Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 21)

hawoo Goldie
hawoo
hawoo

Joined: 14 February 2006
Posts: 1778

Posted: 31 May 2006 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
awe such a cute prt yaar!!!...it wuz awsome!!! Smile

nabz8888 Goldie
nabz8888
nabz8888

Joined: 31 December 2005
Posts: 1722

Posted: 31 May 2006 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
fantastic!! i loved the adi's line : no they r mad for each other!! so true!!! take care n cont. soon!!!
shahidlover24 IF-Sizzlerz
shahidlover24
shahidlover24

Joined: 30 October 2004
Posts: 10006

Posted: 31 May 2006 at 7:33pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by nabz8888

fantastic!! i loved the adi's line : no they r mad for each other!! so true!!! take care n cont. soon!!!

Awe...that part was awesome! And I totally agree with nabz! That line was awesomeTongue

sweetz_gurl Senior Member
sweetz_gurl
sweetz_gurl

Joined: 06 September 2005
Posts: 519

Posted: 04 June 2006 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shahidlover24

Originally posted by nabz8888

fantastic!! i loved the adi's line : no they r mad for each other!! so true!!! take care n cont. soon!!!

Awe...that part was awesome! And I totally agree with nabz! That line was awesomeTongue

Thank both of you..Tongue

sweetz_gurl Senior Member
sweetz_gurl
sweetz_gurl

Joined: 06 September 2005
Posts: 519

Posted: 04 June 2006 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
Part 20

Ad:No..They are mad for each other...

Saying that they both leave them alone still hugging.After some while,they both aparts from each other and smiles.They both leaves from there hand in hand.When they reached to their cars.

A:Aaj mein koi baat nahi sunne wala..

K:To phir?

A:Aaj mein tumhe apne parents se milwaon ga phir hum dono jald hi shaadi ker lein ge.

K:Ummm..Idea to acha hai..

A:to chalein..

K:per meri car..

A:No Probelm..tum apne driver ko bol deina ke le jaye..

K:Ok..

Angad and Kripa leaves to Khanna House.They both enters the house.Kripa was amazed by seeing the house so beautiful.

A:Teddy?

Teddy comes to them.

T:Yes Sir!

A:Where is Mom?

T:Sir Mr Khanna aur Mrs Khanna bahir meeting per gaye hain..

A:Ok..Sorry Kripa..Per no problem next time...

K:ok

A:Sup..mujhe bohut bhook lagi hai..

K:to?

A:Kuch khane ko bana do na..

K:Mujhe Khana banana nahi ata..

A:Nice joke..now c'mon i m hungry..go and make something..

K:Angad i am serious mujhe Khana banana nahi ata..

A:Nahi Ata.....WHAT??????????????

K:Kya hua?

A:Tu..tumhe khana nahi banana ata?

K:Nahi..is mein itna shock hone wali kon si baat hai?

A:Ager tumhe khana banana nahi ata to tumhe mom Shaadi ke liye pasand kaise karen gi.

K:Angad..tumhare ghar itne buttlers hai woh kam nahi ker sakte kya?

A:per emergency mein ager buttlers na hon to tumhi ko banana pare ga na..

K:Lekin..

A:Mujhe kuch sochne do..

Angad start pacing the room.After a while,he stops.

A:Kripa..tumhe Tea banani ati hai?

K:umm haan..

A:Theek hai please try now!

K:Ok..

ANgad and Kripa heads to kitchen.Kripa start making the tea.She takes out the milk and pours some in the kettle.Then she takes out Pati and put 2 big table spoon.Then she takes out Salt.

A:Kripa Sugar wahan--

K:Angad i know..now please let me make it..

A:But--

K:Please Shut up!!

Kripa just continue putting the salt in the tea.EVery time Kripa would put the salt in tea,Angad;s eyes would open wider and wider.Kripa pours the tea in a Cup and hands to Angad.

A:Kr..Kripa..i think we should leave..

K:But first taste it..

A:Ohh..you make very good tea now c'mon..

K:ANgad!!!

Angad takes the cup from her hesitately.He takes a sip and his eyes open more wider.

A:Aah..Very Good Tea..

K:But you haven't drank all yet..

A:Kripa..i don't drink Tea much thats why..

K:Ohh..But you should take another sip..

A:Kripa please wait i will be back..

Angad quickly runs from ther.Kripa was confused.

K:Itni Pyaar se banayi thi..

Kripa takes the cup and takes a sip.She just throws the tea out.

K:Yuck..God..It sucks Dead ...Poor Angad!

Angad comes back and sees Kripa all ready to go.

K:Sorry Angad!!

A:for what?

K:For that dirty tea..

A:its ok jaan..now lets go i'll show you the house.Angad shows Kripa the house and would flirt with her sometimes.After 2 hours,Naina entered the house.Angad and Kripa were coming down.

A:Hi Mom!

N:Hi..Who is this Girl?

A:Mom Meet Kripa..And Kripa meet my Mom..

K:Namaste Aunty..

N:Hmmm..

A:Mom..She is the girl of whom i was about to talk to you..

N:for what?

A:for my wedding..

Naina looks at her from her feets to her face and makes a face.

K:Ok Angad..its getting late..i should leave..

A:But--

N:Bye Beta..

Before Angad could say anything Kripa leave.

