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Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 17)

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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
Part 13

After College,Kripa and Mishti were going towards their car.

M:Kripa i m really really excite for the medical camp....its like a dream come true..i wanted to be doctor and want to attend patients..and i want to help poors...and now..there is no end of my happiness..

K(with a fake smile) too..

M:Ok so its getting late..i have to pack my bags and some what time we r going on the camp?

K:uhh 9:30 we have to catch the bus..

M:Oh yeah..i just forgot in my happiness well thanx..see u..bye


Kripa start walking towards her car when strong pairs of arms pulls her.Kripa was about to shout when a strong hand covers her mouth and it was none other than Angad.Kripa was trying to free herself.

A(trying to contol her):Kripa..i want to talk to u..i know u won't let me talk to u if i not stop u..and this is the way to stop u...

Kripa bites his hand and Angad takes his hand back as hurted.


K:Be away from me...don't try to come close to me..


K:Don't say a single word...

Kripa just leaves to her car and drives the car quickly from there.On her way she cries her heart out and finally reaches home.She wipes her tears and enters the house.She runs to her mother and hugs her.


She twirls her around.

G:Aray ye kya ker rahi ho..

K(excitedly:Mom..i m going to medical camp..

Gayatri gets happy for her.

G:I m proud of u..and i hope u do ur best for the poors... now i have to go..i have to pack my clothes...i have to leave at 9:30..

G:What!!u r leaving today...and u r telling me today..

K:Mom i myself knew today..

G:ok now go and get ur stuff ready..ok

Kripa kisses her mom and runs to her room.


Kripa enters her room and locks the door.She leans towards the door and start crying.Only she knew that how she controlled herself downstairs.She wipes her tears and promises herself to not to cry for a selfish man.Kripa takes out a suitcase and opens the closet.She throws few clothes in the suitcase and closes it.

At 9:30 PM,we hears horns and Kripa in hurry checking the last time if she has forgot something or not.She quickly heads downstairs and takes the bleessings of her parents.Kripa was about to go when Gayatri stops her.

K:What happen?

G:Kripa ye dahi shukar khati jao...


G:Aray chup ker...Bhagwaan sab acha kare ga..

She feeds Kripa and Kripa runs from there.Outside we see a bus horning when they see Kripa,all start cheering.Kripa gets in and sees everyone.She sees a seat empty beside Angad and two seats empty in front of him.So she decides to seat in front of him.Angad thought that she will sit beside him but doesn't.He kept starring at her when the bus again stops at a house.A girl comes and hugs a classmate boy.

Girl:Oh no..yahan koi two seat aik satah khali hi nahi hai..

Boy:No Problem..kisi se request ker lete hain..

The girl goes to Kripa..


K:oh hi sonali..

S:Kripa..can u sit at back with Angad..i and that boy want to sit together..

K:Sorry Sonali..please request someone else..


Sonali goes to Angad who was watching that all scene.

S:Angad..can u--

A:Yeah sure..u both can sit here..

Angad gets up and moves ahead and sits beside Kripa.

K(Shocked and angrily):Angad this is my seat..

A:Is here written ur name..

A:Then..i can sit wherever i want..u have any problem..

K:No!..i mean yes..this is my seat u can go and sit with someone else..

A:Kripa..look there is only one seat left..

K:So what..go and sit there..

A:but u r forgetting that Prithvi is also about to come..what if i go and sit there and Prithvi wil come and sit in my place...he will not let u sit in peace..

Kripa who was listening him had no other chance but to let him sit.She just turns her face to other side and Angad sits back happy and smilling.Then it was Prithvi's house turn,Prithvi and Mishti comes in the bus but finds only one seat.Mishti runs to that seat.

P:hey..where am i gonna sit.. chance to sit here..but i have another chance..


The driver winks and the bus start.After some time we see Prithvi sitting on the roof of the bus angrily.Then it was the Josh's house(Yes i made a change,Please don't mind).Josh comes and sees no seat and the driver again winks.Prithvi and Josh sits on the roof angrily.Josh at times would bug Prithvi which irritate him.Kripa in the midway sleeps.Her head falls on Angad's shoulder who looks at her beauty.He couldn't takes his eyes off her.He kept looking at her when the bus gets a jatka and Kripa wakes up.The bus was still going.Kripa gets embarass that she was sleeping on his shoulder and again turns her face.

Next morning,they reached a hotel where they were staying.All students comes out as the Professor called the names.They all were tired and heads inside.The students stands with their friends when the professor comes and hands the keys to everyone.Angad who was standing with Josh and Kripa was standing just behind him.So the Professor comes and hands the keys to Josh and Angad and then Kripa.So their rooms were 204 Josh , 205 Angad , 206 Kripa and 207 Mishti and so on.They head towards their room.They all were tired and the camp was starting at 1 Pm Morning and the time was 8 o'clock early morning.So they all thought of rest.Some wants to spent the time together,Some wants to discuss about something.So some heads to the elevater and they were Some girls who took the another elevater.Kripa was also about to go on that but the elevater closed.Now the next elevater came and Kripa had no ther chance but to go there with ANgad in the same elevater.Angad kept starring at her and Kripa was also getting irritated.

Kripa finally speak up.

K:Do u have any problem?


K:Then stop starring at me..

A:But i--

K:Don't say a single word..

The elevater opens and Kripa storms out.

J(To Angad)What a girl man...Angad ko itna kadhwa jawab de gayi..

Saying that she start laughing.Angad looks at him angrily and he stops laughing.They both also goes for check the room.Kripa opens the door and sees all the room.It was a nice room,she liked it all.Kripa goes to check the bathroom when Angad also comes to the same room.He throws her bags on the bed.

A:Nice room!

At the same time,Kripa comes out and yells.

K:What u r doing here..

A:What u r doing here?

K:Just get out..

A:why should i..this is my room..

K:This is my room..

A:No Mine..


A:Mine , Mine and Mine..

Listening their yelling voice,a manager comes running in.

Manager:Any Problem Mam!

K:This man came into my room and start yelling that this is his room..

Manager:And ur Problem Sir!

A:This is my room..and i have the key..but she is saying that this is her's

Manager:Let me check ur both keys..

The Manager checks the keys.

Manager:Sorry Sir!we gave u the wronge key...This room is 206..and ur room is 205 just beside it..

The Manager gives the original keys of the room and Angad snatches the keys and goes out.The Manager also leaves.


Saying that she changes and sleeps for sometime.

To Be Continued..

Sweetz Gurl

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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
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cont soooooon
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lolz funny but sad prt plz cont soon Smile
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hey terrific part yaar....your fanfics are just awesome....plz cotninue Wink
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nice part wow nice fight plz do continue
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hew fantastic part!!!cont soon
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