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Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 12)

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Part 10

Kripa didn't replied to him but just blushes and runs away from him.Angad was left clueless that why she ran from here.Did she not love me or what else?

Kripa runs from there away and all of a sudden the bell rings and she head towards her class.When she enter her class,the first thing she saw was Angad starring at her and only one seat which was beside Angad.Kripa quietly goes to her seat and sits.The teacher comes in the class and start explaining them while Angad's eyes were only on Kripa and Kripa was getting irritated.Their both concentration was not in the explaination of the Sir but was thinking about each other.The Sir sees them,Angad looking at Kripa and Kripa's face down at her book.Sir goes to them.


Angad quickly sits properly.

S:So what should we do if a heart attacked person's heart is not beating so how we should try to pump hi heart.Tell me the whole process..

Angad was quiet because he doesn't know the answer because he didn't listened to him.

S:Kripa u know the answer..

Kripa was also clueless about it.

S:i think u both may leave the class right now...

K:Sir i m--

S:No excuses Kripa..the door is there u both can go..

Kripa grabs her notebooks and went outside while ANgad also follows her.Kripa was walking very fast towards her car when Angad comes running to her.

A(still walking):Kripa..Kripa wait...i m was my fault...tumhe meri waja se class se bahar nikala gaya i m reall sorry..

Kripa kept walking.

K:Angad its ok..

Kripa was about to open her car's door when Angad grabbed her arm.

A:Kripa!!u haven't gave the answer yet..

K(trying to ignore the eye contact):what answer?

A:look into my eyes..

K:ANgad leave me...i have to go...this is not the right time....

A:So what...i want the answer of my confession of love...

Kripa just pushes him and gets into her car and drives off while Angad smiles evilly.Kripa goes home an dhead inside.

K:Hi Mom..

G:Hi beta..chalo jaldi se fresh ho jao mein khana laga deti hon..aaj tumhare papa bhi kaam se jaldi aa gaye..



K:mom aap khana lagayiye mein abhi ayi..

Kripa runs to her bed and freshen ups.She quickly changes her clothes to more confort clothes and head downstairs to the dinning table.

K:Hi Papa!!

Kripa runs to him. is my sweet Angel..


Kripa sits beside her Father and starts eating.In the mean time,her cell rings.She picks it up.

K(on cell):Hello..

A:Kripa u haven't answered my love..


Surybhaan looks at her.

K(in a low voice):I don't want to talk to u now...

Saying that she puts off the call and start eating while Surybhaan cleans her throat.

S:Uhh Kripa...Mujhe aur Gayatri ko tum se kuch baat karni thi..

K:Haan kehiye..

G:Beta tere liye rishta aya hai...aur--

K(interrupts):OK..ho gayi aap ki baat...ab mera answer bhi sun lijiye ke mujhe shaadi abhi nahi karni..

S:Theek hai jaisa tum kaho..

G(furiously):jaise tum kaho??aap theek to hain na surybhaan...Aap hi ne is larki ko bigadh rakha hai..

S:Ager Kripa shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar nahi to hum kyon ose force ker rahe hain..


K:Mama aap ki beti doctor banna chahti hai aur doctors ki parhai itni asaan nahi hoti..

G:Theek hain....lekin beta mujhe har waqt teri fikar lagi rehti hai..

K:Mama..aap tension mat lijiye..dekhna aap ki beti ki shaadi bohut hi handsome aur khushnaseeb insaan se hogi..

Saying that the three of them laughs and Kripa finishes her food and head upstairs.Kripa now thinks about what Angad was saying.She don't know what to say him or not.She lays on her bed and closes her eyes.She fell asleep because of tiredness.

Day Six!!!!

Next Morning,Kripa gets up and head towards the bathroom to take a shower.She comes out after some time and don't feel like going to college.As today was not a important lecture.She knows that if she went to college then Angad will irritate her to answer him.She sits on her bed and her cell rings.SHe picks it uo thinking Angad.

K(on cell):Now what do u want?

M:What happen..this is Mishti..

K:Oh Mishti sorry i thought that it was someone else..

M:Hmm so where r u..i mean tum college nahi ayi..i was waiting..

K:Woh Mishti aaj mera dil nahi ker raha ane ko..kyon ke aaj koi important lecture bhi nahi hai..

M:Ok..then i m coming to ur house..


M:yeah..then we will go somewhere what say?


Mishti puts off the phone and we see Angad and Mishti thumbing each other best of luck.Mishti goes to Kripa's house and knocks on her house door.Kripa opens the door.

K:Oh hi Mishti..come in..

She lets her come in and leads her to her room.

K:well this is my room..

M:this is beautiful..


M:Ok so get ready..


M:Kripa..c'mon lets go somewhere..i don't feel like sitting at the same place..

K:but where?

M:C'mon how about shopping..because i want to do some shopping for bhai and mom..

K:ok..i'll get ready..

