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Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 11)

nabz8888 Goldie

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Posted: 06 April 2006 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
a very sweet n cute part!!! do cont. soon, yay!!! angad's falling for kripa!!!

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nice part plz continue
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gr8 part!
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its great
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hey continue soonn great part!! Wink
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amazing parts
cont soon
sweetz_gurl Senior Member

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Part 9

She folds her chart and closes her books and place them at her table.She picks up all those Papers and puts them in between a book while Angad also does the same and hold them together.


K:haan chalo..

They leaves to a restaurant and eats their lunch and dinner together.Angad was forgetting that this was all a part of his challenge.They both drives to a near restaurant and enters inside.They orders their food when Kripa and Angad at the same time reaches for the spoon which was places in between.Their hands were on each other while their eyes stucked into each other.Their eyes locked,the world was like stop for them as they saw into each others eyes.The more shocking was ANGAD WAS LOOKING INTO KRIPA"S EYES PASSIONATELY NOT WITH HIS CHALLENGER SIDE!!!In the mean time a waiter was passing with a juice in a tray in his hand when his tray slips from his hand and the juice splashes on Kripa.Kripa and Angad gets out of their trance and looks at the waiter.

A(Angrily):What is this!!!

W:Sorry Sir!

A:What sorry--

K(Interrupts):Its ok Angad..You can go!!

The waiter leaves.

K:Mein washroom se ho ati hon..

A:Theek hai..i m waiting..

Kripa leaves to the washroom.She quickly cleans her dress where the juice was splashed.when Kripa was done,She comes out and bumps into someone and was about to fall when the same person holds her and he was none other than Angad!!Kripa's eyes were tightly shut.She slowly opens her eyes and sees a lost Angad.Their eyes again locks into each other.A lady was about to enter the washroom when she sees both of them and clears her throat.

A Lady:Ahem ahem..

Angad and Kripa quickly comes out of their world and feel little embarass.

A:uhh Sorry!!


They don't know what they were saying but to utter again a word they quitely walked towards their table.Their food was also arrived and they were damn hungry.Without saying anything,they start eating.Mean while,they would glance each other and when they see the other is also seeing then they would quickly takes their eyes on the food.After dinner,they both went outside.Kripa manage to say something.

K:Uh Thanx for the lovely dinner..

A:My Pleasure..


A:yeah come lets go..

They both drive to Kripa's house with a complete silence.They were both dreaming about each other and were lost in their own world.Finally Kripa reached her house.

K:Uhh thanx..

A:For what?

Kripa don't know what to say.

K:Uhh just..just for nothing..

Saying that she runs to her room.While Angad smiles to himself and drives to his house.He was really forgetting the challenge.On the other hand Kripa quickly runs to her room and locks it.She breaths heavily and smiles.She herself don't know what she was feeling for Angad.She runs to her bed and lays.She keeps on thinking about him.

K(thinking):Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai...mein Angad ke liye aise feel kyon ker rahi hon.....Kya mein...nahi aisa kaise ho sakta hai..

While Kripa was thinking this,Angad on the other hand enetrs his house smiling.Naina and Kartick were shocked to see him like this.

N:Angad..kya hua itna muskara kyon rahe ho..

A:huh!!oh hi..uhhh mein ghar kab pohoncha..

He start thinking when he reached home while Kartick and Naina were confused at his behaviour.Angad just leaves to his room while making a face like he was thinking.Angad enters his room and locks it.

A:Phew!!Shuker hai..aaj to bach gaya warna itne sare sawalo ke jawab dene parte..

He runs to his bed and lays.He start thinking about Kripa's first day in college and then today when she fell into his arms and her eyes were tightly shut.Just that imagination maked Angad smile.He kept on thinking that why he was thinking all this.

A(thinking):Kahi mujhe Kripa se Pyaar to nahi ho gaya!!!

He keeps on thinking while Kripa was also thinking the same.She can't sleep just because of Angad's flashes in her mind.Whenever she close her eyes only Angad's face comes infront of her.

K:Kya mein Angad se Py--

Interrupted by Someone:Haan tum mujh se Pyaar karti ho..

Kripa was shocked and turned around to see Angad.

K(in a low voice):ANGAD!!

A:haan mein...hairaan hone ki zaroorat nahi...

Kripa goes near to him.

K:ANgad tum yahan kaise aye..koi dekh le ga to..