N:Angad yeh sab kya hai?

A:Mom i love her..

N:but i don't like her..

A:Why..she have evrything..she is rich..what else you want more?

N:nothing but that girl doesn't suits you..She is rich but look at her dressing style..looks like she is from a poor family..

A:Please mom..If i will marry then only with Kripa..and this is my last decision..

Saying that he leaves angrily from there.

To be Continued..
Keep Reading..

Sweetz Gurl
Pooja922 IF-Dazzler
Pooja922
Pooja922

Joined: 17 November 2005
Posts: 3175

Posted: 05 June 2006 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
ughhh i hope naina accepts her.....she always gets in the way...god...lol continue soon
shahidlover24 IF-Sizzlerz
shahidlover24
shahidlover24

Joined: 30 October 2004
Posts: 10006

Posted: 05 June 2006 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
Awe...poor Kripa! She couldn't cook LOL

But I seriously feel bad for Angad, I hope Naina understands and agrees soon so the couple doesn't have to go through more problems Ouch
sweetz_gurl Senior Member
sweetz_gurl
sweetz_gurl

Joined: 06 September 2005
Posts: 519

Posted: 06 June 2006 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Part 21

Saying that he leaves angrily from there.Next Morning,Angad comes down and heads to breakfast table.He sits on the table while Naina was about to serve him when Angad stopped her.

A:I can take by my own hand..

N:Angad why are you behaving like this?

A:aap ne hi majboor kiya hai mujhe aisa karne per..

N:Angad tum achi tarah jante ho ke tumhare aisa karne per mein tumhari shaadi os larki ke saath nahi manon gi..

A:Theek hai phir..aap ka breakfast aap hi ko mubarak...mein chala..

N:Where are you going?

A:out of this house..

N:Angad you can't go..

A:I can and you can't stop me..

N:Angad..

ANgad stands up and starts to leaves.

N:Angad you can't go..

Angad didn't listens to her and continues to walk.

N:Angad Stop!!

Angad reaches to the out door.

N:Angad stop..OK I agree..

Angad stops and turns around.

A:What did you said?

N:I said..that i agree...to kaho kab shaadi ki date pakki karwaon..

Angad runs to her and hugs her.

A:You are best mom..you are greatest..

On the other hand,we see Kripa going in Bose Mansion.She rings the bell.Damini opens the door.

D:Aray Kripa beta aao under aao..Itne dino baad kaise ana hua?

K:Woh Aunty..Prithvi hai?

D:Haan..Prithvi beta dekho kon aya hai?Tum betho woh ata hi hoga..mein chalti hon i have to leave for the meeting bye..

K:Bye..

Prithvi was coming down when his eye fell on her.

P:Kri..pa?

K:hi Prithvi how are you doing?

P:What are you doing here?

K:Prithvi you always told me to forgave you...today i wanted to forgive you..

P:Really?

K:Yes..and Angad and i patched up..

Prithvi was heartbroken.

P:Oh I see..nice to hear..

K:Prithvi i want my old Friendship back...but we should only be friends..

P:Yeah sure..

K:Ok so Prithvi,can we go together to Holward Hospital..

Prithvi smiles and they both leaves together but in separate cars.Soon they both reached there.Kripa and Prithvi came out of their cars and entered the Hospital together.Angad was waiting for Kripa when he saw her coming with Prithvi.Angad was shocked and rushed to her.

A:Hi Kripa..

K(Delighted):Hi..

A:Kripa where were you..we were waiting for you now c'mon..

K:Ok..C'mon Prithvi..

Angad was shocked and also jealoused.They all got their things which a doctor gets and they were told to first operate a dead body then they will be able to operate a real living body.They all goes to separate operation Threatre.They all comes out after 4 hours and were done successfully.They all were really happy.

A:Kripa this is my first operation..

K:Mine is not second..

A:Ohh Kripa i am so happy..

K:Me too..

A:Kripa i want to talk about something really important...

P:Kripa..Where are you..

K:Wait a sec Angad i'll be back..

A:But Kripa wait..

Kripa leaves tto where Prithvi was calling her.They start talking and then leaves.Angad was boiling that Kripa leaved without informing him.He just leaves from there angrily and drives to his home in full speed.

To Be Continued..
Keep Reading..

Sweetz Gurl

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
A LOT LIKE LOVE#2-part 40 pg 128(LAST PART)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 142 143

Author: barkha_90   Replies: 1140   Views: 581757

barkha_90 1140 581757 05 May 2012 at 3:10am by TANVI_SEXY
Realization Of Love (DMG) Completed!

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 90 91

Author: reemz.malik   Replies: 726   Views: 199087

reemz.malik 726 199087 20 February 2012 at 1:55pm by HR-DMG4life
may be(mayur ff)part last part-page 27

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 27 28

Author: adi_gupta   Replies: 223   Views: 96823

adi_gupta 223 96823 06 September 2009 at 5:26am by Yoshita0411
LOVE - AA ff PART - part 9 updt pg8

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

Author: *~sneha~*   Replies: 71   Views: 34059

*~sneha~* 71 34059 30 August 2008 at 8:34am by teenorchid
Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 25 26

Author: zinny.xo   Replies: 207   Views: 34810

zinny.xo 207 34810 06 June 2007 at 3:06pm by zinny.xo

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index