Kripa quickly gets ready and they goes for shopping.They stop at a mall in separate cars.They both gets out of their car when they see someone at the top of the building of mall.

K:Hey Mishti..look at him..


K:there at the top..

M:Oh my that Angad..

K:yeah i think so..

A(Yells from the top):Kripa r u not going to answer my confession?

K(embarassly yells):Angad come down..don't make a scene...

A(yells again):Kripa just tell me what m asking..Do u Love me or not..

K(Yells):Angad the people are looking at us...Just come down..

A(Yells):Ok if u will not tell the answer then i will come down straightly by jumping from here..

K(yells again):Noo...Doon't do that..

M:Kripa just say it..he can die...he is going crazy..

K:Mishti i can't...u see..he is mad..

A(Yells):So what have u decided....I can't die day by day by not listening the answer so its better that to die just one time..

K(Yells):Angad please i beg u..please come down.....

A(Yells):No..I won't come down..

K(Yells angrily):Ok...then just stuck there ur entire life just asking me that..and now i m also not going to say anything...welll now i m going to shopping inside the mall..if want then u can sure die..i'll not force u to come down.....Go ahead its not my place...SHe moves and goes inside.

A(To himself):God...My Trick attacked on me....This girl is so stubborn..

On the other hand Kripa and Mishti who were shopping,hears Angad's screaming voice.

A:Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Kripa and Mishti ran outside and so the people.When they went outside,there was no one.Kripa and Mishti looked around but found no one.All of a sudden a voice comes.

A Voice:Mar Jaava Jaava

Mishti and Kripa turns around and saw Angad.

A:Mar Jaava Mit Jaava Mar Jaava     (Angad comes from Behind)
Mar Jaava Mit Jaava Mar Jaava

Ishq Mein Dil Kya Jaan Bhi Naam Tere Kar Jaava
Mar Jaava Jaava
Mar Jaava Mit Jaava Mar Jaava
Mar Jaava Mit Jaava Mar Jaava      (He dances with other Boys)

Ishq Mein Dil Kya Jaan Bhi Naam Tere Kar Jaava
Mar Jaava Jaava

Ho Ban Gaya Tera Main Chand Mulakaato Mein
Tu Hi Samaayi Hain Mere Khayalato Mein
Pher Nigaahein Na Apne Deewane Se
Haar Na Maanunga Main Dil Aazmaane Se
Teri Mohabbat Aur Nasha
Mainu Bada Tarsawa
Mar Jaava Jaava

Mar Jaava Mit Jaava Mar Jaava
Mar Jaava Mit Jaava Mar Jaava     (Kripa who also wants to say her feelings remain quiet)
Ishq Mein Dil Kya Jaan Bhi Naam Tere Kar Jaava
Mar Jaava Jaava

K:Rabba Mere Rabba Mera Dil Dhadkaaye Tu
Mere Ishaare Kyon Samajh Na Paaye Tu    (Finally Kripa start singing and walks around Angad)
Tere Zidd Ke Aage Toh Haari Main Haari Main
Jaan Gayi Yaara Teri Bekaraari Mein
Sun Dildaara Maine Toh Chun Li Teri Ravan
Mar Jaava Jaava

Mar Jaava Mit Jaava Mar Jaava
Mar Jaava Mit Jaava Mar Jaava
Ishq Mein Dil Kya Jaan Bhi Naam Tere Kar Jaava
Mar Jaava Jaava

A:Mar Jaava Mit Jaava Mar Jaava
Mar Jaava Mit Jaava Mar Jaava....     (They both Hug each other)

The song ends while they both were hugging.In the mean time,Prithvi was passing by who saw the rush and head towards the rush and saw ANgad and Kirpa hugging each other and the people cheering for them.He gets furious and grabs Angad by her arm and takes tim to his car.

A:Prithvi ye sab..

P:Angad tum apna challenge pura ker rahe the ya tum sach mein Kripa ko chahne lage ho..

Angad remain quiet.

P:Angad humne dono ne decide kiya tha ke tumhare liye Kripa ke liye koi feelings nahi honi chahiye..right..

Angad was still quiet.

P:Angad aaj tumhare 6 din pura hote hain...kal hi tumhara challenge khatam hoga right....os ke baad mein tumhe Kripa ke saath bardasht nahi karonga...

A(seriously but sad):Theek hai..kal Kripa mujhe I Love You bole gi...tum kal mere ghar aa jana..


ANgad gets out of his car and start walking on the streets.He thinking that what if Kripa will know the truth..what she will do with him.He has done wronge to her.He has played with her feelings.He was just worried about the coming days which will bring just pain.He don't know why he was thinking all this.

To Be Continued..

(Song from the movie Aashig Banaya Aapne,Mar Jaava Mit Jaava)
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Preview:The days of Hateness for Angad from Kripa.
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Sweetz Gurl 

Edited by sweetz_gurl - 18 April 2006 at 8:56am

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