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Dil Jo Na Keh Saka:Fan-Fic(Part 42,Pg 52) (Page 10)

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dat was cool Smile

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i loved it!!!i mean the song choice was perfect n i could actually imagine them playing holi!!!! cont. soon!! i also like the fact that prithvi will probably develope feelings for kripa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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That was Such an AWESOME part! Cont. soon!
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amazing plz continue
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Part 8

Angad and Kripa both dance with each other on dhol.All were dancing like crazy and spreading colours all pver the place.Prithvi first stopped and saw Angad and Kripa dancing and someone in his heart he felt jealous but again continued dancing.

At Evening,all start leaving.Angad and Kripa were still busy in applying each other colours and seeing this Prithvi was getting Angad in nerves.

P(Thinks):No..Why will Angad feel for Kripa...He is just completing his challenge...but i don't think he is really on his challenge...God...What am i talking about...Is i m falling for her or what?????

He kept on asking questions to himself when Angad and Kripa comes to him.

K:Well Prithvi i should leave now...its getting late..



She snaps his fingers in front of him..

K:Aee Helloo..where r u..!!!

P:Huh..??oopss sorry...

K:What happen..?

P:oh that just nothing...i was just thinking...nothing else..

K:oh i m leaving...Meet u day after tomorrow..

P:Day After Tomorrow??

K:Yeah..u forgot that tomorrow is also a holiday..

P:Oh God..Sorry i forgot..SO Take care..

K:u too..

P:And when u reach ur house firstly clean ur face because ur parents will see u like this they will probably not identify u that u r their daughter?

K:Prithvi uuu..

Angad and Prithvi laughs.

P:Sorry just kidding..

K:u better be..Bye..

A:Bye Prithvi...


They both leaves from Prithvi's house.ANgad and Kripa reaches outside.

A:So Miss Kripa Sharma..Kal ke koi planning wannings hain..?

K:oh no...mein aaj bohut thak gayi hon to kal rest karongi aur mera aik Cansyment hai ose pura karongi..

A:oh the same one about Nasal search how much pharynx are there in Nasal?


A:God..i also have to do that..can i come tomorrow to ur house to help u..?

K:yeahs sure why not..

A:Great!then meet u tomorrrow...

K:ok bye..


They both leaves to their houses.Kripa reaches home and quickly goes to her room to take shower so that the colours may not get dark to her skin.On The other hand ANgad reaches home and runs to stairs when Naina stops him.


Angad just stops there where he was and looks behind.

N:Meine tumhe kaha tha ke jaldi ana..aur zara apni ghari(watch)mein dekho ke kitne baj rahe hain..

A(mumbering):Filhaal to meri band bajne wali hai..


A:Uhh nothing..woh mom mein ghari pehen ke nahi gaya..

N:Angad tumhe waqt ki koi parwa nahi hai...first look at urself in the mirror then talk to me...

A:woh mom Holi khelne ke liye rang to chahiye na..

N(talking in disgust):GoDD!!!tum humesha baat ko palat dete ho..mein tumhe waqt ki baat ker rahi thi aur ye holi beech mein kaha se aa gayi..

A:Sorry mom ainda aisa nahi hoga..

N:Angad humein Pooja ke liye jana tha...aur sab tumhare bare mein pooch rahe the..

A:ohh Mom..dikne mein kaisi hai Pooja..


Angad runs from there to his room while Naina also leaves.Angad quickly goes to take a shower.At Kripa's room,she comes out and slips on her bed.Kripa looks down and sees a paper.She picks it up and reads.

Hi Kripa,

You Don't know me but i know you very well . Kripa, Angad is playing with ur emotions.He is not the right person.He plays with every girls emotions and you r also the target of him.Please Kripa,Be away from him or else you will feel guilty for what u r doing.Think about my every word which i have said to you and thats the truth.It was my duty to tell u and now its all upon you.!!

Ur Well Wisher.

Kripa closes the letter in shock.She didn't know what to do next.The words just echo's in her ears"Angad is playing with ur emotions"Kripa closes her eyes but again the words echo's in her ears"He is not the right person.He plays with every girls emotions and you r also the target of him"Kripa just tears the paper and throws it away.

K(thinks):No ANgad aisa nahi ker sakta...ager ose kuch bhi karna hota to pehle hi mujhe chor deta..itne dino tak mere saath na rehta...

Kripa all night thinks about it and soon falls asleep.

Day Four!!!

