when a car comes by and stops.The cindow slips and and we see Aditya.

Ad:What happened?

K:The tire got punctured..

Ad:Want a lift?


She comes by side and sits and drives to her while Angad was looking at them from his car which was parked behind Kripa.He also leaves from there with Mishti.Aditya drops Kripa.

K:lets go inside...

Ad:ok Bye..

K:What you mean bye..come on..come inside..

Ad:Any other day..!

K:No You have to come..


K:No ifs and no buts..come on

Ad:Yes boss..

They both head inside.Gyatari greets Aditya and Surybhaan also sits with him and talks about business things.After some more time,Aditya leaves.Gayatri comes to Kripa.

G:Acha larka hai..

K:Yeh aap mujhe kyon baata rahin hain..

G:Look Kripa..i know you want to become a doctor...and now the day is not so far when you will become a you have to select a life partner so that if you become a doctor then we will marry you..

K:But Mama there is no one in my life..i need some time to choose someone..i still have to find..

Gayatri taps on her shoulder..

G:You don't need to find Kripa..he is right there in your life..the only thing is you can't see him....and i know you got the point that whom i talking about...

Gayatri Leaves while Kripa heads to her room.She thinks for a while about what her mother said but she ignores and takes a hot shower.After 5 months,there were still fighting between Kripa and Angad.Everytime Angad would talk bitter to Kripa but Aditya would handle the matter.Now Aditya was also having feelings for Kripa.But he knew that Kripa will never love him because once she has loved someone and that someone is none other than Angad.

The same day,Kripa came home and saw Gyatri looking at some pictures.

K:Hi mom..


K:What are you looking at..

G:uhh nothing just some pictures...

K:of whom?

G:Some boys..

K:For whom?

Kripa opens the refrigerator and drinks.

G:for my daughter Kripa..

Kripa spilts out all the water from her mouth.


G:Yeah..5 months ago..but you haven't told me about Adi..

K:There is nothing to tell about you of him..

G:ok then i will choose i boy for you..

K:No don't do that..


K:Ok give me some time..

G:Kripa..the last day i talked to you you said you need some time..and i gave 5 months are ago and you still need time..

K:ok i will seriously think about it..

G:ok last much time do you want?

K:5 dayz..

G(shocked):5 Dayz?


G:This is too much..i can't give you that much time..

K:Mom..this is not a game that i will just take 10 mins and tell you...its about my life...


To Be Continued..
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