Angad puts his finger on her lips.

A:ssshhhh Do Pyaar karne walon ko koi milne se nahi rok sakta..

Kripa was even more shocked.

A:Kyon Kripa?Kya tum mujh se pyaar nahi karti...Do u not love me?


Kripa don't want any eye contact thats why she was looking at the ground.

A(Angrily):Woh woh kya..meri Ankhon mein dekho aur kaho..

Kripa looks into his angry eyes.

K:Angad........I..Love You..

Angad was still for a while then he just hugs her.

A:I love u too..

They both hugs each other while We see Kripa's face and then when Kripa looks up,she sees no one there.Kripa was shocked and blushes.She quickly runs to the bed and sleeps.

Day FIVE!!

Next Morning,Kripa was still sleeping as today she has to go to college for her classes.Kripa slowly opens her eyes and looks at the clock.In the mean time,her eyes opens wider and she runs to the washroom to take a shower.She quickly comes out and takes out a long red fitted skirt and a white top.Kripa her hairs up in a pony while few strands of her hairs comes out.She wears red earings touching her bare shoulder.She applies a little light red gloss and quickly grabs her Cansyment and some books and head downstairs.

K:Good Morning Mom!!

G:Good Morning...Aray kaha chali breakfast to karti jao..dekho to meri beti kitni patli ho gayi hai..tum roz breakfast ke bina chali jati ho..

K:Mom Doctor banna asaan nahi hai..

G:pata hai pata hai..lekin kam se kam apni sehat ak to khayal rakho...Khana tum waqt per to khati nahi ho aur banne chali ho doctor..

K:Mom jab mein doctor ban jaon gi tab ji bhar ker jo khilana hai khila deina filhaal mein ja rahi hon bye..


But before she can say abything else Kripa left.She quickly drives to her college.While Angad reached there already when Prithvi coes to him.

P:Hi Buddy..

A:Oh Hi..

P:Well kal tum kaha the..mein sara din tumhara cell per phone ker ke thak gaya..

A:oops sorry woh mein Kripa ke ghar per tha Cansyment ke liye to shayed phone off ker diya ho meine..

Prithvi was very jealous after hearing this when They both see Kripa entering the college.Prithvi was about to say something to Angad when he started walking towards Kripa.Prithvi was even more jealous.

A:Hi Kripa..

K:Oh Hi...c'mon we'r getting late..for classes..


While he was saying Kripa drags ANagd to the class.Prithvi was about to talk with Kripa when he sees Kripa dragging him in the class.He was also disappointed from Kripa and then left to his friends.At lunch time,Kripa and Angad were going to the canteen.

P:Kripa mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai..

K:Haan kaho..

P:Yahan nahi..chalo mere sath..

He holds Kripa from her Hand and takes her where no one was there.Angad also follows but hides in behind a pillar.

K:Kaho Prithvi kya baat hai..

P:Kripa mein tumhe kitne dino se dekh raha hon..tum mujh se baat kyon nahi karti ho..baat to door tum meri taraf dekhti bhi nahi..

K:Prithvi aisi koi baat nahi hai..

P(Sadly):Aisi hi baat hai jab se tum Angad se mili ho tab se tum mujh jaise bhool hi gayi ho..

K:I m Sorry Prithvi..mera matlab tumhe hurt karne ke liye nahi tha...I m soo sorry..!!

P:Its ok..

Kripa hugs Prithvi while Angad's blood start boiling.They both apart.

K:Now please Smile!!!

Prithvi smiles..

P:Chalo canteen chalte hain bohut bhook lagi hai..

K:theek hai chalo..

They both start walking when Angad holds Kripa's arm and puts his hand on Kripa's mouth so she won't scream.She pulls her towards him to face him.



K(In a low voice) sab?

A:Kya lagti ho tum meri...haan kya lagti ho...din raat mere khayalon per chayi rehti ho...

Kripa was confused.

A:Why don't u understand damn it..that i love u..

Kripa was shocked...

A:Yes!!Yes i love u..

Kripa didn't replied to him but just blushes and runs away from him.Angad was left clueless that why she ran from here.Did she not love me or what else?

To Be Continued..

Sweetz Gurl

Edited by sweetz_gurl - 11 April 2006 at 2:59pm
kashish805 Senior Member

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It was very cute Embarrassed plzcont. as son as possible.
Kashish Tongue

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