Next Morning,We see Kripa collecting some things.She opens her closet and takes her college bag out.She takes out 2 big Books and places it on the bed.She takes out a Big size chart and a pencil which she placed under her hairs.After some time Angad also reaches there.He was holding some books,a chart and many things to compose his Cansyment.He manages to ring the bell.Gayatri opens the door.

G:Jee.!!kis se milna hai aap ko?

A:Aahh..woh mera naam Angad hai..mein Kripa ka dost hon..woh mera bhi Cansyment hai is liye mein bhi aa gaya..

G:oh under ao Beta..


Angad comes in and was amazed by seeing the whole house.

G:Beta Kripa ka room uper first room left hai..

A:ok thanx..

Angad runs to stairs and reaches her room.He doesn't knocks the room because he can't.He opens the door when Kripa yells.





K:Move to other side..

A:oh Sorry..

He turns to other side.

Kripa was trying to close her zip from behind when Angad came in thats why she yelled to turn around.Kripa quickly closes the zip of her kameez.

K:Angad tum knock nahi ker sakte the kya..

A:to kya tum room lock nahi ker sakti thi..

K:Angad ye mera room hai mein chahon to jo merzi karon..

A:to ye mere haath hain mein jo chahon karon meri merzi..


A:I m Angad..

K:I know..

A:If u know that don't say GOD..because i m not..

K:Angad will u please Shut ur mouth!!

A:Yeah..sure but close urs first..It smells really badly..

Kripa's mouth drop open.While Angad throws her things on the couch and jumps on her bed.

A:wow..nice room..

K:Angad..tum yahan baatein ya khelne aye hoo..

A:Nahi..Cansyment ke liye aya hon..

K:oh to niche utro..

A:Naah...Kripa u know mujeh aise room ache nahi lagte..Jan tak ye pillow wahan gira na ho..

He throws both Pillow on the floor.

A:aur ye tumhare sandles yahan ache nahi lagte jab tak ye wahan gire na hon..

He throws her sandles near the couch.Kripa was shocked at what Angad was doing.

A:aur ye cusions to yahan pare ache hi nahi lagte..

He throws them too near the door.The room almost looks messy.

K(Angrily):Kya hua ruk kyon gaye..tumhe to woh pillow wahan pare ache nahi lagte na...aur jo sheet bachi hai na woh bhi utha ker phank do..

Kripa turns around really angrily.

A(Thinks):Oh no ye meine kya ker diya...

He goes near to Kripa and taps on her shoulder.

A:Sorry i didn't mean to hurt u...dekho ab meine ye sara kamra kharab kiya hai to theek bhi mein ker deta hon..

Kripa looks at him.


K:Its ok..

A:OK to kahan se shuru karein..haan..

He start to put all the things on their place.After half an hour.

A:So ho gaya na..

K:yeah..well tum cheezen bigarne aur phir ounhe sahi jaga rakhne mein mahir ho..

A:woh to mein hon...chalo ab kaam shuru karien..

K:haan chalo..

They both sits on the bed and opens their chart on the bed.She start to look for something.

A:Kya hua kya dhond rahi ho..

K:woh pata nahi meine pencil kaha rakh di..

Angad smiles to himself.

A:Tumhari pencil tumhare baalon mein hai..

Kripa looks at her hair and smiles to herself.


They both start their work on Nasal Cavity.They opens their books and reads.Kripa was half working on the chart and half reading while Angad was just reading.

K:Angad tum kya ker rahe ho..

A:Football khel raha hon khelo gi..?

K:Haha very funny..tumhe apna Cansyment nahi karna hai..

A:wohi to ker raha hon..

Kripa just leaves him for what he was doing and does her work.At 6 o clock,Kripa looks at the clock and sees its 6.

K:oh God..time ka pata hi nahi chala..

A:oh haan..

K:chalo mera Cansyment to ho gaya..aur tumhara..

A:Yeah almost...hogaya..

K:SO kuch kha lein..

A:chalo pass hi mein restaurant hai..chalte hain..

K:haan chalo lekin pehle mein apni cheezen collect ker lon warna sari gum jayen gi.

She folds her chart and closes her books and place them at her table.She picks up all those Papers and puts them in between a book while Angad also does the same and hold them together.


K:haan chalo..

They leaves to a restaurant and eats their lunch and dinner together.Angad was forgetting that this was all a part of his challenge.

To Be Continued

Sweetz Gurl

Edited by sweetz_gurl - 06 April 2006 at 4:09pm
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LOL LOL yaaaaaay greatttt parttttttt
cont soooooooooon Clap
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great Clap Clap Clap

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Edited because of the countless emotions.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 07 April 2006 at 7:35pm
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nice part mindblowing plz continue

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