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Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 14)

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Part 11

Angad gets out of his car and start walking on the streets.He thinking that what if Kripa will know the truth..what she will do with him.He has done wronge to her.He has played with her feelings.He was just worried about the coming days which will bring just pain.He don't know why he was thinking all this.

He kept walking and all of a sudden Kripa comes in front of her.



K:kyon kya hua..kya mujhe tumse milne ke liye kya permission chahiye..

She hugs Angad but Angad doesn't hugs her back.


K:Shh kuch mat kaho...kash yeh waqt yehi tham jaye..


A(in a sad tone):Kripa mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai..

K:i know...I love u too

A:Nahi..Kripa woh...mein..woh

K:Woh mein hi karte raho ge ya aage bhi kuch bolo ge..

A:Kripa i played with ur feelings....

Kripa was confused as well shocked.

A:Kripa these all was a part of challenge with Prithvi...i just wanted to prove him that every girl loves me....I m sorry Kripa i real--

Before he can complete his sentence,he gets a tight slap from her.And in the mean time she disappears while leaving Angad in the same position sweating.Angad opens his eyes and sees no one.He breathes a relief because it was all his imagination and start walking.He finally reaches home and her mother sees her coming inside.

N:Angad..tum aaj college nahi gaye.. aaj koi important lecture nahi tha is liye mein..

N:aur mein kya sun rahi hon ke tum mall mein the..kisi larki ke sath..

A(opens his eyes wide):What!!mom yeh aap kya keh rahi ho...mein aur mall.....mein to suba se college mein tha how will i be in the mall..

N:Theek hai..per don't forget ke tumhe is baar good marks leine hain..

Angad just leaves to his room.On the other hand,Kripa was flying in air.There was no ending of her happiness.Her foots were not on the earth.She didn't know when someone loves a person feels do much happy and everthung looks nice.She quickly goes to her house and to her room without saying a single word to anyone.She closes her room door.At First,She stood their for a while then she threw her sandles from her foot and went near her sound system.She on's the radio and start dancing herself on soft music.She was lost in herself.Just imagination of Angad were coming in her mind and she doesn't want to think something else.Kripa stops dancing.

K(to herself):What m doing here..i should be with Angad..Yeah..!!!!!!

Kripa runs to change.While Angad was in his room when Prithvi comes to his room.

P:Hi Angad..



A:oh nothing..i just thought that she came..

P:Angad ab to tumhe Kripa ke ane ki khabar bhi hone lagi hai....

A:What do u mean?

P:Angad what do u think of urself haan..u think that if u will not tell someone then the other will also not know about what is going between u and Kripa?

A:What is going between us?

P:Oh c'mon Angad stop behaving like u don't get what m talking about..

A:Prithvi meri samajh mein bilkul nahi aa raha tum kya keh rahe ho...kya ho raha hai hum dono ke beech kuch bhi to nahi..

P:to tum ye mante ho ke tum Kripa se se pyaar karte ho?

Angad turns to the window sight opposite to Prithvi.

A:What rubbish..yeh tum kya keh rahe ho..

P:Don't u love Kripa..


P:Just say it Angad why don't u admit it..

A(Shouts):Prithvi i don't love Kripa...if remember then this is only a part of our u get that...I don't love her!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad closes his eyes.

A(in a low voice):Yes!I love her..

He said it in a low voice so that Prithvi can't hear it.but after a while when he doesn't hears Prithvi's voice,he turns around and sees Kripa standing behind him in tears.Angad was shocked.Prithvi was standing beside her with his head down.Angad don't know what to do or what to say.He moves forward to clear her when Kripa stops him.


He was about to touch her.

K(Tearfully):Don't...don't Angad...don't touch me...just don't...God...why didn't i thought that a flirter can't be a human who have heart and feelings...Why didn't i thought that was all a drama in the mall for me......And u Prithvi...u betrayed my trust...u was my friend and u...u ...just forget it...just..just.

Kripa just leaves from there running out of the house.Kripa runs to her car and cries.Angad sees her from his window.He wanted to go to her and explain everything but on one sight he had done wrong to her.So he let her cry.Kripa cries very much.

K(Thinking):Kyon...kyon...kyon mein samajh nahi payi ke ye sab aik dhoka tha...

Kripa gets some flashes of Angad and her.Then when they were together for comleting the Cansyment.

K:Aaj hi mujhe mera pyaar mila tha...aur aaj hi mujh se wapis le liya..kyon bhagwaan kyon....ager alag hi karna tha to milwaya kyon...

She continues to cry and all of a sudden it start to rain.Kripa loved rain but today she hate it.But especially she hate the person who betrayed her,Angad.

To Be Continued..

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Sweetz Gurl

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Posted: 19 April 2006 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
mindblowing, too good but poor angad
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Posted: 19 April 2006 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
its great
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Posted: 19 April 2006 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
awwww omg poor kripa yaar i feel bad for angad too though cuz he does love her now....contineu soon Wink
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awesome plz cont soon
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SAd part, continue soon!
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Posted: 19 April 2006 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
that was greatttttttt
very nicely written cont sooooon Clap Clap Smile
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cont soon i cant wait till a-k

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